| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I only got through the first three chapters, but so far, so good. ^.^ Keep it up.
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Title: PENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNY-PEN!!!!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 22, 2007 16:49 CDT
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I'm sorry I'm late! I didn't check e-mail in a few days, but I'm here now!! I'm loving this update. Nice and long for the palette! Naraku, arrogant piss ant that he is -can't wait to see him get it. I loved Kagura in this too. I've discovered a real liking for her (and it helps that she beat the shit out of Kouga in the anime!), Yash and Kagome are really cute. I love how his gray hair is fucking with him! Poor Miroku and Sango -gah! He doesn't see that he's just making things worse. Then of course, there's Sessie-sama. He's like, "I may only have one arm, but dammit, I'm still the man!" Fab update, Penny-pen! can't wait for the next. Love to Skye, eh? ^_^
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, glad to see everthing did work out for you chapter 24 was great, just great. Can't wait till chapter 25. Till then stay cool.
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Title: Oh BOY! OH BOY!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG- so much after such a long break made my head explode! I'm like WTF! So much to say and so little time for me to say it! what's goign on with rin and sesshy? Have they confessed their love to each other? Why is Kagura actually helping them out? Poor Miroku- will he find confidence again and face Sango- what if Sango became pregnant again- I'm positive Miroku won't let her out of his site and keep her locked away from Dark enery fields- how much of the supernatural things and the past be involved with this story? what's naraku's true plan to bring down the Takahashi corporation? Who does Kanna loyalties lie to? Wassup with Shippo in this story? Now that Inu and Kag are together what's next in their relationship? Will the relationship between Inu and Sesshy ever repair itself? And what's up with Inu's hair- why haven't it completely turn white yet? there were more questions but since I'm not a rereader and My mind is too blown away from this chapter I am not sure what they were... tee-hee* I'm happy that you have emailed me because I assure you that mm wouldn't have let me know what's up... I would've been left in the dark about your updates! well there's my commentary- next chap you should read and perhaps promote my story if you find the time! Awesome chap but it definitely felt like a filler??? Maybe I'm saying that cause I was too anticipated and waiting for this chapter and all that excitement built it up to be something more than it should be- but I'm happy you never failed to surprise me with what you do put out! Can't wait for the next update and again- AWESOME JOB!
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in On: March 19, 2007 06:39 CDT
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I am still reading your story I hope you up date soon on it.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. But I'm wondering if Inuyasha is going to get his full white hair or is he going to stay like that and is Koga and Ayama going to show up to help fight this battle as well? So hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 15:39 CDT
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I was just wondering last night what had happened to you. So when the alert popped up today I was very pleased. The chapter is great as always - looking forward to more. Take care!
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Title: Mindless Chatter
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... I'm utterly speechless with the events in this story and I can't wait for it to continue... then and only then can i bombard you with my questions and thoughst of the such! So much has to happen! Good luck with your love life and I hope you can eventually find time to be pulled away from it to work on this! LoVeD iT!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan nsi On: December 01, 2006 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good to see that you're still writing. now that inu is working with sess, things are going to get even more interesting, i'm sure. inu and kagome are so sweet together! but, it makes me feel so sad that sango and miro are going through such a tough time. i hope things turn out all right for them. lookin' forward to the next chap, as always. good luck with your new job and the training. take care.
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Title: Yippie Kiyah Mofo! 0.~
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: November 26, 2006 23:34 CST
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YEAAAAAH! Now this is what I was waiting for. I've been heired!!! (and now I know it!) 0.~ Penny, this was great. I love the banter between Sessie & Yasha, enjoyed the lemon, & tell Skye that I play Mario 3 all the time too!! Gotta love the plumber! We missed you, chick, but I'm glad your back. "Paint it Black" -I flippin love that!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad your back. Happy to read this again. So hope you update soon and keep it up.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miss ya much Pen, I'm glad everything is working out for you, I'm also glad for the update It's the quiet before the storm don't ya think. Till next time Pen I wish you best stay safe and happy ok.
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Reviewed By: abcdefghijklmnopqrstu On: November 24, 2006 22:15 CST
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you have to update this its really good
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi* On: October 01, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooo, please. not sango and miro's baby! this is terrible. i hate naraku and hope he dies a messy, painful death. this was seriously a major cliffy... meanie. ^_^ ayame is good for kouga, i think. and, i hope she chills him out. glad things are going well for you. take care. 'til the next update.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, missed ya and glad you updated. Now it on Nakrau just messed up no one but no one fuck with the boys (Inu and Fluffy). Oh man Mirkou and Sango that was sad. This was a great chapter can't wait till the next.
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