| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: Whoa o.o
Reviewed By: InuYasha's babydoll On: September 26, 2006 18:09 CDT
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Naraku, that slimy bastard! How DARE he mess with sessie! Poor Sango, I totally didn't see that coming, and then to think that it all happened because of that energy wave. Jesum! The battle is coming and I'm salivating! Tell Skye I said Skyeeeeeeeeeeeee! ^_^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was unexspected.Feel sorry for Sango's lose, I don't no how to react to such a thing like that. So I hope you update soon so we can read what happens next. And keep up what you do best, write.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 16:31 CDT
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haha i love this story update soon!
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Title: Excellent as Always!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Babydoll On: September 02, 2006 03:54 CDT
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Penny! I loved it as always, I absolutely ADORE the scenes with InuYasha & Kagome. They're written so well, just like a regular relationship when people are hot for each other. I also like the way you make sess formidable but not invincible - very realistic. Loved the title too (Go Def Leppard!) CONGRATULATIONS ON PASSING THE GED! I'm so proud of you, I knew you could do it! *huggles* Now, get over to AFF and update! You stopped at like 11 O.o
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Title: sAL
Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 22:45 CDT
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Loved it! good chappie. LoL, that kagome is funny... i dont know if im suposed to be amused by her, but i am. its great and im actually happy for kouga. hi is so sweet. im glad that he can swallow his pride and submit to ayame. its really really sweet. cant wait to see where their relationship goes. sAL
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter it's great. Kouga is falling for Ayame (I still don't trust him) that is great. Kagome is just a little horny don't ya think (LOL) and then there is Rin and Sessy need I say more (again, LOL) I can't wait till your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi* as per usual T_T On: August 26, 2006 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this chap was really insightful... especially where kouga and ayame are concerned. i am anxious to see how their blossoming 'relationship' turns out. they are being very cute while trying to hide their feelings. this was a fun chap to read. none of the action or 'serious shit', but it was still VERY good. every chap is. it makes me happy to know that you will be continuing this fic even though all of these wonderful things in real life are happening to you that are more important. you please your fans well!!! can't wait for the next chap. that kagome is a feisty one, eh. ^_~ take care.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, you did it again this was a great chapter. I love the way Kagome got Inuyasha to come home a little quicker. Keep up the great work. can't wait till the next chapter. REVIEWS NOTE: Sorry for the short review I have the flu how do you get the flu in the summer?
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Title: And the plot thickens..shit, got gooey even!! 0.~
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: July 07, 2006 07:25 CDT
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Penny!!! As always, I loved it. Where do I start?? Poor Miroku. He's so weak, it would be really interesting is Kikyou could get him to drop his drawers. Then the Yashie/Kags fluffiness was just adowable. Naraku...wow. He's a real piece of shit, ne? Sessie - you do him so well. You really are his second coming, girl! Then there's Kouga, oh I loved that beating he got -the crumb bum! Overall, it was very pleasing after a two week drought! ^_^ The boys are turning youkai and hanyou, we've got our swords & I know the final fight is gonna be da shyt! WOOT! Good luck at the IYFG!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *NSI* On: July 06, 2006 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so happy for you. congrats on the engagement. that is an acceptable excuse for not posting. lol. j/k i'm glad you are happy in love. what a great time in your life!! good luck on your ged. you will do just fine. and your new chap, as always, i was left wanting more and more. i am scared about miroku and his fears over sango. i hope kikyo doesn't succeed in f*cking things up completely. *slaps miro with his own beads then hugs him* well, it looks as though sess and inu may actually put the past behind them and move on to a better future. maybe cuz they have their women to calm them. ^_^ as for naraku's new 'daughter'... *is still cringing* ahhh, you write that evil man so well. hope things stay this joyous and wonderful for you always!! take care and see ya next update!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 06, 2006 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is very please with this story so this one decided to leave you a review... Hehehe, j/k. Seriously though, I'm in love with this fanfic. I like how both brothers are changing and the chemistry between Kag and Inu is amazing. Please keep up the great work.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter Pen, This reiew did miss you much. I'm glad Kouga has met his match in Ayame, can't wait to see what happens with them. Miroku,Idiot. Kikyo still hate her. Anyways can't wait till next chapter. Congrads on engagement and GED (I know you will passed already)
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Reviewed By: sAL! On: July 05, 2006 20:36 CDT
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HOORAY! your back and in love! congratulations! im happy for you. i wish you all the best. well, you've done it again. i laughed out right at your "and grabbed him by the valuables" line, holy shit that was fantastic. haha, and kikyos such a pimp... well pimpett, the way she scans over the guys workin, that's pretty funny, but shes also a horny bitch! so is naraku, maybe they should get together and have rough freaky sex into the night. haha, well, keep it up and i really enjoy reading it. sAL!
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update and congrats!~ thanks for the decicating..sp? .. anyway ttly kk? bye
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 21, 2006 13:34 CDT
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Excellent chapter. While I had hoped that Sess would discover his demonic rootes in a different way, defending Rin was euqally good. I hate that it was Naraku that led to the arm loss, but the thought of him laying in the hospital was so sweet/sad. The simple phone call for help was WONDERFUL! Thanks for writing for us. I look forward to future chapters! Caitriona
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