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Title: Sick!!!
Reviewed By: Corr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy... dayum.. it roxx... i really liked it.. damn you for sooo endin this then.. im sooo arghhh... dayum,... i so wana read more. . update man. update soon... dayum the suspense.. great work... lolz.. lmao.. she puked.. ahan.. so wasn't he behind her? or did i miss something? cuz she dint puke on him otherwise.. or were they facin each otha? buh yea.. reply plz.. need to know this..aite .. keep it up.. out.. EZ.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 15:49 PST
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Ah, that was so sweet... until she had to vomit. Then if was just hilarious. Great chappie, you've no idea how idea this update has made me... Miroku, miroku, finally getting what he deserves, so he's probably scarred for life... Sesshoumaru and Bankotsu getting into wars... THE PLOT THICKENS!!! Well, Kouga defintiely had better taste than Inu-chan *shudders* first Ayame and then Kikyo? Man, someone needs to inject that guy with a healthy dose of common sense *tehee*. The suspense is just perfect, and I have a myraid of questions I'd like to know the answers to, but unfortunately, I'm going have to find out... Certainly glad that you write faster than I do, or I'd die waiting. I can't wait for Inuyasha finding out who Kagome really is and her little job on the side. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 12:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the sly wit and humor in this chapter! Not to mention inuyasha and kagome... steamy! Although i'm waiting for the moment that the real half demon comes out from hiding again... Also i'm silenty waiting for Sesshomaru to make an appearance, with Rin in the picture! Great job and keep writing, please!
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: angelicdis0rder On: December 07, 2006 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waited a lo0o0o0o0ng tyme 4 dis chappie..but hell wasnt it w0rth the wait... hes fallin 4 her~ lol.. d0 update s0on
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 08:25 PST
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Great chapter! I loved it! I can't beleive Kagome puked. What a way to ruin the moment. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 06:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol a surprizing comedy twist! ^_^ The chapter was wicked! Keep up the great work! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 01:53 PST
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oh man did kagome seriously puke, ruining that very hot moment? and eddie izzard rocks! don't worry your updates are worth the wait, but please for the love of bob don't make us wait tooo long
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 19:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh, this story rules! can't wait for an update! ( i think i already reviewed on ffnet... but w/e the more reviews the better!!!!)
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Reviewed By: leilachan nsi On: December 01, 2006 09:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm, interesting. it does seem as though kikyo is hiding something. same for inu, like his feelings for kags. ha. i love miroku. makes me laugh to tears. so funneh. pee color? lol i really can't wait to see how this fic unfolds. i still have so many unanwered questions about rin and her background. i luv it. take care.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 07:31 PST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ms. Grrrl On: November 20, 2006 00:02 PST
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Glad to see another chappie up. Kikyou is sooo lying & Miroku said it himself: Everybody cheats. Now chop-chop, young lady! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DawnGoddess87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 20:32 PST
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Another great chapter! I do wonder why the part that sticks in my mind the most is the inuyasha's toilet habit thing (sanitary?), but i digress...well done! Am I just paranoid or is Kikyo LYING!!!!...*ahem*
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 17:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsomeness I love this story with all my kinky boots in the world! ^_^ lol Ja ne! ~sadie~
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: November 04, 2006 23:59 PST
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Great update! Inuyasha is so unpredictable, lol. Update soon! ;-)
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Reviewed By: future author On: November 02, 2006 20:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was probably the most hilarious chapters I've read so far. I really enjoyed this chapter. now with this new insight inuyasha is having about kagome I wonder what kinds of things he'll do to torture her and what other funny situations they'll get into. i can't wait to read the next chapter. i really love reading your story and I can't wait to find out who her master is. Maybe it's koga. Update soon and keep up the good writing.
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