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| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Title: ch15
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 17:25 EDT
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Yes! it seems like Bulma's gonna come through in the end, I hope she succeeds. Interesting having Raditsu's family as the deadly squad, but before I thought you mentioned that they died in the destruction of Vegetesei.
| Title: Ch 13
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 17:08 EDT
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That was such a sad chapter, especially the moment when Bulma first visited Vegeta and he was paralysed from the fumes with no recollection of who he was or whoBulm was. That short conversation was so innocent, and pure it made me think, man if they met under different circumstances, a different lifetime, But such a moment could not last as Vegeta gained his memory back and it all came crashing down. Another poignant moment was when Bulma admitted defeat to Vegeta that he had broke her, she seemed like such a different person, the Bulma in the begining of this story and the Bulma now are quite different, it just shows what she's been through. Also, I wonder what happened to Brolli.
| Title: ch 12
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 16:26 EDT
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Wow, I don't think I'd read this chapter before, I can't believe what happended my gosh, Vegeta in this chapter sent a chill down my spine, I could feel Bulma's fear, especially this line: "Something in his eyes made her stop: something she had never seen in Brolli's eyes, or even in Raditsu's. It was a promise, Bulma decided. There was a promise in his gaze that went beyond threat; it was wholly lethal in itself. He never did threaten with words, though. Only with a look - a glare of absolute contempt for her disobedience. Bulma looked away." The way you write, decribing the characters thoughts and feelings their gestures their intent (sometimes hiding their intent) is just riveting. And oh my gosh, the way it just switched in the end I did not expect that at all. What has frieza done? And how will this change the game, it seems it has taken a turn that Vegeta and Brolli did not expect. Was Bulma 2 steps ahead all this time? Or maybe underestimating frreiza was the biggest mistake Vegeta could have made.
| Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 14:45 EDT
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I'm reading this again before I start the new chapters, and biy am I loving getting sub,erged int he political intrigue and conspiracy. The way you depict Vegeta, my gosh, he has even me confused, what are his motives what does he want, and how will Brolli play into it? I have a feeling he knows more about the resistance and Bulma's involvement, but just how will this play out. This story is so exciting, I haven't read it in a while, so it's like starting afresh again. I'm still not sure if I want her to end up with Vegeta or Brolli, sometimes I think Vegeta, because he's always my faourite, but now I wonder if either of them will be with Bulma, the games they are playing are so malevolent, with so much at stake that I wonder if there is a future in store.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: ForBloodIsLife [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 10:05 EDT
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This has been a great fic! Luckily I just started reading, so I'm not as bad off as everyone else, but still! I hope to see more soon! You're a great writer! I love it!
| Title: i know
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 21:52 EDT
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i know, i suck. but i'm writing it still, i swear to god. i know it's been two years but i'll post something soon. have faith in me... lol
| Title: What
Reviewed By: StaindGT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to tell people your not going to finish! I love the story, it's my top ten but to not finish it? I am very upset.
| Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 19:17 EST
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this is an outstanding story Please continue!
| Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 20:36 EDT
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Again this story is increadble, just don't quit writing. I can live with the long updates just dont quit on us.
| Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 00:26 EDT
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Wow, I thought that was a great chapter. I really felt the emotion, especially when they were yelling about playing games and Bulma plotting against him (I think, right when he gets all of his memory back)... I thought that was very-well done. I'm also very intrigued now by this whole trust thing. How the tables have turned! For both of them, actually. Vegeta has to put his complete faith in someone he KNOWS hates him (loved that part too btw - "You'll come back for me?" I can just hear the venom in his voice) and now Bulma is possibly realizing the Saiyans are the lesser of two evils -- but how is she going to get out of this one, or will she try at all? Hmmm... I really like how you show so subtly how their opinions of each other are formed and change, like B referring to them as "men" and V admiring her technological genius. Excellent character development throughout. I even find myself wondering how Brolli is faring through all of this and what he'll think when all is said and done. Thanks for the new chapter, look forward to more! :)
| Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 01:18 EDT
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Sorry, I am way late leaving a review... That last chapter was amazing! AMAZING! I was on the edge of my seat there was SO much going on, not just on the surface but everything boiling just beneath. I actually feel a little sorry for Bulma. It seems everything is catching up with her and Vegeta is just too darn good at what he does to make her feel unsure of herself!! I love it! I was totally surprised by the whole Frieza thing, I find myself wondering why Bulma gritted her teeth before warning them, was she deciding whether or not to warn them? Or was she just steeling herself up for it, maybe she didn't really understand what was coming? I'm so intrigued to see what happens next!!
| Reviewed By: sai-yan1 On: September 30, 2005 13:59 EDT
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I really do like your story, it's wonderful! But halfway through chapter three, the saiyan words started to grate on my words as I had to look at the translations. Your work would be much more enjoyable if you decreased your use of 'saiygo'.
| Reviewed By: Mely On: September 14, 2005 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always a very well written chapter. You are spoiling us with all of these updates. I'm very excited to read the next chapter. I'm glad Vegeta will no longer be controlling Bulma for the moment. The Saiyans do have to pay for what they did. Especially the way they treated Bulma.
| Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say enough with what has already been said by everyone else. Its one of the finest stories around, nothing else needs to be said.
| Title: sensational!
Reviewed By: bluedragon (not signed in) On: September 13, 2005 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear gods, this story is so dangerously good! Just the way you display the mind's of each character is simply amazing, bravo! Can't wait to read more! ^___^ Love, BD.
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