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Title: Ch 24
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: March 11, 2006 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is an EVIL cliffie. Other than that, this story just gets better by the second. If you don't mind, though, I would rather a happy ending. I think that you're an amazing writer. Where do you come up with these things???
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to mention, you defintitely need to do a big chapter on the northern court
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drama v. happy ending? I'm sorry. you have to produce both.Although I'm now cold on the whole morganic marriage idea, after your latest chapter. Screw ou, Merk. come backY be my concubine? While that wasa relativfely respectable position if you were the concubine of the king, it won't do for RIN, and I'm beginning to think a morganic marriage would smack too much of concubinage. It is hard to type when the notebook is on a small table next to the recliner & Dyquem is in my lap. typos ensue.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt very sorry from poor little Misuki, but if she were my pup, I;m not sure I'd trust the lady of the North after those snide comments. Really liked the 20 word conversation. It was both believable and well written
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Reviewed By: Dalafanole [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 10:02 CST
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Kawaii!!! I love the Rin Merk. pairing!!! Again,I can't wait for the next chapter. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Dalafanole [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 10:45 CST
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I just love this fic. It just draws me in and I just want to continue reading. I'm so glad that you made a sequel. Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 10:03 CST
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I usually lose interest in a fic once pups are a reality and figure into the plot in a tangible way, but not with this story. You have done well. You are very good at fleshing out the characters you create on your own. They are complex and fairly consistent. They interest me. I do not review often, so please don't read anything into it if I don't review with each chapter you post. It is beyond me why you have only a small number of reviewers. Perhaps this is common with 'new' authors. You're very good and I hope that you will continue. The reviewers that you do have are faithful and supportive. I think that says alot. You have your own fans. How cool is that?
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Jewel, Just wanted to let you know that I really really enjoy your stories! They are amazing and rank right up there on my top favs. with Youkai Yume and Resmiranda. (read some of their's if you get the chance). Your stories are alwas original and fun to read. Sorry, this is the first time that I have reviewed for you, but I have wanted to do so for a while now. Keep up the good work, Sesshoumaru/Kagome parrings are my fav. Thanks again for giving me something to look forward to after a hard day of work. Aarabriall
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:19 CST
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well i still have tons of questions but now that the war is about to start I'm sure answers are on their way. I really like the was this chapter came out it gave more insight to akira. Well laike always good luck writing and update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe before dinner On: February 26, 2006 17:04 CST
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wow up to chapter 20 already. poor mizuki she is a hanyou but she just has to help prove it isn't a bad thing
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 20:54 CST
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just one more thought. now that the lady of the east knows that rin and merkamou have killed her son is she going to try to act out on them?? Sure she made a deal not to go to war with Sesshy but she never said anything about peace with merkamou and she probably has it in her head that rin is just some nigen sesshy has adopted as a pet of some sort. I can't think that all of her actions are going to be noble. I think it would be a little unrealistic that a mother can be around her sons murderers and not do nothing, even if her son was in the wrong. Well this is just a guess. again good luck
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 20:48 CST
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well this chapter made my day :). I love Rin in this story she freakin rocks! And so far we already know kagome is getting her happy ending but I'm dying to see if your gonna give rin a happy ending. I have several ideas floating in my mind about how it can happen but I can't wait to see what you come up with. Oh, and about the war is Sesshomaru going to let rin fihgt?? I can imagine that she is going to want to be there, I get the feeling that Sesshomaru cares about rin but does not look at her like a daughter (are you trying to portray that?). I hope that if she goes she kicks some serious Yokai ass! Well I can't wait for the next chap good luck
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:44 CST
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chapter 17. Hooray. the true feelings are out in the open. how are you going to pull a happy ending out of this one? However, my issue with this chapter - how is mating an inuyoukai that much of an improvement on a ningen. she is full youkai but the kids are still mixed half hawk, half inu. wouldn't his mother insist on a hawk mate? {pictures of little puppies flapping around on tiny wings} hmmm, thinking. . . have youkai ever heard of morganic marriages? he could mate Rin, and take some little nicely bred hawk to produce a couple of heirs. Sesshoumaru was said to have done that in "The Lucky Ones", although the concept itself is as old as humans and royalty here on plain old non fictional earth.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:28 CST
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chapter 16 -- looks around -- "I like what you've done with the place." I particularly like the somewhat cold calculation of the Eastern lady. She is a dragon youkai, reptilian in nature somewhat, and this is very believable. Can't say I care for Sora, but no doubt you drew her to be pretty but essentially irrelevant. Its common in fanfics, but I've always had trouble putting the Youkai from manga and the shows into a traditional japanese royal court scene.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 16:07 CST
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OMG!! I'm soooo happy but sad at the same time :) :(. So now i'm woundering if there is even a way to get them together. You as the writer i am sure have this all planned out, but the suspence is killing me. Is this going to have a sad ending?? Will rin end up alone?? good luck on the writing and update soon.
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