| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 21, 2006 11:10 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Inu and Sess's changes are humorous, and rather sexy. I'l looking forward to Sess's change during a more intimate moment with Rin.
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Reviewed By: leilachan *nsi* On: June 16, 2006 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry so late... again. i luv'd it. i swear, better and better every chap. lol, yash's 'i'll think about it.' ha, so typical. you are really outdoing yourself with this fic. i have submerged myself in it. want, no, need more!!! XD
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Title: *le gasp!*
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: June 14, 2006 01:53 CDT
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Penny!! Wow...you wrote the shit outta that. What a fight! I totally didn't see that arm thing coming. Then the revival of Rin, that was bloody awesome! You kept to the series while still keeping your idea clean and original. Excellent stuffs!!! Oh & I loved the end between the brothers. Yasha is such a total asshat ^_^ Good show, my girl! o.~
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Title: sAL
Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 21:35 CDT
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HOLY SHIT... wow, you left us with a good one, dude, thats some pretty low shit but well, its naraku, what did i expect. i really dont like him...anyway, sessh is has tapped into his demonic powers i see. nice. and he brought rin back, thats awesome. cant wait for the next update, ill have to actually do somthing semi-productive with the computer till then, oh well. sAL
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, I'm loving this chapter and story more and more. My poor Sessy losing his arm (I'm crying now) he bought her back to life (happy dance). I love how you have each person (demon) come into their own. Will Inuyasha help? Where did kagura go? and Where are Kikyou and Kouga? Can't wait till the next chapter. keep of the great work.
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Title: Ooooooh Fuck Me!!!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: June 08, 2006 11:05 CDT
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Penny! That shit was fucking hawt, u hear me? Oh shit. I caould actually visualize that lemon. *Blinks* I mean, he turned full demon & grew his fangs & even marked her! SQUEEEE! The stuff with grandpa was funny too. I can't wait for the transformation to be complete and we see his white hair. I'm so giddy fir that. WOOOOOT!!!!!! You never disappoint!
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Title: sAL
Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya, ok, ive FINALLY caught up on my reading, sorry its been a while, but HOLY DAMN life is one crazy ride, anyway, the story is great. i was disapointed in the begining and inu didnt have his lovely hair eyes and delicous little ears but you made me very happy to see that they are coming about in a way ive never read before. very original i must say. update soon, im enjoying so far. sAL
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, you did again this was a great chapter. I really love your Inuyasha and Kagome's Lemon "We do love our demon-dog don't we. Can't wait till next chapter.
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter .... how ya gunna write thid one? ;D ttly and email me!
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Reviewed By: leilachan *still nsi* On: June 06, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah, naraku is gonna start catching on soon, probably. wonderful chappy. i liked the inu/kag part, of course, and i think it's cute how miro is so protective of sango. awww. woohoo, the way you describe sexxhy checking himself out. O.O yum : P see ya next update.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 00:12 CDT
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Yay, thanks for updating!! Great chapter! I just love this story. Hope you update again soon =)
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi* On: May 31, 2006 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry it took so long to get to ya. i was outta town. ^_^ and yes, my hubby really said that when i got pregnant. i know, *eye roll* XD lol it's good that sango told miro and things are alright. i hope that inu and sess will somehow make ammends and all. sess seems to be sincere. and, he could use the help at his business! great chap again!! i always lmao when you describe inu eating and his food flying from his mouth. bwahaha, so funny! ew
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:55 CDT
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Great story!! Really kept me engaged throughout the whole thing. Can't wait to read more!! =)
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Title: Hai!!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: May 29, 2006 03:23 CDT
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Well you've done it again, my girl!! Excellent chappie, and I love how Sessie is trying to do the right thing. I totally cracked up with the whole money exchange between Yasha & Kouga. This is turning out so sweet & I can't believe you're so many chaps along. Good for you!!! I love the note to Skye, kawaii!!!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, great chapter, Fluffy smiled (I just love it). I like the part when Kagome yells at Inuyasha to "SIT DOWN" he felt something didn't he? Question is Kagome a miko and doesn't know it? Anyways can't wait till the next chapter.
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