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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 10:55 CST
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Hey, I have been reading your story for a while now, but never actually reviewed. I love your style of writing, and I love the story... you really understand how to develop a story and leave your readers hanging. Please continue to write, I can't wait for the next update! One thing- when you misplace something, you lose it, not loose it. "Loose" is what your tooth is when you're eight, or what a girl is when she sleeps around.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:42 CST
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Keep on going! It's great so far. I so knew Sesshoumaru wasn't going to be happy when Inuyasha showed up. Anyways I love it the story and I really want you to keep it up.
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* I knew that Sess wouldn't be happy. I'm surprised that the sorceress was even able to manipulate him into taking Inuyasha. Maybe he does feel a smidgen of guilt, ne? Hehe. Loved the chapter. Can't wait to see him trying to pry information from a hanyou that could barely remember his name just a few days before. LOL I anxiously await the next chapter. Snow
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Title: Chappie 39
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love the fire horses even more than I did before. Too cool. And they saved Inuyasha! I'm glad that he is regaining some of his usual characteristics. Now to see just what Sesshoumaru thinks of this whole scene. Oh, I can just imagine him trying to kill both Inuyasha and the witch! Off to the next chappie! Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, to my eternal shame, I have been a bad reader for not reviewing. Sometimes, I am not enamoured with a fic until something that I consider very exciting happens. However, I just wanted to let you know that this is a very well written fic and I have especially enjoyed the last few chapters. I was touched by Inu's predicament. Kikyou is just plain creepy. Can't stand her. Playing on everyone's fondness of Miroku was a great idea. I am curious about Naraku's attachment to Inuyasha. Perhaps I missed that explanation. Amaya is an awesome character. I don't typically read author's notes, so I don't know if she is an OC. If so, you've done an excellent job. I am not surprised that Sesshoumaru accepted his arm as it didn't appear to have been misused. I believe that he didn't accept it in the movie because it was being used by he spectre of the man involved in his father's death. It was tainted. The circumstances are different here. I don't usually read fics that aren't rated X. Actually, I never do, but this one caught my interest. Um, hope I'm not getting confused about the rating. Anyways, what can I say? This gets more intriguing by the chapter! Great job! Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 16:28 CST
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Yay! Yippee! Time for my happy dance! You updated! Love the story and i'm waiting for the next wonderful update! Love the story, it's so well written and you're a superb writer! (i like the word superb, it's so .... superb! lol)
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! i am so proud of you!!!! I know exactly what u r saying BTW... YES SESSHY I luv Sesshy SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOOSOSOSOSOS MUCH! Thanx 4 including him! i had the caziest day today not to mention the worst so thanx for making it better .I LUV U! you are an awsome writer keep doing what you do best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: lord and warrior of all things orange
Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: March 23, 2006 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, easily the best fanfic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Amaya is a great character, I wonder if she steals the Tensaiga from Sesshomaru, or falls in love with him. He seems her type. The plot of this story is ecellent, and engaging. I like all the little twists and turns. I don't know but I think that this is the only fanfic of its kind and deserves the straight tens raiting I don't give to just any fanfic, heck, I don't even write reveiws this long. Thank you so much for gracing the world with your hard work in the form of this wonderful story. Bye, Lady Orange
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Reviewed By: laa_girl(not sighned in) On: March 23, 2006 07:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last few chappies are awsome!!!! and BTW EVil Ranting is what i am all about so don't worry one bit! and i feel like i have add every second so don't worry bout that either. You are a really good writer and i luv you and your work i really enjoy reading it and i am excited as to what new curves you will put in the story i am so excited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SEE ADD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I feel that you r so misstreated because you never get the # of revies u deserve oh well off to class ttyl!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Laa_girl
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 22:42 CST
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Woopah! Well done, my writting friend. Kudos. Keep up the great work. I think your writtings' descriptive mentality works well with the readers. I think it gives us readers a different kind of view of what, lets' say others, might write. Until next time! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuKagome4 On: March 21, 2006 17:36 CST
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I think Laa_girl summed this up very well. Short, sweet and darn good. Keep it up. Ciao~
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Title: GJ
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey again i loved you nice long comment it was like talking to an old friend. I am so happy with the way this story is heading and i hope by you two fav people you mean my two fav people Sesshy and Kouga because i LUV them Anaways nice job on this last chapter it was short and sweet i wouldn't have liked it any other way... Thanx much Laa_girl
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 00:10 CST
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ohhh. This just keeps getting better and better. Poor Miroku! And Sango not being able to be near him!
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Reviewed By: InuKagome4 On: March 19, 2006 20:27 CST
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Yea!!! He remembers what Kagome really means to him! I'm so excited...(calming self down). You know, I never thought about the whole weirdness of the milking a cow thing until now. Whoever started that must've been labeled a pervert for the longest time. lol.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer, I have been reading this work for the past day and i have fallen in love with it! You reallly must update soon! I love your bending Inuyasha's character into a new more innocent form but slowly brinigin back the Inu we have grown to love. You have depicted Naraku's character quite well. Theough i am dearly hopeing to see Inyasha come to Kagome soon I am content for now just waiting in utter suspense as you lay out this wonderful story. You have made it into my favorites list! Which is very lucky because I only let the best in. You are now one of only seven and i have been reading fanfiction for 5 years! You truly are a great writer, and i hope to read more soon. I also like you character and her complex makeup, she has many sides to her story dosen't she? I am truly enjoying this fanfiction, thanx for writing, and keep doin' what U R doin'!!!!!!
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