| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bandit the Army Brat On: November 24, 2005 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy Thanks Giving to you and all your famly Sue. And I hope it is a varry,varry happy day for all. Bye.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: darkcloudsareraining On: November 24, 2005 01:25 CST
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I'm curious are Bas's younger brother and sister twins? In two different chapters you mentioned they were both 15. Was that a typo or what?
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: November 24, 2005 00:39 CST
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woot!!! Go Sydnie! I so love the character dynamics in this story. Much love to it! Happy Thanksgiving! I hope your turkey is yummy and much fun to be had.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 00:13 CST
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HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!! Haha...I love this Sydnie character!! Just the right girl for Bas haha!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 22:52 CST
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Awwwwwwww! Thank you Sue! I'm so glad that it brightened your day! The chapter? It really brightened my day! It was great! I love the tension between Bas and Syd. Syd is so fabulous. So well written! I adore her! I'm already knee deep in P-addiction, lol. My addiction is only getting worse! Ha! "Hi! My name is .... and I'm a Purity addict" I really needed the Purity fix tonight! Thank you again!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like Sydnie a lot. It seems as though you have created a whole new story line with this saga! I can't wai to see more of this wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: November 23, 2005 21:44 CST
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lol!! poor bas! that's too funny! she's just so mean to him... hehe... oh, and i never noticed that milk thing till you mentioned it! haha! the poor lil alley cat and her milk ;) she's like a stray! i can't help but feel sorry for her! even if she doesnt want the 'pity' ;) anyhow, yey for 2 sueric updates!
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Title: I like chocolate milk........
Reviewed By: melzilla On: November 23, 2005 19:54 CST
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I love this story even knowing the jist of what is gonna happen it's always so neat to see exactly how everything unfolds when you get it down on paper. I adore Sydnie she is such a unique charactor kinda different from all the other girls you've written. It will be fun seeing all the trouble she is going to be getting into and even more fun seeing her absolutly driving Bas CRAZY!!!! LOL The opening chapter of this stroy is cool sydnie is just cool. JOO ARE UBER DUBER KEWL!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ ABOUT MORE THAT IS THE HAWTNESS CALLED BAS HUNTER! I THINK I WANTS ONE FOR MY OWN!!!!!!! DO YOU RENT THEM OUT!? .......... Okay I am better now good stuff..... :)
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 23, 2005 18:35 CST
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This gets more interesting and amusing with each new chapter. I can't wait for more. Be well and stay safe this holiday weekend.
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Reviewed By: xuaeved On: November 23, 2005 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't know you started a new one! Thats what I get for not checking up regularly! I really like the whole family dynamic you set up for Bas, and so far I think the characterization of Bas and Sydnie (I hope I spelled that right) is really good. Can't wait to read more!
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Title: Heeey
Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAYYY!!!!!! LOVED IT MOORE MOORE MOORE MOORE!!! PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY SOON!!! I'M DYING TO SEE OR WELL; READ HER REACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT UPDATE BY THE WAY!!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My oh my, that was very amusing! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 15:06 CST
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Ooh... Sydnie is tricky. XD Poor Bas. She's just torturing him, isn't she? Hehe... Anyway, thanks for the update; as always it's excellent to see that little notice in my inbox. ^_^ Here's hoping you and your family have a wonderful Thanksgiving, Sue.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 11:55 CST
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Shesh, Bas' hands sure are full haha! I'm enjoying seeing him chasing her...like they say: dogs always chase cats! HAHA!!!! Hmm...I wonder if she'll try to escape later......probably, lol!
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