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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Chapter, I like the whole Miroku and Sango thing in this chapter, that was funny. I love it whrn Sango goes off on him during her latbor stage.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is....WOW. Your character development is so RICH in this story. Kagome's lingering problems as a formerly abused spouse are so realistic. So are Taro's reactions to his mother's pain as a witness to his mother's abuse all these years. It is just so SAD, the whole thing. And Inuyasha....I can't say enough about how wonderful he is in this story. He's so strong yet so emotionally OPEN at the same time. It's like the years he was without Kagome robbed him of his ability to let pride keep him from what he so desperately needs...a very good change. But, as wonderful as he is, he definitely isn't perfect as the most recent scene proves. That, too, is great. Too good to be true is a cliche for a reason. In case you can't tell, I'm absolutely LOVING this story, LOL. I look forward to the next update. Great job.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 27, 2006 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello and what a chapter this is!! Thank you Literary Goddess!!!! AThank you!! This is Awesome!! And baka Shippo thinking the worst of Inuyasha that he'd use her like that. And Kudos to Kagome for standing up for Inuyasha against Shippo. I like the idea of a cowed Miroku when it comes to Sango. That was a fun twist!! How exactly did Kagome know the Jewel and InuTaro were one in the same? Was it because of her talents/ablities? Or was it when he was born he gave off the same aura as the jewel did? I liked the love scene it was really nice and tender. Poor Kagome.. this time it was she who rained on the moment. That creep of an ex husband really did a number on her. He must have been nasty when he abused her for her to be so very timid and insecure around Inuyasha and lovemaking. It is going to take time for her to heal but I'm sure Inuyasha is more than willing to take the challenge. I think that Kagome will be slowly finding herself again as Inuyasha continues to unconditionally love her. Can't wait to see them have a fight and get that fiery part back into their lives and back into Kagome. Inuyasha may possibly know a little of how Kagome feels about Kikyo and her legacy. Though I didn't fully understand the final part of the bonding. And will Taro ever let it slip out that he heard the creep and Kagome when he was hurting her? This is one powerfully charged story that is evolving and boy do I ever thrill to read it!! I loved how you have kept the characters true. Totally Awesome!!! I can't wait to see how Koga is going to react to all this.. Wondering if a little inu Hellian will gnaw on wolf ankles will be in future chapters... Please keep up the most excellent and Awesome work!! Kudos!! Bravo and WHoot!!!!! You totally rock!! Eagerly awaiting the next installment!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 25, 2006 20:38 EDT
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a new chapter! woo! aw, i love how innocent taro is. just wanting his mother to be happy. eh... a tall shippou, what a shocker. i hope they eventually have another kid...? hmm? yes? ah well, please update soon. i can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 23:44 EDT
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I look forward to more of it. Taro is so sweet, I am really looking forward to finding out more about his abilities.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:21 EDT
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I'm not sure I got the lemon. Was it anal? Because if Kagome and you hadn't made a big deal about it being unconventional I would have assumed it was vaginal from the description.
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:24 EDT
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Aw, I love your fanfic. InuTaro seems so adorable and smart...the lemons aren't half bad either. Do update again soon!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 23, 2006 16:26 EDT
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you made me cry! yes, i have trouble handling even the teeny tiniest bit of angst without tearing up. that bastard really did a number on kagome's confidence and i really like how you have both her and inuyasha struggling to deal with it. she's become timid and his normal blunt manner almost seems to frighten her. especially if she was willing to go back to the shrine and leave their son with inuyasha. i have a feeling the bastard liked to be incharge and that was that. if he didn't get off first then no good, out the door, he was going to find someone who would fix that for him. inuyasha and kags have a long way to go to get back everything they've missed over the years but they have their friends and a cute little koinu to help with the rough parts. a joy. i'll be watching for your next update.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 16, 2006 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the chapter Literary Goddess. It was beautiful blend of emoitions. So I will first off start with the cheers: Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Alright!! Kudos!! Bravissimo!! Bravissimo!! Magnifico!! Another awesome chapter brought to us the reader by you!! Hands over several large boxes of virtual Pocky!!! The love scene was so tender and heart warming. The line were Inuyasha said he was finally home that had me with tears. And Kagome's exploration of the home was fun and delightfully fresh. I was saddened when Taro getting verbally abused now. And from another child.. how cruel. I wonder if Kagome will have anything to say to the villagers about this? Though I really felt you did an above the call of writing when you had Inuyasha talk to Taro about why he was called a freak and Kagome a 'W....' I loved the explaination Inuyasha gave Taro as to why it wasn't true by using Kagome's love and her family as an example and then Taro using the world as an example back. I am never ceased to be amazed as to your skills and your talent with writing these stories!! That was so in character with Inuyasha. I was a little confused in the love scene. Did she tell Inuyasha what occured or will she tell him when she is ready? I loved the teasing and interaction with Inuyasha, Kagome, Taro and Kaede. It was so much fun. little typo happened there.. You had accidently turned Taro from a little boy into a little girl with the name Tara. I really am thrilled with this latest story of yours!! This is so filled and excellently blended with such a wide range of feeelings and genres that you have painted a masterpiece!!! Thank you for writing the story!! Thank you for posting and sharing the story with us!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! You Totally Rock!! and I can't wait for the next installment to come out!!
