| "A Star to Steer By" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 21:29 CDT
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hmm i wonder whose eyes Ran can get so psycho about :P about time you started writing again...now go update forever or i'll sic bly on you
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: June 10, 2006 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Fetter the farf! Love it! About damn time KD! Worth the wait though, so I'll just pray the next one comes sooner - for sake of my teetering sanity and all! I hope we get some Pirate RanxYohji lime soon too!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 11:40 CDT
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*sniff, tear* I didn't want Ran to kill anybody! Wah!!! Glad Yohji took some action so he no longer looks like such a pansy! Maybe he'll be able to calm Ran down a little when they get back to their cabin...*wink*
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: June 10, 2006 10:51 CDT
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Whee! So glad you updated. Finally. Loved "Fetter the Farf". Too hysterical.
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Reviewed By: batexp On: June 08, 2006 01:04 CDT
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I miss your fics please write more soon this one is great for faun reading
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Title: avast!!!
Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 11:31 CDT
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pirate fic ahoy!!! (cue pirate song: "yo ho ho and a bottle of rum...") this is something i've never gotten around to doing but definitely have been thinking of doing. damn, you got to it first, and i may as well settle with being as green as Yohji (though not because of a queesy stomach, but rather a hint of envy -i can almost smell the pirate stench and taste the rum-) because i would never have done it as well as you do. My, aren't those pirate exceptionally lecherous and scurvy? and haha, a former pearl diver gone too deep was a touch of brilliance! i just couldn't follow the ran storyline though, somehow i feel something must be divined right about this time, i just can't, probably because i'm doggone tired but still up (that doesn't mean i can't enjoy your fic though). there were some sentences that i have to reread, and the starting scenes were confusing at first, but again i attribute it to my being tired and up late. the last chapter was particulary splendid and distinctly pirate-y, kudos! i felt the barefooted apprehension of a deck of pirates ready to jump board amidst treacherous waters hidden in fog.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a delicious story. You sweep us into the story and into an exciting plot with intriguing depths to the characters, yet make it all seem effortless. It is hard to wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre : ) On: March 06, 2006 05:42 CST
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Hehehe...yep some parts of Ran definately like Yohji. He sounds a mite possessive huh? Sounds like Yohji almost melted when he called him his. I would say hurry up and update, but I'm not sure if that kinda request speeds the update along or not. Oh well for old timesake - Hurry up and update! I'm lovin it.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: March 04, 2006 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good chapter... especially the beginning lol. Keep the chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: Lodrelhai On: March 04, 2006 07:06 CST
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This chapter is FAR too creepy to read this early in the morning! I'm never getting to sleep now... nicely done!
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Reviewed By: mm-c On: March 03, 2006 21:49 CST
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i feel so sorry for poor yotan, he's in a tight spot...going against the king...
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: March 03, 2006 21:15 CST
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Marvelous as always, darling. Very interested to see what will happen next on this little voyage.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 20:59 CST
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This chapter makes me a little sad. It's nice that Ran is watching out for Yohji, both physically and psychologically, but there is still so much distance between them. If Yohji has to be grateful for the fog to shield himself from Ran's actions, what hope can he have that they'd ever come to truly see and accept one another? I'm anxious to see where this goes and how this particular issue is addressed and resolved! I do so love this story! (And it's writer!)
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Reviewed By: red queen On: March 03, 2006 20:55 CST
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awww, farf and aya leaping together into vicious bloody slaughter...kissing madly over the carnage, blood-slick hands sliding into each other's... oh, that wasn't in there, was it? hee... i loved aya sticking his wood on yohji's bum. and what is stairs' deal? does he just like to toy with people, or is he just a nutter? or both? all the navigating info was interesting, too. great chapter, if a liiiiiittle short.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 05:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great plot. Aya and Yohji are terribly in character. I liked the bit about Yohji being an 8 year old wastrel rogue. Brilliant dialogue!
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