| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Title: HOORAY 4 11 page lime
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 23:55 PST
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That was so freaking hot, but kind of weird after an ALMOST rape scene, but nonetheless, hot. It tickles me that Kagome gave InuYasha a blow job and even under the facade of Titania and Sha. I wonder what she would do if she found out it was actaully her cousin's boyfriend she let finger fuck her in an alleyway. The drama is incredibly genius. Anyway,s great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze (nli) On: January 08, 2007 15:11 PST
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Wow, someone needs to open the window in here! What a hot scene! You have an absolutely amazing way with words - I'm completely awed! Sucking a guy off in a alley... I just love the dirty talk. Great dialogue and descriptiong, just right for an enjoyable read. Oh, so Sha is Inuyasha... my, that will complicate the situation. And you've revealed some of Oberon and Kagome's relationship. Wonderfully detailed, you've managed to keep me on the edge fo my seat. Hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 20:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo I cannot wait until Inuyasha finds out tht it was actually Kags tht gave him tht...well moment of pleasure =) Are they gonna find out soon?
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 19:55 PST
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yay another chapter...a really hot chapter ha. Man they're both getting close to really seeing and understanding the hidden identities, but you're gonna keep us hanging aren't you? Can't wait for the next chapter and really glad you're still writing after the awesome and huge success that COTD was. oh I love a crude Yash!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 16:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo that was a very good chapter mmm Lol. Keep up that great job, I can't wait till they find out it's each other, and what is oberon going to do about kagome? ^_^ Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 09:19 PST
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Another great chapter! I'm so glad that Inuyasha, I mean 'Sha', showed up. Kagome's a lucky girl. And that scene in the alley, wow! Great job! Please update soon!
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Title: amhor56
Reviewed By: amhor56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 01:43 PST
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Love that lime scene! I guess they got more aquainted. Man oh man, I want more.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 23:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... WHOA! awesome chapter (know where i can order my very own inuyasha?!?!) and who is OBERON?!?!?! its killin me! how many chapters before we find out???? can't wait for more! keep up the great writing!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if that wasn't crude yash, i don't know what is. dayum. it's like *_* ! ha, this chap was awesome and i guess i was just expecting naraku to be evil, but if you say he wont be 'that' bad, then i shall believe you. i swear, i must know what happens with oberon. it's fun as hell following a fic as it's written, especially yours, but i am so impatient. i hafta see how things end up. ahhh, the torture. ttyl.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally they're starting to notice the similarities between each other... I wonder if that bite Inu gave to Kag will play a bigger role later on perhaps? Only time will tell, that was a very quick update, I was so proud of you! Thanks for the new chap, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:12 PST
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Great chapter! I loved the part in the dorm room. And when Rin said you're stealing the lead, great line! I saw that you reviewed my story. Thank you for reading it. I'm kinda stuck on chapter seven. I know where I want to take the story but I'm not sure how to get the characters where I want them. Does that make sense? Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. This story is turning out to be as good as 'curse' and it's only chapter 10! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 10:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaa, son of a .. dammit, i pressed the wrong button and lost my review. crap, well, i had all this stuff i said and now *thinks* ok. one more time. your naraku is so dang evil and i love hating him. his cocky attitude makes it so fun!it's like i'm filled with disgust and wonderment all at once. ^ ^ as for yash, he so almost slipped big time. i wonder if(when) he and kags get together, what kikyou will do? probably get pissed over being dropped for her cousin who is beneath her in every way, and then plot to do evil things to them all. hahaha, j/k. i dunno, but i know you'll make it badass. well, can't wait to find out. happy new year! t.c p.s. more crude yash, please. lol
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 23:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh I love this story so incredibly much! Please post again SOON
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Title: so close....
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 17:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all love to deny the obvious... seems to be a theme for this story so far... I was hoping to read more about kenren! Maybe find out what he looks like, you know to see if he has any of his fathers traits (*cough*sesshomaru*cough*. Thanks for answering my question and great chapter, lookin forward to an update!
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Title: I missed a lot!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 13:37 PST
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OMG! I looked to see you updated a new chapter, and I was happy until I found out I had missed 5 whole chapters. I missed a lot! I'm angry with myself for not reviewing each and every chapter because I love this story sooooo much! You really have a great comedic mind. I was seriously laughing from start to finish. The chapter when they got drunk was efffing genius! Not only was that chapter funny as all hell, but hot when they were in the bathroom. Oh, and if Naraku wasn't in the dorm then who was? Mmmm. Can't Wait. You have a great ability to pull readers in with raunchy comedy and beauitful figurative sentences. NEwayz, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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