| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: misfitstep [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 13:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I nearly flipped when I saw you had updated. I was so excited. I absolutely love your story and the way you write. Its very creative, original, and funny. Keep up the great work and update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: lauraelva On: January 28, 2008 18:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!!!! so amazing!! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter left me feeling so warm and tingly. I absolutely adored it, the ambiance. The fact that Inuyasha and Kagome can shut out the world and all of it's negativity and just enjoy each other's company is amazing. Nice twist on the Inuyasha-Kikyo relationship...I hope we'll see further development in that story arch especially with the increase in youkai recently ;-)
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 22:43 PST
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Ah! The plot thickens! Great update! The whole thing sounds so KAWAII!!!!!! It's very cute because of the whole couple stuff that really involves the pair. Kirara's birth is also very unexpected! Great job and keep up the good work! I loved it! The description sounds so beautiful!
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Title: I LOOOOOOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing-ness! This is so freaking cool! I need to know what happens. I am literally on the edge of my seat with my eyes wide with interest! What is the mark! When will more cutesy stuff appear! What's with all these questions!? Anyways sorry for not reviewing because I was busy studying for my first finals and I am still dying stress. This is seriously a great stress reliever along with piano! Yay great update! And once again thanks for posting such a wonderful and extremely entertaining fanfic! ^ ^;
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: January 24, 2008 09:53 PST
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It's sweet to see them becoming more domestic. And Buyo becoming a mom, that was hilarious, when did she have time to go off and canoodle? Hahaha
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you my dear have been a life saver for me , since christmas I have been been in the hospital with pregnancy complications , my husband couldnt bring me a laptop so he would print out your storys and updates for me to read so I would not go out of my mind with sheer boredom , but as of 1-18-08 my little one made her grand entrance and we are happily home now , I wish you much luck with your own pregnancy and hope to hear when your own bundle of joy and sleepless nights makes its way here
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 08:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting twist to the Kikyo story. Why do I think that Kikyo is Kagome's ancestor along with Kagome being her reincarnation. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 07:44 PST
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Hm. I don't really like this chapter all that much - it seems very passive voice. Like, you're just narrating, not actually, like, being the person, yeah? So I don't think there's that much emotion, and we as readers don't really understand the inner struggles or anything as well as we did in the previous chapters, because it feels like you're just SAYING things, not actually meaning or feeling them, as an attempt to move on to whatever's next, or an attempt to finish the story or whatever. Still, for passive voice, it's pretty okay. I hope you aren't hurrying or rushing, though. Waiting a few extra days/weeks/hours won't hurt THAT much. And, still, thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 04:03 PST
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sounds like they were getting a bit domestic. . . watch for malapropisms, when you said "Their little tyrst did not last long" a 'tryst' is a meeting of lovers, i believe you meant 'tiff' a slight or petty quarrel. dictionary[dot]com is great, easy to use and has a thesaurus. . . kokoronagomu means 'sooting to the mind' (kokoro- mind; heart; spirit, nagomu- to be softened; to calm down [Jeffrey's JapaneseEnglish Dictionary Server]). . . yasha really likes to spoil the girl, it was touching just how much and how upset he got when he thought she didn't want his gifts and when she wanted to sell anything he gave her to benefit the household. . . lovely sentiments and delightful narration. ~ ciao, ginny
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 02:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story please continue. P.S. what are you going to name your son.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. WONDERFUL chapter, funny, two day after my own birthday... lol.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 23:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh.. Fluff! I love fluff, hehe. And I must admit, I didn't see that coming with Buyo and Kirara, was cute tho. ;) And I missed the last update so I had some catching up to do, which is good anyways as I love this story. What can I say, its the romantic in me. :P Till next install, update when ya can! ;) Oh, Hi baby! *waves to baby* ;)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 23:13 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha & kagome are getting by just fine... inuyasha is really sweet for buying kagome those gifts and for letting her do whatever on her birthday... and cute that buyo had kirara... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Nice update!
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 21:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, Kags and Inuyasha fluff scene. And Buyo is a mom? Kool! Good update!
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