| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kat On: October 08, 2002 14:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
You have got to keep up the good work. This is a really great story |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: October 08, 2002 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well dam if not updating makes you write that good,do your thing, hell I aint mad you!!!! Concider yourself forgiven!!!
Update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: October 08, 2002 04:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that deep down I should be upset that Vegeta just played Bulma like that but I'm really not. I find it quite funny. The way that she broke both Brolli and Radditz and actually took pleasure in the misery she caused each really pisses me off. I think it will be good to see someone take her down a notch or two. With all that being said I truly hope Vegeta gets his comeupence as well. I can't believe that he would play on her emotions like that. Oh well I guess one good turn deserves another right? I also enjoyed the scene between Vegeta and his father. Very well done. Well I'm still loving this fic to pieces. See ya next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 08, 2002 03:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I was so looking forward to this. I loved the talk, or should I say, dressing down that King Vegita had with Veggie boy. Poor Vegeta won't be able to fight Brolli, at least not yet. That was one close call Bulma had with the plasma capsule, as well as with Raditsu. It looks like he resents her, more like hates her, for what she did to him 2 years before. If it hadn't been for Vegeta walking in when he did, Kami knows what Raditsu would've done to Bulma. I just have to wonder what does Vegeta plan to do to Bulma, to "break her". I got a chill up my spine, and that's not a good sign. Great job on this one. I hope you update soon ^_^. |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 12:55 EDT
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I don't know why it took so long for me to read this fic after reading "The Way I Was Before" which is one of my favorites. But anyway... this story is fabulous! It has a great plot and I love your portrayal of Bulma's character, using her feminine wiles to exact her revenge. It's great! Even better, though, is seeing how she's going to tango with a competitive Vegeta... hmm... Look forward to the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: kodama On: October 05, 2002 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another Update onegai!!!!!!M |
Reviewed By: priscilla7 On: October 05, 2002 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!! I can't wait to read the next one!! |
Reviewed By: patateyuy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really like this one. it's not your typical b/v get together, the story line is totally different. bulma makes for a good b*tch. interesting use of brolli, there aren't many stories involving him. i just really really love this fic, just the way it flows and how bulma doesn't really care for the affections of brolli and good-ole vegeta. there's also that great mystery surrounding bulma and what exactly is going thru her head. hope you update soon, this story's great! -luv ya buh bye, chan-chan |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 02:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First things first, I am to spread the word that everyone has to relist their fics in the DBZ section so that they'll show up there. That being said...
This has to be the best night of my life! I get home from vacation and find that all four of my favorite authors (you're in that group ^_^) plus I few I really like have updated. I was just telling my brother that this has to be the sexiest fic I've ever read! I also have to give you much kudos on the way you use this new language and work it so it flows so well with the more common one. I absolutely adore this fic and can't wait to see what happens between Vegeta and Brolli. Might I add that Bulma is a complete and totally bitch and love her! Til your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Chibi On: August 07, 2002 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AhHhHhh!!!! "Requiem" is sooOoo great~! I really love your meticulous writing style and overly creative [in a good way, of course] story. Please continue to write more!!!! I REALLY can't wait to see what happens with the Brolli and Vegeta confrontation, and Bulma's reaction to it all!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 03, 2002 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! an update!!! i love it!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 03, 2002 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter! Who would've guessed that Bulma had it in her to form a resistance against the saiyans. Unfortunately, they're already aware that something is going on. The shit's gonna hit the fan when Bulma's involvement becomes clear. Looks like Veggie and Brolli are gonna duke it out over Bulma, and knowing the talent you have writing fight scenes, the next chap will definitely kick ass ^_^. Awesome!! |
Reviewed By: maiyuan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 15:37 EDT
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Hey! I love your fics and i'm so glad you've updated this one. Hopefully, you'll update it sooner!. By the way, when is the next time they are going to play? Things are heating up and i wanna know what's gonna happen next. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: July 01, 2002 14:20 EDT
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Hoo boy, Vegeta can corner me like that any time! *giggle* I wouldn't mind at all! Great great chapter! I'd leave a longer review, but I've gotta be going! |
Reviewed By: chibionna On: July 01, 2002 04:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur fic is really good, a little long for my tastes but i really like it. and im a tough critic. ur story is very original too and i really like that. i also liked ur other fic 'The way I was before' ur a very good writer and do good lemon scences, not everyone can do an exceptionally good lemon scene. ~chibionna |
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