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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: March 30, 2006 22:21 CST
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That dragon sounds pretty. This stories couples are funny together but in a good way. Love the story.
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Reviewed By: Dyquem, not signed in On: March 27, 2006 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhoh. big fight between merk & sess. I'm surprized that merk is allowing his inferior to fight for RIn. Takoshi seemed nice enough, but we really don't know him. I'm am glad you decided not to tie it all up with a neat "oh, & Sora and Takoshi get together." too cliche in my opinion, and frankly unrealistic. If Takoshi was attracted to the fighting female who rescued him, then he'd never go for a bit of nothing in silk. She hasn't been given a three dimensional character, and you made her seem snide when she and other ladies of Sess's court were giggling about Rin. You have given us the impression Takoshi is young. There is tons of time for him to find a mate.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 06:55 CST
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hey I'm not able to see the pic of merkamou is there any way I can get a link?? I'm dying to see it :)
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 21:50 CST
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No!!! Sesshy can't find out like that!! OMG!! He's gonna kill Merkamou and there thats the surprise ending!! God that was such an evil cliffy. I'm suffering :.(. Please don't hold out for too long or I will go crazy! Take care and good luck. PEACE!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: March 25, 2006 00:57 CST
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OOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Their in trouble! They better find Kagome soon because Rin won't have to decide between Merkamou and Takashi. Because Merkamou will be died by Sesshy hands.
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Reviewed By: Dalafanole [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 16:02 CST
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Ahh!! So intence! I would have never even thought that the Lord of the South would EXILE his own mother. It's great. I also admire that you update to frequently. Can't wait for the next chapter! Ja.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 20:26 CST
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:::::sits in room with goofy grin::::clapping hands:::: YAY!!!! OMG!!!! I am soooo happy Rins gonna get her happy ending!!! I'm pretty sure theres much more to go. So sorry it took me so long to update but lack of computer makes it hard to read and review. And as for the last 3 chapters awsome awsome awsome. I was afraid Rin was gonna have to marry that other guy. Well you've just made my day and i can't wait to read the next chap. And YES! It woulld be awsome if you did a story on Mizuki, shyt I can see Mizuki taking over the west all by herself. Oh and just to say DYquem is very right. I find it vey disapointing that some writers either abandon their stories or go off to something else. I can imagine that it takes a lot to get through the writers block and aggravation but a really good writer can overcome that and make sure that they update regularly. So Hats off to you and a round of applause! Well take care and good luck writing. PEACE!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: March 21, 2006 20:59 CST
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Wow! He banished his mother. I wish I could do that sometimes. I hope Rin and Merkamou end up together they make a great coulpe. There will never be a dull moment with those two.
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Reviewed By: Kytari Ningumi On: March 20, 2006 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I absolutely love this story! The way that you've had the characters grow, especially Rin, is amazingly well done. I loved "Nothing Left to Lose," and when I read that you were doing a sequel, I knew that I had to read it. Much applause for your work so far. I check this site obsessively to see if the latest chapter has been uploaded. Kudos and keep up the good work! -- Kytari
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm feeling frustrated with fan fiction so you deserve a special review. One of your reviewers said you didn't have many reviewers but the ones you did have were dedicated. You are a creative writer who has good use of language and grammar, but you have another quality which is just as important which 95% of fan fic writers seem to lack. . . It is a strange concept [read sarcasm] but you start a story, update regularly and then finish the story. You FINISH the story. You don't go off and start five different story lines and finish nothing. I know I'm chewing on other writers in your review, but you truly should be proud of the discipline to create a beginning, middle and end for a story, and then get there without posting 5 different bits and pieces and finishing nothing. Just my two cents.
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Reviewed By: Dyquem, not signed in On: March 13, 2006 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a good job with the battle scenes in 24 & 25. I really liked Akira's thought process as she became a fighter. I sort of see the idea behind her attraction to Isamu. She is looking for someone to manipulate, but it just doesnt' cut it for me. You have already established that she doesn't understand the whole "sex as fun" concept because Ryo was so useless in that department both in size and ability. Akira and Isamu seems almost like a 37 year old woman who hooks up with an 18 year old. ewwww. Age is not a function. It is a function of mental maturity. You are showing change for Isamu, but still. . . Moving on. This Takashi is an interesting addition to the mix. He will either be Rin's mate or the catalyst which drives Merkamou to mate her himself, regardless of the hanyou heirs. Takashi seems genuinely intrigued by the humans, and Rin in particular, and seems to be seeing Rin as a female for herself, and not just "oh, she's a ningen" or even "oh, she's a warrior." Given that we are 26 chapters into the story, I still think Merk will be the one, but I could be wrong. Its been known to happen.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 21:26 CST
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I'm a little confused. What has happened to Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 20:58 CST
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oh! sorry about the awful spelling I hope I don't give you a headache with the bad grammar :)
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 20:55 CST
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well let me start off by saying sorry I haven't reviewd in a while. In all honestly this is the only fic I review faithfuly to I usually only review at the end. Any way onward! The only thing in my head right now is how much Rin Freakin ROCKS!!!! Lol I wanna grow up to be Rin! OH! and now merkamous boy has noticed Rin now too he better watch out there looks like theres gonna be some compotition! And hey! Whats goin on?? Rin just took on a taioyokie by herself and kick ass, so why hasn't anyone noticed and given her a "high five" or something?? It really is a incredible defete and some one had to had seen it. Anyways I can't wait for another chap I get anxious waiting to see whats gonna happen nest. Oh! and that was totaly rocked!! Take care and good luck! PEACE!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:33 CST
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You do the best action/combat writing I've ever read. Always listen to the voices in your head. Great war!
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