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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:19 PST
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YAY!!!! NEW CHAPTER!!! how come you didn't update on fanfic? i dont know how to get an email for updates from this site, it was pure luck that i found out you updated and it MADE MY DAY!! YAY! *bounces around* (i had too much christmas candy) ^_^; love the tension between kag and yash, i was really hoping he would take of his disguise/inhibitor thing, that would have made it REALLY interesting! are we gonna find out who oberon is soon? its really killin me! and who rin's kid's father is! (does it have anything to do with sesshy?????) can't wait for an update!!! hope you had a great christmas! and have a happy new year!!!!
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Title: Merry Christmas!!
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 19:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my favorite French/English teacher loves to say, "And the Plot Thickens!" Things are bound to be interesting now with Sango in the picture. I have a question, do you listen to music while you write? (like some sort of inspiration perhaps?)... just wondering... Anyway, happy for the update and great job!
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Reviewed By: leilachan nsi On: December 22, 2006 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it makes me so happy to see another chap out so early. i see the update notice and i'm like, YAAAY! as for rin's son, i just have to find out the story behind that! so interesting. and now sango's in the mix!? this is so damn good. heheh, miroku has a new challenge to face in that chick! yash is so crude... i love it. i can never get over how good this sh*t is!!!! take care and have a merry christmas, too!!!! *much love*
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 10:12 PST
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Great chapter! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens now the Sango is there.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsesssion On: December 21, 2006 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. You've got me addicted! Chapter 8 [I believe it was] had me laughing my ass off and remembring some good times. I like where you've taken this story so far and I'm excited to see if my assumptions are correct of where you may be taking it in the [hopefully not distant] future.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, sure. lol. Great chapter. I think Sango is going to bring a nother interesting element to the story, and I'm excited to see what happens next. Awesome chapter. I can't wait for the next. Update soon! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 18:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsomeness, great chapter, finally Sango. ^_^ Keep it up! ~SAdie~
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Reviewed By: leilachan nsi On: December 14, 2006 09:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man, i thought i'd already read this last chap. i got the update and thought it was from the one before. oops. well i'm glad i checked to be sure. i would hate to have missed this chap. you bring funny to a whole new level! poor miro, kagome set him up good. lol and kag and yash... damn, they are so perfect for eachother. and yash figuring it out first, is just too great. i know i'll love this fic as much as your other one. you rock so hard! i hope you do get a new chap out by christmas. i must know what is up with kiky-ho. is she really cheating? hahahaha, and the 'morning after' for yash and kag. i hope she atleast made it into the sink. ew. lmao. take care.
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Title: hey there
Reviewed By: shadow_of_night17 On: December 10, 2006 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, finnay found the time to read this. and i love it lol. i'll be glad when you write more. the drunken singing was funny. i'm sooooo glad i get to read now that the semesters almost over. anyway on to the story questions. do naraku and obreon have a connection? yeah thats all i really want to know, cause that would clear tons of questions. anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 00:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
allo again! just thought i would review here too... cause i can, haha. nice to hear that i made someones night (day), hope everything is well! the little bit of insight into next chapter that you gave me has me hyped to read it... i think i need a few more hobbies, i have become obsessed with fanfiction, haha. awesome chapter! (as always) can't wait for more ur #1 fan -toyas_gurl
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Reviewed By: TRinityK (nsi) On: December 09, 2006 19:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was one great chapter. And I was really liking the direction the end seemed to be going, but based on those last few lines, I'm pretty sure I know what happened next. LOL. Great story, I love it. Update soon! ;-)
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Reviewed By: future author On: December 09, 2006 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely loved this chapter. I'd say it was my favorite chapter out of all. I thought it was hilariously funny. I can't wait to see what happens next between those two. i can see things are about to get even more interesting. Untill the next chapter keep up the good writing.
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: LyghtChyld [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 06:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: December 08, 2006 00:15 PST
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Wendy!!! I had a BALL with this chappy. Yasha is so sexy and the way he & kags play off each other is gold! I also loved the bar scene, Miroku's thought process was awesome. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Starfire277 On: December 07, 2006 22:09 PST
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This story is great. And I can't believe Kagome had to kill the mood by throwing up. Hahahaha the smell of it, especially when you're drunk, is disturbing. I should know. Thanks and hope you update soon!
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