| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lilunknown On: June 29, 2002 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..this fanfic is amazing..i love it..its so hard to find such a good fanfic like this..keep it up...and update asap!!!!! thank you |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story ( pleas update a little sooner next time) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 31, 2002 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. The only thing that I don't like is that Veggie sees Bulma as a f*ck bag and nothing more. For that reason I'd love for this to remain a Brolli/Bulma fic. I get the feeling that Brolli does have feelings for Bulma and I'm sure he wouldn't want to lose her to anyone. Anywho, it's your fic so you decide. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2002 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You've made me want to sleep with Brolli!!! *quickly looks around* I hope Vegeta didn't hear that.
What a Lemon!!!! It's so unfair!! Why does Bulma always get the good ones! Is it the hair? Because if that's it then I'll go by some dye right now.
Anyway, you probably guessed that I liked this chapter and am desperately awaiting the next chapter.-JB
PS. I really like your Vegeta-bow idea.
Hentai...you?...yes ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 05, 2002 03:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! that was some lemon, and the mind games that they play with each other blow me away. Great chap. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2002 04:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Is it hot in here, or is it me? Probably the latter, after B/V's little encounter. Yeah I would say those two were made for each other (much to Brolli's disgust). The fight scene was great along with the presentation of the prize. King V is so naughty (hehe) ^_^. I can't wait to see what mind games B/V play with each other. Don't take so long to update ok? |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2002 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I TOTALLY luv it!!!!!! Can't wait 4 the next chappie! Keep ^ the great work! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Bulma is sssssoooooooo OOC but it's perfect, after all she's supposed to be heartless, calculating and delights in bringing saiyan males to their knees. GO BULMA!! Veggie is already drooling...he's done ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Moly!! Is this fic a jewel or what?! Awesome first chapter. Brilliantly written. I love how you've made Bulma. It's about time someone did her some credit and not make her out like a wimpette. Brolli is her puppet and he loves it. Can't wait to see how she treats Veggie. In a way, I'm gonna feel sorry when he loses Bulma b/c for the first time I actually like Brolli. Great story. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is quite cold isn't she? Well good for her!! It's good to finally see her showing some real backbone in an A/U. For once it'll be Bulma's icy heart that needs melting. I love it!!-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like you've got another winner here (and I've got another story to read. Hooray!). I really like your new take on Brolli. This one is a lot better than the freak that was always running around screaming 'Kakarotto!' Only bad thing about this story is that since you said it is a V/B, I'm going to end up feeling sorry for Brolli. Vegeta always seems to be taking Bulma from someone. He's so mean!!! But that's why I love him ^_^! Waiting for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, somy brother's not speaking to me right now because when I saw your update I fell out my chair and did a little dance. No joke!
Let me tell you that there are very few authors whose battle scenes I enjoy but yours...well let's just say I loved them! Bulma is such a bitch and I love it! Makes her just perfect for our equally as disgusting Veggie. Well I'm being forced off the internet so I'll leave you with: Amazing Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-JB |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 17:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please please PLEASE leave this a vegeta/bulma fic! I really really lik eit the way it is! Keep writing, it's fantastic |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I was going through all my favorite authors checking to see if I had missed any updates and do you know this is the second missed update I've found and you are only the second author I've check?! I don't know what's up with me lately.
Anyway, have I mentioned that I LOVE Bulma in this fic!! The mind games she plays are...just so...so...sexy. Her dialogue with the male characters is such a turn on and though I feel sorry for Brolli (since he has real feelings for her) it's going to make for one hell of a lemon between Vegeta and Bulma! I wonder will she take Brolli up on his challenge and begin a new assault on Radditz. She's really something else.
I really like the picture you paint of the planet. It sound so beutiful and exotic, though hot. Another example of your awesome writting style.
As for your question, though I pity Brolli, I would really like to see V/B together, but it is your story and the real choice is yours. Whatever you write you know I'll keep reading.-JB |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got me hooked ^_^, can't wait for the next chapters |
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