| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: November 22, 2005 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol! i love how she gets under his skin!! that's great! haha! what will she say to cain? will he get the truth out of her? oh!! i can't wait till tomorrow! for the next chapter!! :D
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Title: The size of Maine
Reviewed By: Fairia13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Catty little bitch... I like her! She'sgonna twist him up in knots so quick he won't know what hit him. However, her pride is probably a lot bigger then Maine. Sure it will fit?
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 19:01 CST
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wooo.....I am so loving this story so far. Bas seems like a pretty cool puppy! Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Pyth On: November 20, 2005 16:24 CST
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I love this story, for this simple fact - Sebastion and Evan are my two favourite boys names. Ever. And after I read the next chapters, I'll probably love it more. :P
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Title: Always something new
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe how cute. lol. no im not that sentimental. neways. good chapter, very well written. update soon. i always enjoy your stories. one question though , how many purities will there be? if everyones kids has kids who has kids who have a journey to go through to find their mate. lmao. that was a finny comment but seriously i'd really like to know. i t must take a hella lot of skill to wrote so many continuations but never actually repeating the story. i mean even though its all about finding your mate no two purity stories are ever the same. and thats what i love about your stories. they are original but never duplicated.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 20:15 CST
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Bas the Purse-snatcher has a nice ring to it haha! Hmm...I wonder how far in their travels they will get to tomorrow; I wonder if he'll have to handcuff her again to get her to follow him...as always: wonderful chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: November 19, 2005 18:44 CST
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ooh, i like this. it's different. 'edgier' , to steal my brother's phrasing. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 19, 2005 18:32 CST
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Poor thing.
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Title: The First Night
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the interaction between Bas and Sydnie. I am beginning to see something starting between them. Thank you for the fast update! Take care.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: November 19, 2005 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol... 'mee-ow'... too cute. ;) and that was so nice of him to buy her food! aww! so, what's she so freaked out about? is someone else after her? or is she just not used to being in a room alone w/ a guy.. she said that apts were just cages... and i can't wait till bas brings her to see cain! ...if bas can get her there... ;)
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a great beginning to another great fic! I can't wait to see what happens next. (I am starting to see something between these two.)
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Reviewed By: OrionLady(backwards) On: November 19, 2005 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm assuming that Cain desided to have kids after all... I was suprised to see a Purity 5 but very glad. I love your charaters and its nice to see how things contiue.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 08:37 CST
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Ooh, they're starting to get to know each other... This is getting really good, really fast. Thanks, Sue. ^_^
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: November 19, 2005 07:40 CST
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I remember at some point a some character who was poked with the "curiosity killed the cat" statement they replied with "and satisfaction brought it back" and I wasn't sure if you had ever heard that and figured with a whole new cat character to play with it may or may not come in handy. I also wanted to say that I am actually surprised that the Carl Richardson (hope I am spelling that right) character has survived the last 15 years to only get killed now. I was under the misguided impression that he was going to do something untoward to Gin and give Cain an excuse to rip him a new one. The better to build another plot on? ;) Well I am waiting with baited breath for your next installment of either story and just wanted to give my applause. I don't comment as often anymore because your writing is so consistently good that I am left just sighing. Again, thank you for sharing your works!
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