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Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome...i love you fic...and the sequel's just as good...there's only one minor detail that really really gets to me. YOUR SLOW UPDATES. but at least ur accurate. You tell us when you'll post, and you post. thankz for that. and you have this thing for cliffhangers don'tcha? this story is sooo angsty, and so juicy, i love it sooo much, keep up the good work, and i hope your next chapter's as good as the ones before!!!
~n. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 22, 2002 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!! Loved the scene between Gohan and Vegeta-LOL. I had totally forgotten about the blackmailer and I hope Vegeta gets to him first and disintergrates him. Great chap DA, and now I'm off to FFN to see what's been posted. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Lady Hella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know whether to bow to you, strangle you, or just keep grinning at the excellentness of this fic! Your latest chapter was nothing short of fantastic, as you already know. I won't go on about it. . .
Or not. You know, not many people can pull off Chi-chi's P.O.V with any sort of character other than the old 'hit everyone with the frying pan, Gohan get back to studying' crap. I think you did real well!
And this mysterious blackmailer-dude/chick?? I won't even pretend to have suspicions about who it is, because you shock the hell out of me with every new chapter.
Anyway, you just know already that i loved the Gohan/Vegeta scene. In fact, i'm off to re-read it after i send this. You do realize that you are the master of Vegeta's P.O.V, don't you? Well done! |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: June 21, 2002 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh... Gohan's getting hammered and learning about sex... That is too funny, you have no idea. Actually I bet you do. But anyhow, marvelous chapter, as usual. You are the fanfiction genius. I kowtow to your supreme godliness. I'd say more, but instead I'm going to go re-read this chapter to make sure I got everything.
Gods, you're frickin' smart... |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ROTFLMAO*
Vegeta: @_@...
POAS: ~_^ What a weird thing...
Vegeta: @_@
POAS: I think Vegeta's stunned...
Vegeta: @_@
POAS: Wunderbar! I love your creativity... I gotta get me one of those!
Vegeta: Please don't!
POAS: *Giggles Insanely* I don't know where you get this stuff but I'm lovin' it!
Vegeta: @_@
POAS: *Still Laughing*
Vegeta: @_@
POAS: Make another face...
Vegeta: X_X
POAS: You killed him... Oh well... I'll go get another Vegeta! Til Next CHAPPIE DA!
POAS |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! You had me choking on my food with the whole 'lesson' scene! So damn funny! I think you are the first author not to show Vegeta nervous about the whole 'The Talk' thing. I love it! 'jerk off' Ha! I figured that was the little tike's problem.
So Krillin was the person Vegeta sensed outside his rooom. Well at least we know who it was now.
You know you're evil right? I sat on the computer rereading this story and From Bad to Worse waiting for your email and I actually beat it this time. Sad huh? Well I'm a sad person. This update wait wasn't so bad for me when I was reading From Bad to Worse because I found it when you were at about chapter 17 but this is literally killing me. *sigh*-JB |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off-- How strange Gohan learning about... 'the birds and ze bees' from Vegeta-- poor kid. I figure Vegeta'll give him the straight facts too. The part about him bringing in the pornography magazine was hilarious! "Know your enemy" hehehe.. so very funny.
And what happened with Krillin?
OMG! Almost forgot about the blackmailer-- what about him?... or perhaps her? Anhd who IS going to get the the blackmailer first? If anyone at all? This has GOT to be THE most complex plot ever in Fanfiction-- also considering most of the stories on FF.Net don't even really HAVE a plot-- or not much of one.. Anyways as always I give you the usual praise of a totally fantastic chapter-- very well done, very well-written and so on and so on. I'm sooo looking forward to July 5th!
goddammit, I'd better be the first reviewer, lol. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: KiKi On: June 16, 2002 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniff* no update *sniff* need to know how it ends *sniff* pleze update *sniff* |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@ So FF.net is really messed up! So I came here to give you a true blue review! ...That all rhymed... *Laughs* I am now member of MM.org; hope ya got my e-mail!
Good Chapter Like Always, Darke!
@_@ POAS $_$ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 08, 2002 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Veggie eating cat food...now that's a first! I feel so sorry for him but most of what happened to him was of his own making. I just hope that somehow he and Bulma will end up together, Great chap as always. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a chapter! You know I sat on the internet all day waiting for your little mailing list update (sad I know but true). Well once again you out did yourself. The way you mesh the angst and just the right amount of comedy into this story is simply brillant. There's no other way to say it. One of my favorite things about this story, is how the chapters alterenate in a he said/she said format. More of your genius. Well now that I've flattered you enough I guess I'll go find something mildly entertaining to do until the 21st. Oh and damn...-JB |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't Vegeta tell Bulma don't look for him?? And now he misses her...but it was all his choice. She's only doing what he asked...
Good chpater, worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok if I can't be the first reviewer at FF.Net I'll be the first here:
Shit! The blackmailer person! I completely forgot! Wait.. I'll be it's that Dorothy-bitch. Unless we are going to have a new character enter-- either that or someone I can't think of or remember. Man.. I loved this chapter. That part about him eating the cat Tuna was great-- so very very funny. Oh but it was so sad too-- so wrong the world is. (Yoda-speak ^_~) I want him to be happy! Be HAPPY!! Get back together with Bulma and Trunks, live in that huge-ass house, eat plenty, and bask in the warmth of having the gravity room back! It's not fair! I want things to be normal again! I'm going to have to take like a million anti-depressants from reading this story. The thing about kilometers was interesting-- I kept having to replace the word with "miles" in my head (me being american and all). Like I said before; FANTASTIC chapter and I cannot WAIT until the next one. ^_^
I must be first somewhere!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
after your other story, from bad to worse, i thought fics couldn't get any better, but of course, you came along again. you are truly amazing. no other fic writers could portray vegeta the way you can. im sure you must hear this a lot, but your fics are truly inspirational to those who write vegeta fanfiction. incredible! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 25, 2002 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's finally out in the open. Truths were said, questions answered, at least some of them. I just hope Veggie is found and given the medical attention that he obviously needs. At least Trunks looks like he's gonna be okay. As always, another great chapter. |
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