| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: misfitstep
Reviewed By: misfitstep [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get so giddy when I check my email and you've posted another chapter. I haven't gotten vocal yet since I don't want to get kicked out of the dorm or have my roomie have me committed. Keep up the great work! Love this chapter and its awesomeness!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 15:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome and inuyasha are okay... good that kagome still has her baby... so they had to leave the village... seems that they have the den to go back to... sweet moments between kagome and inuyasha... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Feels like an ending, but...
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 14:34 PDT
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There's so much more of their story to tell! Not that I usually follow stories about them and their family, but you've left the adventure pretty wide open for them, so... write more if you want, don't if you don't, I guess.
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Reviewed By: loulou472 On: August 31, 2010 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loooooooooooove this fanfic. So refreshing, with all the muck that's floating around now-a-days. :)
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 06:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Showdown! Nice job on writing the fight scene. I especially liked it when Kagome gave one for the home team, but at a price. Dawn right Inuyasha's gonna transform after Fluffy does something like that, while knowing she's pregnant for God's sake!! No doubt about the broken ribs, and she probably has a slight concussion, but what about her baby?! Well she didn't get struck in the abdomen, so I'm sure it's okay, right? Right?! I hope I don't have to wait too long to find out. Your doing GRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!!!!
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Title: Great Job!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok girl. First, If you were not doing good you think we would still be here addicted to this story the way we are?? Waiting with anticipation for the next update?? Of course you are doing great!! And this chapter was no less amazing than any of the other ones!! I have to tell you that the fight scene was really well done!! Some writers tend to over describe or over do fights and it just ends up too clogged! But this was perfect! Not too long, not too short!! Just right!! I am glad that fluffy got the snot kicked out of him! And on top of that, that nasty mouth of his will learn to stay close for a while!! Well done Inu!! I really hope someone pulls out the frozen popsicle that he has stuck in his behind and teach him to treat his brother a little better!! How dare him hurt Kagome while knowing that she was with pup!! I am so glad Kags got him a little something to remember her with! I hope the burn stays with him for a very, very long time! *+*+*+ Speaking of Kagome: She was AWESOME!! That girl ROCKS!! To be able to prevent the miasma from getting to Inu was incredible!! I am so tired of seeing fights where Kagome only sits back and gets defended while Inuyasha does all the fighting! Most of the times she shoots an arrow or two and that's mostly it, but you went beyond expectations and made her a valuable part of the fight!! She was able to help defend herself and her mate to the best of her abilities and actually make a difference in the battle!! You are an incredible writer for that! (Brings out the pom poms and begins a cheer for White Luna) The only part that made my heart kind of constrict in pain was at the end of the chapter, when Shinsei found Inu holding an unconscious Kagome in his arms. It was so touching that I almost got tears to my eyes!! Poor Inu!! I really hope Shinsei can do something to help Kagome keep the baby alive!! (Snif, Snif!!) +*+*+* Now, I promise not to wish anything bad to you if you promise not to torture us, your loyal readers, your fans, and gives us some "sugah", some "luvin", some "sometin, sometin" and update for us without the nail biting cliffies that make us pull our hair and scream like banshees all over the house after ending the chapter in a heart stopping moment. *+*+*+ Wait... You mean to tell me I am the only reader who does that??? Well...What do you know!! Hehe!! I do need professional help! Maybe those hormones are to blame!! In any way, THANK YOU again for writing & sharing, and Thank you to KnittingKnots for being a great beta and helping you out with this fic!! (Most of the time we forget that Betas also are a part of the stories as well!) I look forward to your next update and remember to keep that self esteem way up!! Give yourself a pat in the back and know that you are doing a wonderful job! And we love you for it! ;)
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Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: August 30, 2010 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll try to keep it less wordy this time, LOL. Wonderful job!!! Loved the fight scene, and I especially loved how you had Kagome come into her own and burn Sesshoumaru's wrist, only to marvel at herself over the realization that she had actually injured a daiyoukai. I got a kick out of him still losing his arm; some things are just destined be, no matter what the universe. Looking forward to the next update!
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Title: You did okay, ne.
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 16:43 PDT
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Heh. Love using chopped up language when asked to. No, seriously loved the scene. I like how Sesshoumaru still lost an arm and had to come to respect Kagome somewhat, just as he does in the series. There are many good K/S fics and I hope you're directed to them. AU and canon. They're not my cuppa, as the canon couple works so well for me. Of course, if its well written, I'm usually interested. I've heard good things about Tales from the House of Moon, for example.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pai On: August 30, 2010 14:21 PDT
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Try Choices And Consequences On Dokuga.com. There Are A Lot Of Really Great Fanfictions On There Its Just For Sess and Kagome Fanfiction :) Dancing With Scissors Is Another Great One As Well As "In Death, Trust Me, As You Didnt In Life" Life On The Island At Fanfiction.net Is Another Great One Hope That Helps!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 11:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... that was some battle... both sides got hurt... hope kagome and inuyasha will be fine what will kagome being pregnant?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very cool...You rock.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: August 29, 2010 23:15 PDT
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FAINT! Well that is one cliffhanger I wasn't expecting. It never entered my mind that Sesshy boy would make an appearance in this story. You never fail to surprise me.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome and inuyasha are doing ok... so kagome has met sesshoumaru... hope inuyasha heard kagome and gets there soon... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww Man! Why'd ya have to leave it hanging like that!? Yeah, I would be screaming too if I had someone like Sesshomaru holding me by the neck. You know he's just torchering her to get Inuyasha angry. I sense a showdown! Am I right? PLeeeeeeeeese update soon!! I want to know, I want to know!
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