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 15, 2006 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww... how utterly adorable! i love it. poor kid... having to witness all that shit. i love sad stories that end happily. i'm so excited. i can't wait to read more.
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Chapter. Good to see that you are working on this story again. I loved how you made Inuyasha talk to his son. That was so sweet. Keep it up, great job.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Emrald of My Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! You updated. This is a very good chapter, I'm going to have to re-read if from the beginning to get a better grip on everything that has occured even though I can remember some of it. I look forward to your next installment! -EOMH
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 09, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!! So moving!! So full of mixed emotions and action!! Welcome back Literary Goddess!! What a wonderful chapter you brought with you!! Kudos!! Whoot! Whoot! It was beautiful and masterfully written. I really enjoyed how you protrayed little Taro in the court. It was so honest and true to life. I was very happy to see that you chose not to have the questioning from the opposition to be cruel with Taro. Thank you for having them be respectful to Taro. I wonder though with a cowardly man like 'him' if he will try something else to hurt Kagome and Taro? After all.. he just had his manliness shot down not once but twice and in public (court system). Will he strike back out of revenge? ** sighs..** okay, caught me.. wanna see Inu kick his butt. I really liked how you had written the scence all together. Amazing! Thought with Inuyasha going off to ready the house I can easily see on little Taro's face Inuyasha's infamous and adsolutely adorable scowling pout. I thought you really keep such a fullness to his character when he realized Inuyasha was gone and had a realistic reaction. I am truly am inspired and in awe of your talents!! I also enjoyed the fact you added some background in regards to Kagome's grandfather. You marvelously built up his character with this. I liked it when he apologized to all of them. I could honestly see him respond the way he did. I was furious with him for demanding Kagome to have an abortion and rallied along with Kagome as she stood against him. Thankfully it didn't happen and that he realized the error in time. I wonder what kind of obstacles and trouble they will have when they all finally move into their home. Of course that totally denser than physically possible to a rock Koga will make an unwanted appearance.. wonder what InuTaro will do? Can't wait!! This is a wonderfully and touching story that is blossoming delightfully before us. Please keep up the most excellent work!! Thank you for sharing this story with us!!! Thank you for writing this story and the others and thank you!!! Kudos!!! You Totally Rock!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: Love this story too
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to read this new story once you've finished "Emergence". I must tell you that you didn't dissapoint me! You are up with another great story. It amazed me your ability f/new plots! Of course, I'm thrilled to see what you have in storage f/us. Congratulations!! Mage
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Title: InuGoddess715
Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is an EXCELLENT story. Absolutely brilliant. I just found it tonight,and even though I have to work tomorrow (and at least an hour of preparation for work before I can go to sleep), I just could not stop until I was completely caught up with this story. It was just too good. It was just....sweet! Kagome and InuTaro's lives with her bastard of a husband were just heartbreaking. And when Taro kept apologizing for leaving toys on the floor as any child would do....oh, it just broke your heart. And I can't say enough about how wonderfully Inuyasha is depicted here. Talk about heroic, honorable....and, yes, just downright SEXY. This is a total ACE of a story, and I can't wait to read the next update. Great job.
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