| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, somy brother's not speaking to me right now because when I saw your update I fell out my chair and did a little dance. No joke!
Let me tell you that there are very few authors whose battle scenes I enjoy but yours...well let's just say I loved them! Bulma is such a bitch and I love it! Makes her just perfect for our equally as disgusting Veggie. Well I'm being forced off the internet so I'll leave you with: Amazing Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-JB |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 17:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please please PLEASE leave this a vegeta/bulma fic! I really really lik eit the way it is! Keep writing, it's fantastic |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I was going through all my favorite authors checking to see if I had missed any updates and do you know this is the second missed update I've found and you are only the second author I've check?! I don't know what's up with me lately.
Anyway, have I mentioned that I LOVE Bulma in this fic!! The mind games she plays are...just so...so...sexy. Her dialogue with the male characters is such a turn on and though I feel sorry for Brolli (since he has real feelings for her) it's going to make for one hell of a lemon between Vegeta and Bulma! I wonder will she take Brolli up on his challenge and begin a new assault on Radditz. She's really something else.
I really like the picture you paint of the planet. It sound so beutiful and exotic, though hot. Another example of your awesome writting style.
As for your question, though I pity Brolli, I would really like to see V/B together, but it is your story and the real choice is yours. Whatever you write you know I'll keep reading.-JB |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got me hooked ^_^, can't wait for the next chapters |
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