| "Requiem in Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: nona On: September 03, 2004 01:30 EDT
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Wow it's been long huh? Elated to hear that this fic will be given due attention. And finally, the first lemon too hehe~ You're really keeping us on our toes right now. Brolli has lost the game already but is Veggie going to lose a little bit of his sanity too? Please please please update soooner... and i mean sooner than 1 year.
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Title: woah!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so addicted to this story! I've been reading it since you began, and I'm so happy that you've continued it! I love how you give Bulma such power, yet you still make her so soft and tender like the woman she is. And Brolli and Vegeta....oh gods, don't get me started! (drooolll!!!) Love what you're doing, can't wait for more!!!! Blue Dragon.
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Reviewed By: miaka16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! You have such a great writing style. It's so original, I've never read a fic where Bulma is so manipulative of men. I luv the conflict between her and Vegeta. Could this story please end up BV? PLEEAAAAASE? ::pout::
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy On: August 03, 2004 12:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story which clearly display the fact that if you play with fire you are going to get burned. I absolutely love Brolli in this fic and never thought i'd come across a story where i can sympathise and understand him so well. In Brolli's fight for dominance over Bulma i find my self rooting for him. Then again i can understand bulmas need to defend herself against a race who automatically made themselves an enemy the moment they destroyed her home planet. She feels she owes them no sympathies whatsoever since they never showed her any. I worry that Bulma has bit off more than she can chew for messing with Raaditz is one thing but trying to best The King and Prince of the saiya-jins aswell as the legendary not to mention Furiza is pushing it. I can't wait to see what happens next in the battle of dominance between Bulma, Brolli and Vegeta.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: astier (hiroko) On: April 01, 2004 15:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and your style, and all the other stuff that everybody else has written, but the clock is ticking, and a year's anniversary is approaching since YOUR LAST UPDATE!@!!!
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Reviewed By: *Thee Untamed* On: January 09, 2004 17:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply hate giving away all tens, but you really did earn them in your writing, I'm displeased at how slow it is to update this project. I know we all have lives, but this is to grand to lose people to due to the fact that you don't update. Ja'ne *Thee Untamed*
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Reviewed By: babyblueeyes On: October 13, 2003 13:03 EDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY AND WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I don't even know what to say. I abosolutely love this sory sooo much. It's so deep, and something I've never seen in a V/B, especially Bulma's inner workings and attitude. I can't wait until the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY KAMI, you finally updated!
I totally appreciate that this is not a mindless lemony fic *I REALLY like the story* AND that Bulma is not the meek, OOC slave girl, she's smart, has a strong personality and knows how to show her assets much like the show ^_^
I hope that updating more frequently won't be out of the question.
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear God woman, I didn't know you had updated! And what an update O_O. I think Bulma is in some major deep shit now. She pissed off Brolli into a transformation and now he and Veggie are gonna plot to get even. Scares the hell outta me what plans they may have up their sleeves. Looks like Vegeta is on to her where Freeza is concerned and I don't like her chances. Great chap Mibi and I can't wait for the next!! ^_^ Since this fic will be around for quite a while, do you think you could put me on your mailing list, if you have one that is? Here's my addy: suenami927@yahoo.com. I'd appreciate it. Thanks ^_^. |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 08, 2003 10:57 EDT
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You write with such detail and color I could feel Bulmas pain. I loved it, great chapter. christabeleve |
Reviewed By: vbfanatic On: June 03, 2003 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having sampled almost every single readable B/V fic on fanfiction.net, mm.org, and all other fan sites, I have to say that you are probably one of the best B/V writers out there. You are capable of adding immense detail and depth to your fictions - something I really enjoy since 90% of most fanfics are entirely plot driven, lemon driven or feature OOC protagonists. I really hope you eventually take time to finish this (i see that it has dragged on for more than a year) coz I think it has great potential to a B/V classic (this A/U actually reminds me a bit of Lisalu's A Glad Day). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 10:56 EDT
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Hey Mibi take whatever time you need to put up the next chap. I can wait. Besides, you shouldn't rush a great fic ^_^.
suenami927@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: April 16, 2003 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By far one of my top 5 favorite B/V fics ~ if it goes in the right direction it will for sure be up there with the B/V epics : ) Love both Bulma and Vegeta's character development. Definitely hope you'll eventually finish it up (plzzzzz?) |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 02:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I've been cheaking so often I think this is one of the best stories you've written so far.
I don't normally ask but the suspense is killing me :( |
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