| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I def ready the a/n. Hows your son? (If you don't mind me asking). I loved the chapter! I've never read anything that first made me laugh...and then made me wanna cry. And all in just a few words. Beautifully written, by the way. If it were tweaked a bit I could even see it as a really nice Inu/Kag or even Inu/Kik oneshot(pre-Kags and Naraku of course). Looking forward to the next chapter! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 16:35 PDT
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*FYI*
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 16:34 PDT
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Seeing as my first question has already been asked few times (Oh please, don't say it has ended!), I'll settle for "Hows life?" And has junior conquered any small countries yet? Also how'd the story get so sad all of a sudden? Wasn't this a warm and fluffy one for a good while? How melancholy this chapter was! FYY, I realize that is more then one question. Gomenasai! Ja!
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Reviewed By: A Name By No Other On: September 04, 2008 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't say the story has ended. It is a wonderful story and it would be too sad to see it end. This last chapter was different from the others, but the way you wrote it was amazing. It had sadness, longing, regret, and other emotions to it that made it captivating. I sure hope that you do update soon. And yes I did read your AN, so my question to you is will Inuyasha and Kagome have a happy ending (depending if the fic is not done yet, wish I hope it is not)?
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Title: I read your author notes!
Reviewed By: Orrik [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 11:38 PDT
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And for my reward, my question is thus: This isn't the end of "Silence," is it?! I shall cry if it is. You CAN'T leave their relationship so! Not to mention you totally changed writing styles in this last chapter and I find myself bereft without your usual sardonic humour. My answer to this question can easily be answered with a preceeding chapter. *hint hint* No special singling me out in an author note required. Oh! There was a typo in this last chapter. Can't remember where exactly, (sorry) but I do recall that is was somewhere towards the begining of the chapter. Keep up the fantastic work you're doing with this story and you can be sure to look forward to my comments on your art (as soon as I have time to make it over to deviant art). ~Kirro
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Reviewed By: kysha82 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 09:50 PDT
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is this the end or is kagome and inuyasha going to get together?
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 04, 2008 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I am very delighted that you updated. I really enjoy this story. Second, I feel sad for both Inuyasha and Kagome. And finally my question for you. Will Inuyasha and Kagome ever be more than what they are now, relationship wise?
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 04, 2008 07:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Jasmine now proclaim myself number one stalker of this wonderful story. I am so glad that you updated. The chapter was sad and held this yearning emotion to it. The way Inuyasha continues to stand by Kagome is beautiful. I feel sorry for Kagome, to have such a duty is a burden in itself. Now to ask any question. I could ask about the story or something else. Let's see....What is your favorite element(earth, water, wind, fire)? It is understandable that you have your hands full with the baby. And who can say no to playing a RPG. Anyway, update soon.
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Reviewed By: lilelf On: September 04, 2008 06:11 PDT
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ok so I love this story...and i don't want to know what happens cause that would ruin it, but ar kagome and inu gonna stay like they are now? or is something gonna happen so they can be together?
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 03:39 PDT
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soo sweet I'm trying to hold back tears.
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Title: Ummm... WHAT?
Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 23:58 PDT
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This is getting increasingly confusing (not to mention ridiculous); I couldn't tell half of what was going on in that last 'chapter'... if it even deserves to be CALLED a chapter. Now, I don't want to be rude or anything, but I'm just going to be honest here; you need to flesh it out. It's too short, too simple, and TOO DAMN VAGUE! If you're telling a story, tell a damn story! Don't just give vague little whispers of what MAY have happened. Ok, so it's an emotional time. Ok, so he doesn't like wooden spoons. Ok, so he doesn't get along with the old Miko. Ok, so WHAT? Honestly; give it a little more body. Maybe then I can say how much I love it.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 23:45 PDT
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Oh what a sad chapter....Is this the end? Are the two of them trapped forever in a cold evil fate? But I friended you on DA, anyway...
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: August 19, 2008 16:25 PDT
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Girlie, where are you? I think this story needs some attention. I would really like another update. Update when you can, hopefully soon.
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Reviewed By: Ashlee~Lee On: August 11, 2008 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update soon! Luv this story!
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Reviewed By: A Name By No Other On: August 11, 2008 06:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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