| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged) On: August 23, 2005 04:34 EDT
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Oh my gosh I had an inkling that Vegeta knew of her plans but she has just blatantly admitted to conspiring against the throne and he hasn't done anything or more specifically he hasn't revealed anything, I am desperate to know what he has planned especially Brolly, what exactly is he waiting for? There must be more to his scheme then making her a slave
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged) On: August 23, 2005 04:14 EDT
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What a remarkable story so far, Vegeta seems to be the victor so far in this tragic game of love but I wonder if the tables may turn later on for we have yet to hear from Brolly, and I wonder what Vegeta agreed to in order to convince Brolly to make Bulma a slave again. Vegeta's guile is so intriguing especially his ability to discern exactly what it is Bulma needs by fulfilling her unspoken dreams that she had on her home planet, dreams she felt were impossible to come true. I like the way you represent this by having Vegeta speak her native tongue, for he knows that speaking her language enables her to think of him as more of an equal instead of a dominating and colonizing force, which is the effect created when one is made to speak the saiyan language-the language of the conquerors. I am absolutely enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 16:11 EDT
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That was intense. I loved the buildup of Bulma's control about to break backdropped against the calm facades of Vegeta and Brolli. Poor thing, that meeting with Brolli really did her in! Vegeta sure knows what he's doing! I'm just so intrigued by this story. Can't wait for the next update!!
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Title: You Updated!! :)
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:01 EDT
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Oh my God, this is one of my favorite stories and I'm so happy to see that you've updated! I meant to tell you when you posted the last chapter that I was soooo happy to see an update. I was a faithful reader up until the last chapter you posted in 2003, and was checking every so often for an update but then life got the better of me and I didn't come by for a while. I was so surprised when, the last time I checked, there were TWO chapters waiting for me! And now, here's another one. :) That is great. This is such a well-told story, and even after all this time I'm so interested in what's going to happen. You really are an incredible writer. I feel terrible that I didn't leave a review last time I stopped over, considering how much I enjoy this story. I thought I had, but I see that my name does not appear in the review pages. Sorry! Anyway, your story is amazing. I just LOVE the turn of events with Vegeta taking "ownership" of Bulma and how he is using her freedom against her. Ooh. I just can't WAIT to read the new chapter but I don't have time right now :( Hopefully I will be a good reader and remember to come back this time to review (sorry). Thanks for continuing with the story!!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 07, 2005 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Surprise! I'm shocked to this story updated so soon! Will this be a pattern now, I hope so! Glad Bulma is figuring out what those two are up to. I hope Bulma remains strong and outsmarts them. You are doing a wonderful job with this story, and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again your work continues to be impressive, its almost flawless when you let them speak. Description and their actions are to the letter. I would expect nothing less though, your work before is always great.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: July 06, 2005 23:45 EDT
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awesome... I like the new chapter and that bulma is now giving in more and more to vegeta... this is a great story and I love the way your characters are all trying to play each other... the kind of story I love... great job
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: zonkiethegreat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading this story greatly, you personiphy everyone quite well and play emotions to the letter. I mainly like how you do Broly's(Or Brolli as you put him) character. I wish I could write my stories as well as you but hey I can't help that. Well this story is great and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: May 21, 2005 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you updated! There are very few good stories that are being posted. I hope Bulma will figure out what those two are up to. I hope you update soon!
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Title: wowza!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!! This story just keeps getting better and better! The suspense is mind bending!!!! I'm so happy you've updated, it was totally worth the wait, superb chapter, I'm simply blown away!!! Can't wait for the next one!!! ^__^ love, Blue Dragon
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 09:56 EDT
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have not read it yet just wanted to say BLOODY HELL YOU'RE ALIVE ALIVE :)
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 21, 2005 00:19 EDT
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of all the chapters so far that was byfar my favorite... I loved the interaction of Bulma and Vegeta, the perspective of her mind that you gave was fantastic and so well done... girl you really did a fantastic job on that chapter... I loved it
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Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 18:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! I cant wait till the next chapter comes ot! dont leave me hangin!
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: December 07, 2004 22:02 EST
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I'm not signed in but I'm a member and this is just an awesome story... I really can't wait to read more... yayness
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