| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: August 03, 2002 06:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter! Who would've guessed that Bulma had it in her to form a resistance against the saiyans. Unfortunately, they're already aware that something is going on. The shit's gonna hit the fan when Bulma's involvement becomes clear. Looks like Veggie and Brolli are gonna duke it out over Bulma, and knowing the talent you have writing fight scenes, the next chap will definitely kick ass ^_^. Awesome!! |
Reviewed By: maiyuan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 15:37 EDT
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Hey! I love your fics and i'm so glad you've updated this one. Hopefully, you'll update it sooner!. By the way, when is the next time they are going to play? Things are heating up and i wanna know what's gonna happen next. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: July 01, 2002 14:20 EDT
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Hoo boy, Vegeta can corner me like that any time! *giggle* I wouldn't mind at all! Great great chapter! I'd leave a longer review, but I've gotta be going! |
Reviewed By: chibionna On: July 01, 2002 04:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur fic is really good, a little long for my tastes but i really like it. and im a tough critic. ur story is very original too and i really like that. i also liked ur other fic 'The way I was before' ur a very good writer and do good lemon scences, not everyone can do an exceptionally good lemon scene. ~chibionna |
Reviewed By: Lilunknown On: June 29, 2002 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..this fanfic is amazing..i love it..its so hard to find such a good fanfic like this..keep it up...and update asap!!!!! thank you |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story ( pleas update a little sooner next time) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 31, 2002 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. The only thing that I don't like is that Veggie sees Bulma as a f*ck bag and nothing more. For that reason I'd love for this to remain a Brolli/Bulma fic. I get the feeling that Brolli does have feelings for Bulma and I'm sure he wouldn't want to lose her to anyone. Anywho, it's your fic so you decide. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2002 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You've made me want to sleep with Brolli!!! *quickly looks around* I hope Vegeta didn't hear that.
What a Lemon!!!! It's so unfair!! Why does Bulma always get the good ones! Is it the hair? Because if that's it then I'll go by some dye right now.
Anyway, you probably guessed that I liked this chapter and am desperately awaiting the next chapter.-JB
PS. I really like your Vegeta-bow idea.
Hentai...you?...yes ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 05, 2002 03:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! that was some lemon, and the mind games that they play with each other blow me away. Great chap. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2002 04:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Is it hot in here, or is it me? Probably the latter, after B/V's little encounter. Yeah I would say those two were made for each other (much to Brolli's disgust). The fight scene was great along with the presentation of the prize. King V is so naughty (hehe) ^_^. I can't wait to see what mind games B/V play with each other. Don't take so long to update ok? |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2002 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I TOTALLY luv it!!!!!! Can't wait 4 the next chappie! Keep ^ the great work! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Bulma is sssssoooooooo OOC but it's perfect, after all she's supposed to be heartless, calculating and delights in bringing saiyan males to their knees. GO BULMA!! Veggie is already drooling...he's done ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Moly!! Is this fic a jewel or what?! Awesome first chapter. Brilliantly written. I love how you've made Bulma. It's about time someone did her some credit and not make her out like a wimpette. Brolli is her puppet and he loves it. Can't wait to see how she treats Veggie. In a way, I'm gonna feel sorry when he loses Bulma b/c for the first time I actually like Brolli. Great story. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is quite cold isn't she? Well good for her!! It's good to finally see her showing some real backbone in an A/U. For once it'll be Bulma's icy heart that needs melting. I love it!!-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like you've got another winner here (and I've got another story to read. Hooray!). I really like your new take on Brolli. This one is a lot better than the freak that was always running around screaming 'Kakarotto!' Only bad thing about this story is that since you said it is a V/B, I'm going to end up feeling sorry for Brolli. Vegeta always seems to be taking Bulma from someone. He's so mean!!! But that's why I love him ^_^! Waiting for the next update.-JB |
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