| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 11:56 PST
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Something's got to happen right for these two...at least for a day? I'm beginning to feel very, very sorry for Inu....LOL
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 11:41 PST
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Really beautiful chapter. You made me hurt for him, so sorry that he hurts like that, frustrated that he can't see his own worth. Happy that K doesn't pull away, but holds him close, giving him the comfort he so badly needs. Pleasure that they are growing so close, and utter hilarity at his reaction and clothes-less state. His complete lack of awareness in this area only crowned the situation. You left me with a smile, and even more eager to read more. Write, write I say!
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Reviewed By: Heather_Rose On: January 15, 2008 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing, I could not stop reading it! I can't wait until the next chapter. Please hurry and get it up soon.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 21:32 PST
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waah? is it a mating mark or something similar? heehee maybe it'll make them admit things quicker haha Buyo makes everything better!
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: January 12, 2008 23:57 PST
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Woah nelly! So Kagome now has Inuyasha's mating mark on her huh? I was worried that the fanatical houshi was actually going to separate them. And lovable Buyo,I have to admit he really stole the spotlight from my favorite pair, in your last chapter.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! Is that some form of a mateing mark that Inuyasha put on Kagome? Can't wait to read and find out!
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Reviewed By: Amadufie On: January 12, 2008 11:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's pretty well put together. leaves you in suspense and asking for more.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 17:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL... that was TOO funny with the whole "Buyo gone missing" thing (laughs). And you updated very, very fast... really happy about that. And I bet the mark is a claim...? I think thats right. Well hope you update, as sure that you will sometime by (looks at time) 10mins after soon, and keep it up. Peace... P.S that was a GOOD Whoa....
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 16:53 PST
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YES! Update, whoo! eh hum... very good. I liked that you incorperated animalistic instincts into youkai-yasha, like clasping onto her neck as the alpha. Hehe... very intreging. I hope the next chapter comes soon. *grins helplessly* I need my fix of "Silence the Fairytale".
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 14:57 PST
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Ooooo... ya just gotta tell us, even if Kagome doesn't find out for many chapters, is it an intent mark or has Kagome joined the ranks of "demon's whore"? My guess is it has something to do with their instinctive need to be closer. Although I am a little surprise that he didn't clean her wrist after it started to bleed.
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Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 14:32 PST
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No, I'm not psychic; I just have a tendency to favour Youkai Inuyasha as more animal than anything else, so it only makes sense, if you think about it. My best guess as to the bite would be a claim of some description. Ooh, just wait until he finds out what he did to the villagers... at least he didn't go savage on her like he did them. -cringe- Wonderful chapter, I suppose, given the circumstances, nice length. Keep up the great work, and I'm looking forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 14:02 PST
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So he's marked her some way. How long will it take for the purpose and reason to come to light? IY seems more than happy to ignore it, and K is too embarrassed to bring it up. I think it might be a while, unless something forces their hand. Oh the anguish of waiting to see.....
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 13:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Das it, leave us on the cliff hangin! Ah well, nothin for it but to wait. Grrr... Great chap tho. ;) Love Inu in his youkai form, hehe. Till next install, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 13:29 PST
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Marked her, did he...So now what's he going to do?
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 14:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool...story, i don;t beleive that i have ever read a story like your's......keep up the good work ~Bre~
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