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Title: Hello.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/ Tryst On: April 03, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated. That goes with out repeating. Now I'm wondering. What's going to happen next? Hmmm. I have so many questions but I don't know how to word them. But, I did read your authors note. Hehehe. You like Naraku. Thats good. Have you read Heart of a Thief? It's about Naraku's past as a kid... And him growing up. Plus, I thank you. Your fic helped to finish and update my own. Keep up the good work. And please don't stress. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: candace On: April 03, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the interaction between kikiyo and naraku were very well done. You seemed to capture thier essence very well thier attitudes and manipulations of one another. Great chapter!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 21:16 CDT
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*has ants in her pants* WOOO The moment I have been reading for is almost here!!!! *gets excited* Write more soon please?!!
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Title: happy to see update!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 22:48 CST
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You know most people take SOOOO LONG to update! I am glad to see a new chapter! BTW I did decide to sit back a little XD I mean who would look after all my kids if I fell and hurt myself! (to much work for my husband) ;) I like that sess and inu are getting along. I always thought that it was sad that they couldn't "just get along"!
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Title: Oye!
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/ Tryst On: March 31, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still getting a kick out of you fics. Though I think that you should know that you and mshutts are the authors that inspired me to write FHI and My Tryst's Sake fic. So, keep up the good job. By the way, I was surprised to say the least with your oc. She reminds me of another oc in a fic called unplanned. If you get a chance look it up. I'm hoping to see more soon. And if you do decide to invite daddy inu, let me know. Hehehe. The look on Naraku's face would be priceless. Plus there's that whole 'sit,boy' thing. And since naraku has lost inu, is he planning to use kagome or one of the others? And does Midioriko have a future in your fic....? Ummm. I'm a very big fan of the jewel priestess and Inutaisho...:) Okay. That's about all. Tryst/Punishment of the Inu.
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Reviewed By: candace On: March 31, 2006 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when amaya (sp?) would make her next apperance. My only idea so far is that if naraku lost inuyasha and the jewel shard and was pissed about it it makes sense (since this is the kind of person he is) that he would use the ningens in his dungeon to bring inuyasha back into his control. or at least thats what naraku thinks but more than most likly it would make inuyasha snap in a way that would take naraku down b/c of his blind rage.. thats really the only idea I had. but i think that amaya should die in the end! A beautiful tragic ending for a cool char. It seems almost fitting that she would give up her life so that others would live.. she just seems like that kind of char. to me.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 07:48 CST
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This is a very unique story. I am really intreaged by it. I can't wait to see what happend next. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! I CAN'T BELIEVE you haven't had more reviews!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 23:27 CST
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really good! now i cna sleep b/c i had my fix =) I am so curious to see how this plays out, i keep wondering what direction it will go, i have ideas of where it may go but i will jsut have ot wait and see what you write to see if i am right or if i ma just smoking something!!! i'll check back later for the next update!
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Title: Chained huh?
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: March 30, 2006 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic all day long. And I must say, I like what I have read... I'll be looking into the others. Update soon. By the way, I really enjoyed the part where the brothers actually get along. Sesshomaru has this whole thing about him being the only one to kill InuYasha. Are you going to revive InuTaisho? Hehehe. Him in that final battle would be kinda cool. Oh, well. T/PioI.
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Title: Cool Story!!!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!! You've got a great story going on here. By the way, either meaning for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's father's title is good. Some people have said that his true name is Toga. Can't wait for your next update!! ^_^
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Title: www.cherrykosetsu.moon-star.org
Reviewed By: Elena Cala On: March 29, 2006 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm candace adn i are the same person, i was trying to write a review and i thought it didn't go through so i signed up so i could write the review only to discover it had taken it lol!! I don't think its OOC for ses. at all. I have noticed in the series even that he has changed since the begginging, become softer somehow. I think this fits very well and it was bound to happen, b/c the confrontations couldn't/wouldn't keep going. That much is obvious just from the anime. Great job i really need another fix soon lol so pls keep writing cause i might go into withdrawls if you don't.
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: March 29, 2006 14:24 CST
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I see your point, but what can I say, I'm a bishounen/ Sesshomaru fan! Thank you for updating, and anwering my question! ........-Lady Orange P.S. I'm glad that you don't misspell anything, I really can't stand it when people write a fanfic almost entirely in web-speak. Bye!
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 22:34 CST
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Lol, I put the "loose" thing in because you always use it incorrectly. Hahaha, not just as a random fact! And you did it again in this chapter!! Grr! You said "loosing" instead of "losing." (It's really not that important, I just have this little pet peeve with using the wrong form of a word.) But anyway, good chapter, can't wait to hear more. The ooc isn't all that terrible, both characters have reasons to be slightly out of sorts and therefore ooc. Yay! Update as soon as you can!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is a total page turner and I haven't been able to sleep w/o reading it and now i am out of pages. please update soon as i ma now addicted and need my daily fix and to see how this plays out!!
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Reviewed By: candace On: March 28, 2006 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story i haven't been able to sleep until i have read each and every word on every page! Please write mroe soon as I am totally addicted adn must know how it all plays out!
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