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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 › » ] | Title: You've done it again!!
Reviewed By: LyghtChyld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 06:47 PST
Comment/Review:
This was a great Chapie. I loved it, I was so worried Miroku would up and leave Inuyasha, glad he didn't. And for Jakotsu to stand up to back like that :two thumbs up: I need a Jakotsu plushie to snuggle. I'm glad he got her out of there. Damn you, Bankotsu!! :shakes her fist at Bank: Keep up the AWESOME WORK!!
| Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Not soon enough" still has "soon enough" in it so i'm happy =)
| Reviewed By: cherry_petals On: January 24, 2007 21:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK i love the story so far its really good i don't wannaseem rude but i would really apreceate it if you would update more often but i guess you can't rush an artist i love how kagome and inuyasha live double lives and how you have input most of the characters from the TV show. personally I hate kikyo but you gave her a personality that goes so well with the story i can't believe it. wow of all the Fanfics i have read your is one of the best. i really hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear! I found this story on IK Eternal, but had to come here for the long version... I read the whole thing in a day...! Talk about having no life...>.< But that's besides the point. OMG I LOVED IT! But I mean... wow. Bank is fucking sick... he needs therapy, and quick. As for Kagome, damn, who knew? I would have never imagined her as a sex slave... (well, little dark IK oneshots don't count... *innocent smile*) Chapter 12 really freaked me out, though. I can't believe I read the whole thing... It's like watching a lion killing a dear. It's horrifying, but I couldn't stop reading! I'm really starting to find myself fucked up. And damn that shit with Inuyasha and Miroku is a relief! I mean, Inu and Miro having a huge fight? End of the world, I say! I love how Inuyasha (as in Inuyasha, not as in Sha - who is quite amazingly sexy, I find...) is acting around Kagome. The way their relationship is evolving is adorable, if I may say. That part when Kagome pushed him off of her bed was just so cute! ^_^ I'm still really truamatized by Oberon/Bankotsu... Shit that's freaky... Oh, by the way, thanks a lot for helping me picture Inu in leather pants *thinks vaguely about a cold shower...* but it was seriously awesome! And I really can't wait for the next chapter!!! So, while I do that, I'll go read my favorite parts again!! Love, IK Obsession, or InusMistress, depending on the fanfiction site...lol
| Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 17:09 PST
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You inspire me to write! Great chapter and dialogue and beautiful use of vocab. I can't believe it's Bankotsu and DAMN he almost he almost killed her. I was on the edge of my freaking seat when he was beating her up. It was so graphic that I was chewing my nails and hoping she wouldn't die. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
| Title: wendy's #1 fan!
Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: January 14, 2007 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, now that i know who oberon is, it totally makes sense. ugh, what a bastard. that little 'lesson' was intense as hell, and you always do so well with your 'villians'. i swear, i could almost feel kagome's pain. damn. on a slightly lighter note, miro and the leather pants, funny sh*t! but, i also feel bad for him about yash lying to him... even though i understand why yash would lie. poor guys, they did sound like a couple. ^ ^ can't wait for the update.
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: LyghtChyld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 21:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just awesome! I can't wait for Inuyasha to give Bank what he deserves 10 fold. I too have to wonder how Kagome is going to hid her swollen face and from what I understood broken jaw. Can't wait for the next Chapter, Please Please Update Soon!!
| Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Dion McArthur On: January 13, 2007 11:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn I never would of thought that Oberon would be Bankotsu.I thought he would Like Naraku's father or something.That was an extremely violent chapter and curious about how Kagome is going to explain this one.I'm also curious about that little bruise on her necc, will Inuyasha even be able to remember he did it after getting drunk as hell.Damn I just cant wait for the next chapter.Update soon -Blaccwolf123, Your LOYAL FAN
| Reviewed By: TrinityK (not signed in) On: January 12, 2007 16:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Is all I got to say. That was, I think, the most intense and harsh chapters yet. At first I thought this story was the normal Inu/Kag love story, but now... I realize that it's so much more. I like it. Awesome job. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Title: Exquisite!!!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: January 12, 2007 08:40 PST
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I'm so damn proud of you! You dug in and did it and I knew you could. I'm immune to a lot of shyt, but this had me cringing and that's how I know you RAWKED it! Do dat shyt, Wen. This chappie blew the mofo doors off!
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 06:35 PST
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I knew it! I had a feeling that it was Bankostu. Poor Kagome. I feel so bad for her. And it was a real shocker to find out that Miroku didn't know Inuyasha was a demon. I just figured that he knew. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 22:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Chapter twelve and I are goign to need a moment together... Seriously, get out of here, we need to fuck. I cannot beleive who Oberon turned out to be, but hot damn girl you nailed it didn't you? You picked the best possible character and I salute you as a fellow and superior writer. Well I'm off to mastrubate a little. Ciao.
| Title: HOLY SHIT!
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!! That has to be the darkest scene I've ever read... Nothing even compares to that... (i kinda already guessed that oberon was bank) but christ, it's like having someone squeeze lemon juice in an open bullet wound! My jaw is still touching the floor, how could Kag ever be the same after having lived through that? Even worse, how is she going to hide it? As for the Miroku/Inuyasha thing it was bound to happen but if Miroku is the lovable guy we all know he'll bounce back by Inu's side in no time. Anyways I only gave the nine because technically it was not that fun to read about someone getting raped, even though it makes good drama! Still love your writing though... Please update soon I have to know what happens next!
| Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I didn't even thank of banky lol. I suck but damn he really fucked her up in this chapter. What's going to happen in the next chapter I gatta know!!! Oh and plus Miroku in leather pants?!?!!?!? *Drools* Great chapter. Man I would never want to experiance what kagome went through with Bank. Though, I say we kill him off soon Lol. Great chapter update soon! ^_^ ~Sadie~
| Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay this review has to be broken into two parts 1st - inuyasha and miroku part: LOVED when miroku found the leather pants (and i had a feeling that he was gonna put them on the minute he found them.... will he encounter sango while wearing them???) and are we gonna be seeing miroku in leather pants more often? lol! when he burst into the room, and pulled a line from the princess bride i was laughing so hard i couldn't read for almost 5 minutes! poor yash, wonder what its going to take for miroku to forgive him (a pair of leather pants as a present?) loved this part! 2nd- kagome and oberon OMG! I SO KNEW IT (bank being oberon that is)! thats SO good, but dammit, i feel bad for her, i understand why it happened and the violence of the scene being a part of who oberon/bankotsu is. LOVED the chapter, but PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE don't leave us all hanging for too long! i'm dyin to find out how kag is!!!!!!!!!
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