| "Descent" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 02:25 EDT
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this story is getting really good! i really, really, really look forward 2 reading more. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: flame_alchemist_lover101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's getting good and sad at the same time. I can't wait until the next chapter comes.
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...interesting, very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter...I don't honestly know where this is going to go from here.
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 19:09 EDT
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Thanks for updating on my birthday =) Now I'll go cry with cloverfire. have fun in Idaho
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 11:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for the quick updates lately. Great stuff! And what a nasty cliffhanger! Keep up the good (and fast) work!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 00:29 EDT
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This makes me want to cry!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! All the updates are good for making up SOME of the incredibly long amount of time between those previous updates. I can't wait for Ed to get back to central...its sad that Roy has resorted to overworking because Ed's not around. Anyway, I'll be waiting for chapter 33!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 21:35 EDT
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Another good chapter, I'm running out of things to say because I feel that I'm becoming repeative. I am still wondering what envy is up to, but you are slowly revealing it though it does feel painfully slow. Thanks for the quick update =)
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Reviewed By: flame_alchemist_lover101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is getting good so far. When is it going to be continued? I would really want to know.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 21:33 EST
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I love this fic! But i have a question. Is Al taller or shorter than Winry? I know that seems kinda dumb, but i's just curious.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus, being lazy On: March 08, 2007 16:30 EST
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Lovly. I'm really looking foward to Ed spilling his guts to Izumi.
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 16:14 EST
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I love how you have protrayed Izumi. I cannot explain it but I do love her character. It is oh so cute with Al and Winery, I will just give a little sigh and leave it at that. Once again, you've done a great job and I am most definately a fan of yours now =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 23:03 EST
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Well, first a little of "I want to hurt you" for hinting at how Ed got Al's body back without giving me anything. Also WTF is up with envy? Basically you have sucked me in and I won't be able to stop reading this till you finish it, and my grades (university student here) hate you, along with the rest of my life. I can see it now, I'll be checking every day to see if you've updated, possibly every hour on the weekends and with my life... this is going to be very hard for me. I love how you've done Al and Winery, but I think I need to stop for now, and get back to lab reports that are due/overdue. Good work
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 23:11 EST
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Arg I hate you! You still have me puzzling over what Ed gave up. Most of his life span? A life with Winry, hence his anger at Al? His attraction to girls? (which may or may not have been a bad thing to lose...) ARG! I really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 06:01 EST
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Wow, denial is in fashion again Roy! Heh, anyway, I love this fic (it's awesome) and the Roy/Ed pairing is revealed a bit more realistically than usual in this one (Ed is desperate, Roy accepts him, but Roy ahs a lot of shit he keeps hidden from everyone, the drinking the least of it all). Neh *shrugs*. Anyway, I look foward to many more chapters, please keep up the good work. Later.
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