| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:11 PST
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Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:10 PST
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JUst b ecause i didn't review for the earlier chapters.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this fic for a while. Sorry for not reviwig earlier. I could never seem to find it until now. I love how you it so that we can what Inuyasha is thinking r feeling. Keep up the good work Please update soon .
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Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 13:10 PST
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N'aw. Nothin's worse than that feeling of being abandoned; poor Inuyasha. This spells trouble for them! :O Sucks to be them right now. Um, also, wouldn't the village Miko recognise the Mark for what it is? I know that humans don't take kindly to those who associate with youkai, much less hanyou. If you go along with this, plus the attitude of the men that YouakiInuyasha killed, they're in for a full-fledged riot. I wouldn't be surprised if they believed that he forced Kagome to mate with him, or put her under some kind of spell, and tried to chase him out of the village. But, then again, that all depends on if the Miko recognises the Mark or not. I suppose another forseeable event would be if the Miko asked Kagome about the nature of their relationship, and disclosed the meaning of the mark... causing a major confusion-hurt-betrayl-anger cycle followed by several days of the cold shoulder. Who knows? Well, obviously you do, but that's besides the point. XD Anywho, I've gotten really off topic, and I shall be awaiting the next installment with unbridled enthusiasm! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 13:06 PST
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Dang. Once again you leave me breathless, speechless, and filled with the need to tell Inu it will all be better later. Hope. Crossing fingers.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:51 PST
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Just a thought, but doing the math... assuming that Kagome's mom was the second child born to Kikyou, she would have been 34 when she had Kagome. That seems really old for the time frame (she'd be even older if she was the first-born). If say Kikyou was Kagome's great grandmother, from the lineage of the first-born child, then everyone could be about 18 when their child was born. Which based on ch19 is 3 years after courting age, so that isn't as creepy as it might sound. *shrugs meekly, slightly embarrassed* Sorry I tend to fixate on weird things in other peoples stories.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 15:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Finally, in one version of his life, Inuyasha realizes that Kagome is awesome and Kikyo was not ment for him! Hahahaha...... that was weird, anyway, please keep up the updates.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 15:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice way to bring in the Kikyo/Inuyasha relationship without having to actually resurrect Kikyo. I also liked how Kirara was brought into the story. Are Miroku and Sango going to make appearances sometime? I don't mind the slow build-up because Kagome had to grow up and Inuyasha has to realize: 1) that she has grown up and 2) that he as a hanyou is worthy of being her mate. It is taking the original 500+ chapters and he still hasn't realized it I think we can wait a few more for you to have him realize it. :-D
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 04:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful... and perfectly written. I really do think thats how Inuyasha was feeling, glad that he made the decision of not turning human in the anime and this story. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 02:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kikyo is kagome's grandmother... feel bad for inuyasha about his past... kinda sad... at least kagome understands... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: hot for ABERCROMBIE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 23:40 PST
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Wow this is a great story. I love all the fluffiness. It's so nice to read such a light and happy story every once in a while. It's very interesting how you didn't incorporate other characters into the story. I actually like it this way. It makes the story progress much faster too. You have done a fantastic job with this story. Keep up the good work! UPDATE SOON=]
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Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 20:11 PST
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Yes'm, that answers pretty much all of my questions. I don't much like the flashback, but that's only 'cause Kikyou was being a bit cold. I think it has better makings to it than the canon did. I think it rings much truer to the resurected Kikyou than most fanfictions, too. She isn't, in canon, out to kill everyone; a lot of people take her 'villany' over the top and make her the supreme evil. I think you've got it right here when you say the issue was species between them, and I don't doubt that she would have stayed with him had he used the jewel; I really think she had every intention of marrying him. I also believe that she didn't think she was being selfish (even though it kinda was; but, like you said, he wanted to do it -- he even said "I had no doubts. I wanted that life!" at one point too... *comes back to topic*) -- I think she saw it as mutually beneficial. But, then again, this is Kikyou we're talking about; she's always struck me as some sort of enigma. I enjoyed the revelation, though it left me a bit '...eh...'-ish. It gives an insight into the mind of our ever-lovable hanyou. ;) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 19:39 PST
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too bad it didn't happen like that in the canon version, then there would have been none of the angst about him going to see her for news of naraku. . . . interesting background story. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 17:53 PST
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*pouts* So short! *mumbles childishly and incoherently* *notices audience* Um... well, I guess Inuyasha has a certain preference in women, seeing as he keeps falling for ones in the same family. *gwaggles eyeborws* What a coincidence. So... just to be sure, cause this was an errant thought, Inu didnt kill Kags mother right? Cause he tensed when she mentioned it... Keep up the good work, Ill be wait-ting. *smiles and waves*
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 14:59 PST
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What a sad chapter...and yet, and yet, I feel the tendrils of hope.....
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