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Reviewed By: Kristen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 09:44 EDT
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I'm glad to see you updated and reunited InuTaro and Kagome. I hope at some point you let us know if and how Taro's messages from the other side affected those he gave them to, especially Sesshoumaru. Also, I'm glad you left the friction and tension between Kagome and Inuyasha in the story and didn't have it magically disappear. Allowing them to work through their problems will make their relationship stronger and help them rediscover each other. Good chapter and I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is adorable. I really like how you're letting us get a glimpse of these characters' REAL life situations instead of just focusing on the battle scenes. It is good to see how they interact as a family and to see them accept that things won't be the same since five years have passed. For better or worse, they are different people. I LOVE stories that do this. Too many are like fairytales with everything all hunky dory all the time. This story is the perfect combination of fluff and realism. I can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 18, 2006 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing as always! I started reading this story on AFF and what do you know? I found it again today!! I'm so glad that I found your works again, I loved and enjoyed every one of your stories. Of course, back then I was 'Lithium88'. I'm glad to have the honor of reviewing your stories once again! Awesome job, please update soon! :D -selenide
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Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! I really like how everything's played out so far. I hope you'll update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, There was a few things that I cought in your spelling but nothing major. Great job non-the-less. keep up the good work. Hope you post again soon.
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Reviewed By: Emrald of My Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH THAT WAS SO SCARY! I almost cried :( that made me really sad..I am quite relieved that Taro is safe and Sesshoumaru is thinking more thouroughly about his and Inuyasha's "brotherly" relationship(?) Please update! I hope Inu & Kagome's problems get sorted through and other things. But my current guess is that now, since Inu killed Kagome's ex the police are going to hold and investigation, say that Inu is a suspect and possibly find out that he's hanyou or has weird genetics? After all, wasn't the first time the ever met him when he was human? And Taro was wearing the concealment spell..? Anyway, you have a godgiven talent, please continue to update this story! It is quite impressive!!! -EOMH
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Title: Yay! A new Chap!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I was soooo scared for Taro! What a great twist on Inuyasha's mother's story, I don't think I've ever read that one before. Thanks for updating! I love your story! =D
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: The goddess Rhiannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's great. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: rolling eyes On: June 02, 2006 01:32 EDT
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Okay so from what I gathered Kikyo only gave Inuyasha head and that's it right? Does he realize that she is still made up of bones and dirt? That is really gross I thought Kikyo would have been killed by now. Wishful thinking on my part. She is living off of borrowed souls meaning she is devouring innocent maiden's souls. As a gift to Kagome it would be nice for him to kill Kikyo and restore the stolen portion of Kagome's soul that Kikyo possesses. I really abhore Kikyo!
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Reviewed By: growling On: June 02, 2006 01:14 EDT
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I am so relieved Taro is alive, buy I am pissed off at Inuyasha. I am kikind of confused about something that Seshoumaru said, he hinted thta a mate is supposed to be loyal, so if Kagome was Inuyasha's mate doesn't that mean Inuyasha went against youkai laws when he....urgh had sex with Kikyo(nasty). How could he ever do that and with Kikyo! He knows Kagome always had a problem with her, and especially now after she learned about this new development. I mean come on, he did it with Kagome and Kikyo in the same day!? I really hope Kagome does not forgive Inuyasha that easily,. And I hope she doesn't forgive Kikyo as well, Kagome had a knack for forgiving them about any encounter they had. Anf if Kikyo is a miko shouldn't she know about youkai laws? How could she ask Inuyasha to have sex with her? She is still despicable, loves the idea of hurting Kagome, and I really hope she does not remain happy in that village of hers. You just know she is appearing to cause trouble for Inuyasha.It is too much of a coincidence for her to appear just when Kagome reappears, and to meet up with Inuyasha when Kagome is sleeping....hmm that really makes you think.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:46 EDT
