| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: January 22, 2008 20:21 PST
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aw they had such a nice day...and Buyo a mama? haha that's too cute and perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you almost left me speechless in this chapter... He gives her so much and she could only give him little, but I think that gift would do. I was wondering if you were going to put in Kirara and there it goes, nice. Well hope you update and keep up the work. Peace...
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 18:12 PST
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Hehe. I love babies. The're so squishy. XD *grins* Buyo had a kitten. Well what do ya know! Ve-ry clever. *cheers* And this one was longer. Huzzah! *gives worried look* Kikyo's not going to be popping her head up anywhere is she? All in all good chap. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: January 22, 2008 18:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and I really like it!!! The only problem I have is that you miss spell Tetsusaiga, that is the proper spelling what you are spelling is the name of Sesshoumaru's sword. Don't feel bad a lot of people have done it. Anyway I just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying the story. Just do me one favor and keep the stupid Kikyou bitch dead.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 17:42 PST
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ah, so that's how things worked out with Kikyou...interesting. And a neat way to work Kirara in, too...
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Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 17:40 PST
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N'aw, that was both sad and sweet. I like how you had a similar past between Inuyasha and Kikyou, but still made it different. Did he actually love her, or was she just a really good friend to him? Another question; you labeled this as Hentai -- is that coming, or is that just on the safe side about the nudity? Not that I'm hanging out for it or anything; I'm just curious. It was a good chapter, nice length, and I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 11:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad and cute at the same time, I like it. Hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 07:27 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From what I have been reading you are due soon so I want express my appreciation for all the updates you have managed recently. Next I wanted to say how great the story is and how much I have enjoyed reading it so far. I am going to check out your others stories now and add you to favorite authors so I am sure to catch whatever you have written. I know I will understand, and I am sure your other readers will too, if updating becomes harder the closer you come due and especially after the birth of your child. Good luck with that and I hope and pray for a healthy child.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 00:27 PST
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that was a kawaii chapter! :~:
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 23:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... quite mellow in the beginning but then kinda funny & sweet in the end... wonder what happens next for them... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: January 16, 2008 20:14 PST
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Lucky Kagome. She seemed to be very enthralled with the scenery. You almost made me spit jiuce all over my monitor. That scene was fun.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 19:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha, It really wasn't his fault! Either way, good update!
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Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 18:09 PST
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Aw, it started so sad, but I was giggling by the end. I really enjoyed it; I think it rang very true with canon. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 17:52 PST
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that was sweet and funny and... touching. yasha running all over the place yelling at her lecturing her while she can't keep her eyes off the little appendage dangling, bouncing as he's stomping and pacing around waving his arms. *chuckles* ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 14:02 PST
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Yes, yes, who doesnt like puppies? All baby things are cute... except insects. *staring at computer screen* Very nice chap. *pouts* But so short! And angsy! And nude! *giggles* *figets, looking at Luna pleadingly* I hope you update soon. *thinks of something* Oh, hows your bundle of baby? Have you met him/her yet?
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