| "Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 19:51 CDT
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I love the twits you keep throwing at us, it only makes me want to keep reading and find out what happened those 500 years ago.
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Title: Blue
Reviewed By: Frau On: April 03, 2006 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great premise, good pacing and well-drawn characters. You hold close to the original characters personalities which makes the story very enjoyable and quite believeable. I'm enjoying it immensely, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Silverskies906 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! So many cliffhangers but i hate to say thats what makes it interesting. Me and your story have a love hate relationship. i love it, it hates me. i love reading this story. usually i only like to read finished stories cuz i hate having to wait, it kills me, but for yours i dont really mind. anyway my computer lies to me its evil! it says you have updated it when you have it just to get my hopes up, then says you haven't so i dont read it. EVIL! so now i go through it just to make sure. that is how dedicated i am. anyway i love your story plz oh plz update more the suspence is killing me!! I loved this chapter i was thinking 'dammnit if inuyasha doesnt cry i swer i will!' he didnt i did, well on the inside orelse my bro would have told me i was crazy. not that hee doesnt do that already but you know. UPDATE! plz do it be for i die of worry and curiosity.
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Reviewed By: glass fruit On: April 02, 2006 17:23 CDT
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What did Kag witness that turned her so cynical? You have definitely stirred curiosity my curiousity
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: April 02, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They have to end up together cause thats destiny. Please update.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Interesting concept, I really enjoyed reading the chapters you've posted already. The last chapter (chp. 11) was by far the best, it had my heart thumping and my stomach fill with anxiety.. I love reading stories that get you really involved with what is happening. Especially as it caused quite a stir with all your other readers/reviewers. lol Your latest chapter was also very well written; I love the angst, Kagome's/Inuyasha's thoughts were what made this chapter work for me. Well done, and please do continue.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 14:50 CDT
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*eyes wide*... so angst! I loved it though, you're a great writter, you must feel really great that you've done only 12 chapter and have 83 reviews. Well, 84 now. I can't wait until Kagome and InuYasha meet, I'm still confused over how they parted, but that's okay. I still love the story. Keep it up and update faster! You've got fans waiting! ^_^
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Title: dark hanyou
Reviewed By: dark hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg what a amazing story the besy one i ever read. i y were u holding out in the chaps stop that keeping posting them and when is inuyasha going to meet kagome????
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Reviewed By: kitten meru On: April 02, 2006 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i LOVED it! it didn't cover much, but i still loved it!!! keep it up, and next time don't be evil! AAH! (by the way, nice scfeen name, peacefrog, peace frog is so cute!)
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was wishing for an update, and you updated! ^-^This was a wonderful chapter. Truly brilliant. I was moved by the way that you brought out both Kagome and Inuyasha's emotions. I was so very deeply touched by the sadness of the whole thing that I'm now incredibly depressed, and I therefore demand that you update before I implode. Pleeease? I would tell you to stop killing me with the suspense, but I suppose that's something that I can't really request of an author. XP Ah, so keep up the great work and stuff!
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Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS! EVIL CLIFF HANGERS! This story is very good, please continue with your work, you have a few minor spelling errors, but nothing to evil.WORK YOUR BUTT OF AND FINISH THIS THING OR I WILL SELF-DESTRUCT!
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Reviewed By: ezaangel(not signed in) On: March 24, 2006 06:57 CST
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AWWWW YOU LIL i won't say the rest of that sentence,how could you finish it there. UPDATE NOW I COMMAND YOU,damn thats not going to work (duh) joking anyways great chapter cant wait till next
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kitten meru (not signed in) On: March 22, 2006 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE SO EVIL! that was the worst cliffy ever! how could you DO this to us!! update NOW PLEASE IT'S SUCH A GOOD STORY! please please please... PLEASE! love ya u r such a good author! AAHH! UPDATE!
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Title: NOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: midnight_snack On: March 22, 2006 11:31 CST
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YOU ARE HORRIBLE what a cliffhanger lol YOU MUST UPDATE NOW when i saw the end of the page i went crazy i almost thought my computer was lying to me O.o hurry my sanity is at stake
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Reviewed By: SilvR_Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I FUCKING LOVE YOU BRITTNEY!!! This is BY FAR the single best fanfic I have EVER read!! BTW, i finally got word, so I can do the editing you wanted! Keep writing! Love how it's going!
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