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excellent. Sesshou was right in character. Act obnoxious, but then listen to Tenseiga. I'm not in the least surprised Kagome said nothing about Inuyasha taking the ex away and killing him. He **murdered her son. Even the most peace loving mother would be happy to see him die, esp. coming right after she discovered her son and her grief and blood were still white hot. Personally, I would have liked to have seen the ex given a personal tour of some of the more interesting creatures in the sengoku.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I figured that ketsu would be back to bother Kagome, just didnt know as to when. Still makes me wonder how he got into the shrine to begin with. But doing what he did to Taro was a bit of blow there. Didn't see that one coming at all. But ya gotta love Inu justice. And Kagome didnt say anything to Inu when he took her ex and done away with him, kinda thought she would in a way, knowing how she is about killing. And Sessh has some thinking to do now. Ah well. Excellent chapter tho. Loved it. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 01, 2006 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. Literary Goddess. Wow. Swiftly gets into her chest waders and then wades through the hip deep Angst to reach her computer to write review... My what a huge cliffie you gave us.. How did Sesshoumaru know that Taro was with spiritual powers? Was it because he thought Inuyasha had a child with Kikyou? And what rock has been shoved up his butt. Does he ever love to hurt others. Just like Naraku. And what is this with Kikyo!! Baka Yasha!!! And to hear it from Sesshoumaru. Now all that self confidence that Kagome had just re-established and the sense of security she had with Inuyasha wanting her and only her has been shot to hell. Now she will be always wondering the new ways Inuyasha will be comparing the two of them. I wonder if she'll ask him or point out this when he attempts to touch her in an intimate way. She should let him know just how this is not helping her especially after having an abusive marriage for 5 years. Perphaps a few good hard Osuwaris. Poor Kagome... always seeming to come up the last in just about everything with exception of Taro. How did that (insert swearing) jerk get into the Shrine house? Taro!! Oh my god!! Poor Taro!! I thought my breathing would stop when I read he was murdered!! I knew that monster would be back and getting revenge!! Little jealous though wanted to read about what Inuyasha did to the creep who killed Taro and attempted to rape Kagome. Though I think its better this way.. the readers can create their own wonderful justice served butt kicking session. And can send we ask for a large rolled up newspaper for Sesshoumaru!! How awful and cruel can he be. But then you have kept him true to character. Thank you for having him use the Tensaiga and bring back Taro. I was at first confused as to why Taro died so readily it seemed and then I remembered that Inuyasha grew up struggling and fighting and surviving whereas Taro had his mother to protect him and probably didn't/ hasn't developed the survival skill as deeply and thoroughly as Inuyasha had when the same age. I also liked the twist you added about Izayoi. I feel the same was. That she could very well be Sesshoumaru's mother reincarnation. And Kagome is not going to be pretty lax with Inuyasha is she after this trouble with Kikyou. Their lovemaking could be tainted with the thoughts of 'was Kikyou better' like Kagome always feels that she is. Again poor Kagome.. Never can win when it comes to Kikyou. I wonder what will Inuyasha do to prove it to Kagome that he LOVES her and not her Kikyou like looks. I eagerly await the next chapter with my butt on the edge of the seat and holding my breath!! You Totally Rock!!! Love this story!! Awesome!!! Kudos!! Wow!! and Gasp!! Heart pounding Action!!! Thank you for sharing this story with us!! Please keep up the most excellent and awesome work!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That was a great chapter. I was so scared about Taro; I'm so glad he's okay. But Sesshomaru....I can't wait to see how he's going to react to this new information about his mother and father. Or, how he reacts when he is forced to acknowledge his own terrible actions towards his younger brother over the years, especially now that he sees how truly unjustified he was in those actions. His actions were ALWAYS unjustified; no child deserves to be mistreated and scorned the way Inuyasha was. But, now Sessh will have to accept that Inuyasha was the product of essentially the same union that he was. If anyone has been a disgrace to the family, it's HIM. That is going to be a bitter pill for the demon lord to swallow. And I am so glad that Inuyasha finally took out that despicable bastard that Kagome had married. After murdering a child, that asshole wasn't fit to breathe. Great chapter and great story. I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Please Update Soon!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! Another story! It's defenitely going in my favorites. I really like the way that you stayed realistic in your writing and didn't make it seem as if Inuyasha and Kagome automatically had a perfect relationship after such a long time apart. While they understand each other they still have to work through their hardships like any other couple does. I really like your style of writing and I like how you keep your characters true to their nature. I also love Taro! What a great personality, a good mix of Kagome's level headedness and Inuyasha's loyalty. Thanks for writing this! =D
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