| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Title: Trujinx
Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAPPY CHRISTMAS! I was wondering when something exciting or dangerous will happen next, what about the other hunters and will we hear more about Bas's siblings, in this story or the next, and what of the other children, his cousins for example. I'm sorry I just get curious. Great write!
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Title: xD
Reviewed By: elvinah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bet ya missed me Sue? ^^ Oooh Fun chapter, it's called jealousy Sydnie ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter, will they ever be together with Sydnies pride ? :P Sue you really are a fantastic writer :)
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughing* She OWNS him? Possesses him? I can just see Bas on a leash, with Sydnie holding the end! That's what the word 'owns' brings to mind, along with some... other things... *clears throat* Well, anyways, I loved the chapter! Ass-monkey... *giggles* I love it. Yay! Thank you so much for posting the chapter. And I know I already said this, but Happy Holidays! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more chapters your write more the in love I fall with Bas and his coupling with Sydnie. They really are cute together! But I've been wondering something, hopefully you can answer it...If they become mates, what would there pups be? Bas being Inu and Sydnie being neko and all, what would their pups be? Just something that makes you go, Uhmmm? Oh, and Merry Christmas
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 08:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Purity series are just about the best stories I've read. I've laughed..cried and then Laughed again. I love it. I wait anxiously for the next chapters and stories. Thank you for the joyous reading material. HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU AND YOURS!!!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 05:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better. The N. American branch doesn't seem to have the same feud going on between the cats and the dogs as the Japanese so maybe Cain will be okay with it but I'm really looking forward to seeing Ryo or Inuyasha "have kittens" if they out what's up with those two. I don't suppose one of them could just happen to drop by for a visit? Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol!!! aqua net!!!! my sister (child of the 80s) swore by that stuff! it was the first kind of hairspray i ever used because i was like "this is the stuff my big sis uses"!! lol! oh, the weird things that stick with us... and lol!!! i love that you talked about the messed up family tree! you know that messes w/ a kid! lol! great chapter! i love that sh'es jealous! and yey for the south! with our tumbleweeds... small town charm... and.. tornadoes? well, i guess that's all we got. oh. and beef. ;) wonderful chapter!
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Title: Purity 5 Phantasm
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way Sydnie thinks, I'm gonna have to borrow that one - if a man kidnaps you, you own him! But hey my friends seem to think that I'm a little twisted any way, what can I say? I firmly believe that possession is 9/10's of the law, now to get Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru to kidnap me, ha ha. Great chapter, I can't wait for your next update, I hope it's soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 21:39 CST
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LMAO!!! This was a good chapter...How are you feeling, Sue? Are you getting better? I hope so.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 19:05 CST
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LOL She "owns" him?!?! Haha that was hillarious! REally good chapter... I quite enjoyed that. And I would say that Syd is definitely jealous... so obvious. Anyway, thanks for updating and can't wait for the next. Happy holidays.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter!! The relationship between Bas and Syd is really developing into something wonderful. Also this was like a Birthday present for me since you updated on my birthday and all...Anyway as always awesome job!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 23:45 CST
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I love this chapter. *sigh* Bas... He'll protect her. I love that moment almost more than any other. The moment when they realize. It was a great chapter Sue. Thanks for sharing it!
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs happily* The kiss... wow. So sweet. So apparently Sydnie is beginning to fall for Bas. But who wouldn't? He's really nice. Great character, Sue. Can't wait to see how their relationship will progress. Thank you so much for posting. I was hoping there would be a new chapter soon. I look forward to the next one. Thanks again! Have a good Christmas with your family!! ~Kat
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Title: Purity 5 Phantasm
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot, it's interesting the way the story is progressing. I wouldn't think that Inuyoukai would be interested in mating a Nekoyoukai. Keep up the fantasic work, I look forward to the next chapter.
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