| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 07:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you were able to keep his idenity a secret for so long, most people would have broken down so much sooner in the story. I will look forwards to the updates. Perfect score.
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Reviewed By: Keke On: May 05, 2006 03:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story and the way you write! I can't wait to read the rest!! I want a happy ending though…
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Title: reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely forgot about the cupid myth until a few minutes ago. >< Is that where you got this idea from? Pretty good myth, though a little depressing up until the end. Hope your version ends happily as well. …That was more than a little unexpected. I mean, Naraku knowing was obvious (you mentioned that bee and an 'ominous presence' a few chapters ago), but I really didn't think you'd have Kagome just hand her shards over like that. Shippou's reaction was a little strange too. Very OOC. Even more shocking was the fact that Sesshomaru, having taken to following Inu-tachi, didn't notice Naraku lurking around (him being a hanyou, I'm assuming he wouldn't be near as adept at hiding). I'm a little disappointed in the turn the character development has taken. ._. Very sad. Well, this chapter was pretty well written… I hope things get better and Kagome's backbone grows back soon! Oh, I did think it was tame; "semi". I really like this story… Glad you updated so soon. *claps* Please continue~!!! ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: mj On: May 03, 2006 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your story. It's great, keep up the awesome work and until next time!
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000*notlogged in* On: May 03, 2006 20:09 EDT
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i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrvvvve this story!!! i hope you write again soon. this is one of my favorites!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 03, 2006 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaww...Poor Kagome. Stupid Sessh.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha_demon509 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your story is really awsome update soon!! :)
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Reviewed By: animegirl2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story I read Darknesss which was really great and now the sequeal is even better. This story plays so many different emotions. Keep up the great work also I just wrote my first fan fic I posted on this site it is called Kagome a Child of Darkness maybe you can read it and tell me what you think
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Title: ch 7
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru (not signed in) On: May 02, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_o Ummm... Hmmm... I think I'm at a loss for words. Nah! OMFG, Naraku punked her for the shards!!! Holy shit, I can't breathe. Way to run out on her Sesshy *thumbs up* good job. How very honorable of you, you jerk! *runs from his dokasso* Okay this is a kick-ass canon fic but fuck that- Sesshy needs to kick Naraku's ass! Like now. You are a GENIUS Rhiannon!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaah, so the ID is finally out in the open and how did I know that Naraku was going to use it to his advantage!? Oh my! You've got a great story going here and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Excellent, as always! ~~Ang
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondered how long it'd take for her to find out who it was. Now Naraku and his BS. With Shippo knowing and InuYasha not knowing, then throw in Naraku...this should get pretty interesting. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 02, 2006 22:31 EDT
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I guess I could say that, now couldn't I? Ohhh, you're evil. *flails* Damnit, damnit, damnit. Everything's an absolute mess. I'm so happy you continued this fic. Darkness was amazing, and this is just as amazing, and I read a lot of your other fics after these. Greatness, absolute greatness is the only way to describe it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: May 02, 2006 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww. Poor Kags. Stupid, but yet so loving, Sesshoumaru. Please update again. I truly love your story.
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Reviewed By: Sar17 On: May 01, 2006 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Took you a while but I think that I'll forgive you if you write more soon. ^-^
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (not logged in) On: April 30, 2006 14:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love it and i can't wait to read more please update soon!
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