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| "A Star to Steer By" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 20:46 CST
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You know, I didn't want to read this at first because I didn't think I could go there - you know, to the pirate place. But then I figured you probably knew what you were doing, so I read it anyway. And yes, I was wrong, wrong, wrong (I figured that out immediately, by the way; didn't take the entire fic). It's a very funny, sexy, engaging story, enjoyable in every way. Yoji is hilarious (and sexy) as a captured noble who's hot for pirate; and Ran is mysterious and compelling (and sexy) in his role. The clues to the backstory are also nicely laid (as it were). Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: A Star To Steer By 8
Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: December 04, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, a kiss!!! Exciting and long-awaited, and certainly welcome, but the jewel of this chapter is the nugget of information about why Ran is out sailing the high seas in a flambouyant pirate hat. Aya-chan, of course! Why didn't I see that coming? I was not a happy camper to have to wait so long for an update, but you certainly didn't disappoint! As always, your writing is clear, humour-laced, and fast moving. I don't know if the Captain wants to separate Ran and Yohji, now he's heard of their kiss, but I hope not. I'm looking forward to seeing what 'pops up' when the fated pair return to the privacy of their cabin. O Mama, I hope the powder room isn't close by. Regardless of when they get it on--they are going to get it on, right?--you are still one of my favourite writers and your stories are always so enjoyable to read! Sorry about the RL stuff, I hope things are better now. Bless you and your speed typing fingers.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The descriptions alone are intoxicating. Dashes of humor, angst, and revelations are mixed perfectly. You are, of course, forgiven -- rereading this and your other stories has helped tide me over in the interum. The ending, however, please come back soon and let us know why Captain Stairs wants to see the both of them -- and then there is that interrupted expectation . . . .
| Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 11:25 CST
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You know, just the other day I was thinking about this fic, and wishing there were more. You have no idea how giddy I was to see you've updated. You really have combined two of my favorite things with this--YxA and pirates. And there's a delightfully psychotic Farfarello, so I suppose you've combined three of my favorite things. Anyway~ So they've kissed, at last! But I agree with Yohji--damn that Stairs. Mutany! MUTANY!! Ran can take 'im!
| Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 09:16 CST
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Lol great fic! I hope you update soon though!
| Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: December 04, 2006 05:18 CST
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That delicious piece of YoujiRan action made up for the ending, though I was cursing along with Youji!
| Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 04:51 CST
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Yummy! I already thought Yohji was going to have to wait a while before he gets any action, so the stopping point didn't bother me too much. Intrigued by Yohji's background!
| Reviewed By: soxy On: December 04, 2006 00:27 CST
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You are positively evil! How could you just end it there....? Well I hope that next chapter shows up a little sooner or I may go crazy with want over this story.
| Reviewed By: MajaLi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 20:26 CST
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Waaiiiii! *GLOMP* I'd very nearly given up on this one, and then out of the blue--you are a GODDESS!!!!! *runs off to read (again and again and again...)* Love your stuff, as always! ~M-chan
| Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 19:01 CST
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You little tease! I was getting right into that kiss, and then you...you...argh! *sniffle* How could you do that to us desperate readers?! ...well, I'm desperate:)
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: December 03, 2006 15:30 CST
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Woot! Okay, so where's the rest of the lemony goodness? And where's my next chapter of Chaos? Oh, this was quite good btw. ~grin~ Spam code is GLMP, too funny.
| Reviewed By: MajaLi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 19:29 CDT
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WAIIIIII!!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! I totally love all your stories but this one is my absolute favorite (except for Chaos Came Early, but this is my favorite AxY one, I have a weakness for good AU) and I was starting to think it was just going to sit here forever, not that I could criticize because let's face it, you've done a mind-boggling amount of amazing work and you're really, REALLY good about updating but summer hols FINALLY started today and I got home after a ridiculously long orchestra rehearsal, and logged on, and HERE THIS WAS and you just made my SUMMER thank you SO MUCH!!!!!!!! ~Maja
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray for your return! I loved Ran with the mighty iron frying pan, swift perception of Yohji's plight and thoughtful action to protect him. Poor Ran and his mother. I trust you for a happy ending at some point (a point I'm in no hurry to see you reach. I love all your stories and this one just hits all delightful notes). Farf singing "that" song just had to happen at some point.
| Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 07:40 CDT
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Squee! You do such a brilliant job of showing how easy it is for Yohji to get into trouble. I guess it's easy to get into trouble on a pirate ship, but Yohji only has a limited amount of prudence. He's so adorable. And Ran is kicking ass! Farf is perfectly disturbing too. Such a good chapter; pirate action and a bit of angst regarding Yohji's treasonous presence. I would say that I can't wait for the lemon (I LOVE your lemons) but the story is so interesting that I forget to be impatient for the lemon. Oh, and the skillet was a brilliant touch. Effective Ran. By the way, I probably account for 4 hits on this chapter, unless mediaminer is smart about filtering them out.
| Title: Cookies!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: June 10, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was kinda short.. but WONDERFUL!!! ^_^ Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Loved it! More yamyams if you udpate soon!
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