| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: Whoa!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: April 27, 2006 22:52 CDT
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Dayum, poor Yasha. Kags is a damn tease. If he can't have it, don't show it to him! Then there's sessie-sama...oh lawd! What's gonna happen to poor Sess. He's so pitiful *cries* Lots & lots of stuff coming... I can smell it! O.O Great as always, Penny!
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Title: Oh so good!
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 21:49 CDT
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Oh so excelelnt chapter! Loved the scences between Inuyasha and Kagome especially. I like how you are taking their relationship at a slower more normal pace. I am not saying that jumping in head first is a bad thing but just how you are writing this particular story it fits perfect. Also love, love, love the Sesshomaru/Rin plot. Poor Rin. Hopefully Sesshomaru will believe that she really truly had feelings for him and wasn't faking to get info. Oh gosh. I love the anticipation of it all. Thanks for the great chapter!
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:42 CDT
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update sooooooon!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, if sess finds out about rin's betrayal, there is no way he will believe that her feelings were real. i worried over that. and hopefully, sh*t will chill out with kouga tryning to hurt kags now that she's transferred.(yeah right) ^_^ i loved the sweet miro and sango part at the beginning. and scrooge mcduck office?! he had those locks installed just for that, huh. ^_~ lmfao. funny
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:01 CDT
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Oh my goodness. Excellent chapter! Some definatly interesting tid-bits were revealed in this chapter. I don't know if its just me but I am finding myself more drawn to the Sesshomaru/Rin plot than I am to the other things that are happening. And thats different for me because I never really got into the the whole Rin/Sesshomaru pairing and all that. I do hope that Kagome and Inuyasha work things out. I also really like the direction that you have went with Myouga. While I like him as a scardy cat and all that in the Anime and the other Fanfictions and such I also sensed that he could be wise too.Anyway Kudos to you on another excellent update, and thank you so much.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:01 CDT
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Oh my goodness. Excellent chapter! Some definatly interesting tid-bits were revealed in this chapter. I don't know if its just me but I am finding myself more drawn to the Sesshomaru/Rin plot than I am to the other things that are happening. And thats different for me because I never really got into the the whole Rin/Sesshomaru pairing and all that. I do hope that Kagome and Inuyasha work things out. I also really like the direction that you have went with Myouga. While I like him as a scardy cat and all that in the Anime and the other Fanfictions and such I also sensed that he could be wise too.Anyway Kudos to you on another excellent update, and thank you so much.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:01 CDT
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Oh my goodness. Excellent chapter! Some definatly interesting tid-bits were revealed in this chapter. I don't know if its just me but I am finding myself more drawn to the Sesshomaru/Rin plot than I am to the other things that are happening. And thats different for me because I never really got into the the whole Rin/Sesshomaru pairing and all that. I do hope that Kagome and Inuyasha work things out. I also really like the direction that you have went with Myouga. While I like him as a scardy cat and all that in the Anime and the other Fanfictions and such I also sensed that he could be wise too.Anyway Kudos to you on another excellent update, and thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:39 CDT
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What can I say but awesome I love it
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful as always! KEEP UP THE AWESOEM WORK! im talking to u as i write this review bye lol
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Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: April 19, 2006 17:52 CDT
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Particularly good! So Naraku is Rin's father and it looks like Sess is on to it. But I feel bad for her since she obviously has real feelings for Sess. The Inu/Kags part was awesome and realistic, as is this story in general. The parts with Kouga's father was very unexpected and will make for a brilliant twist. You're doing a very good job portraying real life and true struggles. I applaud you and the best of luck and huge congrats on your nomination at the IYFG.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: SykoNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excelent chapter! im catching up slowly, but I will continue to read.
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Title: darksaint
Reviewed By: Darksaintofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please girl you have to update on this story I am dying to find out what will happen with kags and Inu and as for sango uh oh that was bad I seriously hope kagome never finds out what happen between Inu and her. your fan darksaint p.s Inuyasha working at wacdonlds was a nice touch I love it god it just something sexy about a guy in uniform *smiles*
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 23:27 CDT
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Excellent Chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am very glad that things didn't go to far with Sango and Inuyasha. But now I have another dilemma with Sesshomaru and Rin. Oh please oh please don't let her be a bad bad person :( Oh this story is packed full of drama and I am loving it. I also hope that Kagome is gonna be ok. Whew my mind is going 90 miles a minute. Anyway, again great chapter and i can't wait for the next!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so glad to see miro/sango make up. poor kagome. and inu too, he seems lonely without her. i wonder when sess will find out about rin. that sux. i can she doesn't want to do what she's doing, tho. still wondering who her pops is. i'm relieved inu and sango stopped things before they went too far. O.o
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Title: review... by marie..
Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great chapter! loving it all! so happyabout the sango /inuyasha sitiuation,i had my faith in u got to write another review to u kk email me bye
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