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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 00:41 CST
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It's good to know that there was a good reason for the lack of updates. :3 I was beginning to think you'd forgotten! However, this chapter HAS to have been my favorite. Good luck with all of your projects and schoolwork! I hope to see another update from you soon!
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Avarwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, when I saw this fic I was thinking "Uh-oh, here we go, another Ed gets dropped into the Harry Potter world fic." But it wasn't. It actually has a fairly believable plot overall, not to mention for Ed going to that world. The characters are all brilliant, by the way! It's hard to get characters to stay in character for one fandom, but here you've got a bunch of mix and matched characters from two different fandoms and you've completely mastered their personalities. I loved Ed's reaction to the transfiguration-- I was just waiting for him to explode about something involving magic (that wasn't height-related), and I'm really pleased with the option you picked. I never even really thought about how he might connect it to Nina until you pointed it out. I was a little disappointed when I noticed how far apart the updates were, but that, so far, has been the only upset that I've found in this story. That, and you keep ENDING the chapters! I would finish reading one and couldn't get to the next one fast enough! : D Clearly the time you take between updates is good, though, because the quality of chapters has yet to falter even in the slightest. Still, can't wait for the next one to come out! : D
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Reviewed By: SparkieGoesHuzzah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:45 CST
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! When I saw that you updated I screamed and nearly peed myself! xD
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Reviewed By: paytotheorderof On: November 28, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! i love this story, and i just finished w/ 'Changes'. AGH I NEED MORE!Font Color
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Reviewed By: chopsuey On: November 20, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHHHHH FANTASTIC!!!!! please for the love of God right more!!!!
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: November 19, 2006 22:12 CST
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I know I'm probably going to get told where I can shove my idea, but wouldn't it be deliciously ironic if Voldemort's evil plan number whatever was thwarted by Ed, in such a manner that Al was brought back? Or if the sorcerer's stone was capable of bringing Al back? Maybe I'm just stuck on poor Al, but really, can you blame me? I'm going to hide now, before I get my ideas shoved somewhere unpleasant. Bye!
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: November 19, 2006 21:43 CST
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You killed Al? How could you? *hides in a corner and cries* I hope you will be bringing him back. I'll read more and find out.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 11:51 CST
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It's been forever since you updated! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now, I'm more of a silent reader, but I hope that you will update soon- this is one of my favorite fanfictions, and I re-read it often. I hope you'll add a new chapter for me to read soon! Good luck with any and all writer's block!
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Reviewed By: icic On: November 07, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YES IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!!!! i'm begging to god himself for u to write more...ur story is so addicting... =X= my brain hurts...
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Reviewed By: Twinny On: September 16, 2006 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the story!! The story was excellent!! Everything was just right; the grammer, the character's personality, the humors/comedy and passion. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more chapters. -squeal loudly-
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 02:20 CDT
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I realize that producing quality material requires patience and I'd prefer that you take your time and write something really outstanding rather than rush through and put out ten pages of unorganized drivel. But this is ridiculous, you've had me at the edge of my seat for over a month now. So I've decided that I'm going to bug the hell out of you until you start updating regularly again. Maybe a few weeks of having an Inbox full of "Review Alerts" will get those creative juices flowing...
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Reviewed By: SparkieGoesHuzzah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:52 CDT
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i'm getting worried. i hope you're not going to stop with such a great fanfic.
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Reviewed By: SnowFlakeAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 10:16 CDT
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Wow this is such a great story! You made the cross-over REALLY believable, and left us all hanging waitin for more. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Sugarpony! What's going on? You haven't updated in weeks! Please don't tell me you've given up on this one. Being able to read a really good fic cover to cover is such a rare pleasure. If you're concerned by lack of reviews, don't be. You've got at least one loyal fan still waiting to hear what happens next.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you're not waiting for a certain number of reviews before you plan on updating again. As you said, it was a transitional chapter in which little actually happened. The bulk of your fans may be waiting for some substantial plot advancement before they leave a comment. Anyway, happy writing!
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