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| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Eeep!!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 17:22 PDT
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I'd be screaming, too! Good update and I'm glad you're finding your muse with this story.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...cliff hanger indeed. Somehow, though, I suspect that Kagome will make it out of that alive. After all, if Sesshoumaru truly wanted to kill her, he would have done so. He wants Inuyasha to rush in while she is still alive, so that Inuyasha can witness his failure, so that he can witness Kagome witnessing his failure, so that she will die knowing that he was powerless to save her, etc., etc., etc. However, such desires are oft' times a villain's downfall. Inuyasha will save Kagome, or Kagome will save herself, if perhaps the jewel gives her miko powers a boost Sesshoumaru isn't expecting. One thing I picked up on that has me curious, when Sesshoumaru made his comment about Inuyasha choosing a human mate and Kagome asking "What do you mean?" I wonder...in these last two weeks, has Inuyasha truly not told Kagome about the mark yet? It wasn't mentioned, though I would suspect that if they've been so chummy with each other, it shouldn't have been anything that he would've remained hesitate to tell her about. Still, Sesshoumaru's whole attitude, and that "why am I not surprised" comment of disgust could have just as easily prompted a "What do you mean?" reaction for reasons other than Kagome not knowing of the mark. Maybe she just meant, what the hell is his problem with Inuyasha having a human mate! So either way you had intended that nuance to go, I'm eager to see what gets revealed and finalized in the next chapter. Also, in probably just another couple of weeks here, max, Kagome is going to start to realize that her little family might just go beyond herself, Inuyasha and their cats. At least the thought has already crossed her mind that if they keep on going like they have been, it's definitely a possibility. I'm sure they will make wonderful parents, though the reactions of the villagers are yet to be seen. Glad that little boy wasn't seriously hurt during the youkai attack. That would've really screwed with Kagome's head. It's like, hello! You did protect everyone! They would be dead if it weren't for you. (Though, if it weren't for Kagome having the jewel, the youkai would never have been there in the first place, but we won't remind her of that.) Update! Update! Update! LOL
| Title: Nooooooooooo!!!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn it woman!!! You can't just leave it there!! That is just WWWAAAAYYYY unfair!! But let's start at the beginning: If I was mated to Inuyasha (A girl can dream ne?) Kami knows that I would not leave that hut for at least a month, and THEN I would probably be just as "distracted" as Kagome was!!! >_< There is something so sexy about Inu that it just screams "DO ME!" at all times! *+*+*+ (Excuse me while I go and take ANOTHER cold shower!) *+*+*+ I am sad that Kags feels like having a child would be something to be afraid of, doesn't she know that Inuyasha will care and protect her and anyone in their little family with all his life? And she no longer can think of herself as useless! She has proven to be able to take care of herself when Inu is not around, so if you combine both strengths, NOTHING should be able to touch them! I hope that she reconsiders and sees things under a new light. *+*+*+ I have to give it to the girl, she has cojones!! To be able to walk away from an amorous Inuyasha takes guts!! (Gosh! Maybe my hormones need to be checked?) Anyway, I did expect something or someone showing up during or after her bath time. However, I never expected fluffy to be the one!! This is getting quite interesting! I am just dying to know what happens next!!! But then again, your evil ninja training has come up again and we are left at a cliffie while biting my nails down to the bone!!! HOW COULD YOU??? If you keep this up I will be forced to call upon the wrath of the Fanfiction Kamis and ask for ALL of your favorite stories to be updated and left with a gut wrenching cliffie! So be good to us and update soon before my poor fingers are left down to nubs unable to type for you!! Congratulations on 300 reviews!! Well earned and hope to see you reach 500 in no time at all!! Thank you for writing and sharing and thank you to KnittingKnots for her help throughout the story!
| Reviewed By: Tora_Tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 12:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I've been reading it for a long time, and I'm glad you've decided to start working on it again. You said in the beginning of the chapter that you were looking for ideas for fanart for the story...? I was thinking that maybe a picture of Sesshomaru, in front of a large, brilliant moon, looking positively gorgeous, would make a nice one...if it's not too much hassle. Keep up the good work! :)
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 11:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh! what a cliffie! and of course, you have me immediately hungry for more! Way to go!
| Reviewed By: misfitstep [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So totally awesome! This has been a great week for me. I moved into college and you finally updated! The newest chapters are a great read and you still have the power to keep me entertained and entranced with this story. Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: August 21, 2010 05:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 16:34 PDT
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Good story. Pity Kaede had to be the bad teacher; she would've made a good one for the older, understanding miko, but otherwise I totally love this story.
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 07:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... inuyasha and kagome are finally together... and in the end there was a hint that kagome might be pregnant too?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
| Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 05:58 PDT
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beautiful chapter, i love, can't wait for more
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 05:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA YEA YEA!!!!!!!! BACK BACK BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I second everything midcat just said, LOL, plus I would just like to add Yay! It's about damn time! Somehow, I don't think Kagome will be upset at all when Inuyasha finally confesses about the mark, and that she's actually already been his for a while now. How can she feel hurt for his previously wanting to avoid her out of some misguided ideal of right and wrong when she'd been doing the exact same thing? So okay, they're together now, they know they love each other and that they will be together forever and everything will be happy bunnies and gumdrops. Ohhhhhhh, except she's pregnant, whoops! Cliffhanger, indeed. But I am super curious how you plan on handling the reactions of everyone else in this universe. The Shikon miko carrying a hanyou's baby? Will they face reluctant acceptance or a mob wielding flaming torches? You know how Hefty Bag chants "Hefty Hefty Hefty"? Okay, I'm thinking of that melody as I say Update! Update! Update! LOL
| Title: Worth Every Second!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 00:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! What can I say? From the very beginning this was an EPIC chapter in the saga! After the long wait, our 2 favorite characters realize the readers' dream thanks to our favorite writer!! *+*+*+ I would lie if I say that it was anything less than perfect! I can admit to having me panting for a few precious moments and squirming with delight! THANK GOD FOR RAGING HORMONES!! But it was much more than that! To finally admit to each other their love was subliminal! But then... The evil writer strikes again!! Oh! The ways she improvises to torture her loyal followers!! The words she leaves us with just to toy with our minds!! There is no doubt that she has been trained by mercenaries to exploit our weakness over fanfiction and now she uses evil tactics to extract pain from us!! Ah! But I will pray for evil plot bunnies to avenge us!! Keeping her awake all night whispering things in her ear until she begs for forgiveness and runs to the keyboard to update again!! Mwahahahaha!!
| Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evil indeed! thank god they finally got together!! after 4 years of pent-up sexual frustration the author decides to release it! :D and now you have me thirsty for your next chapter as usual -__- this must be one of my favourite inuyasha stories so thank you thank you thank you for continuing it after so long:)
| Reviewed By: coykoi On: August 19, 2010 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my lemons! You returned! And what a way to come back. I am so glad I found this story again, as usual you have me captivated with every new chapter you put out.
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