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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 11:37 PDT
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nicely done
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Reviewed By: Drool On: July 15, 2006 07:05 PDT
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Holy shit! It looks like Motoko is somewhat like Yuki, she wants more Kei-lovin'! This is definitely the greatest fic evar!(a intended) Dark fics always add some of the best depth to any story, and with continuous updates like this, dark fics probably have the most flexibility since you can get insipiration from nearly anything! ^^ I love you... marry my! Unless you're a guy... that would just be weird.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 23:33 PDT
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This just gets creepier and creepier... good job.
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Reviewed By: SimmyC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:56 PDT
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Oh boy. Looks like the road to darkness is nearing an end. What will happen to Keitaro? Motoko? Yuki? Obviously Yuki likes it the S&M way but... if this continues, Keitaro might not hold back the next time. Ooooo. If that happens...
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 10:27 PDT
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Nicely dark, I like it.
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Reviewed By: DB Waflless On: July 09, 2006 18:52 PDT
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Wow I hadn't realized you wrote this until the end, kinda feel dumb as a fan of your work, this seem interesting, but I'm still waiting on the aftermath fan fic, I miss that one :(
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Reviewed By: Drool On: July 07, 2006 20:05 PDT
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So... here I am drooling... again. I can only wonder how this will play out. It's evolved from a perfect oneshot into an incredibly immersive and enthralling story. This is something I definitely want to see play out, I'm sure it'll be glorius.
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Reviewed By: denisud On: July 07, 2006 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have grave misgivngs here. Will Keitaro commit Seppiku? Or will Motoko while tailing him see how Yuki manipulates him to go crazy and maybe finds a kindaer side to him and helps him with stopping Yuki? One can only hope! I can't bare to think if he goes off on Shinobu! dennisud
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Reviewed By: Sieg_15 On: July 06, 2006 12:48 PDT
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YES! Loved the third chapter. Gotta give Keitaro props. Great story once again. It looks like it's gonna evolve to something even better.
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Reviewed By: MitoFreak On: July 06, 2006 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The scene with Motoko and Keitaro was intense. Great story so far, and its the passion in the story that makes it good, the sex scenes are good but they alone don't make a good story. So I'm glad to see you're exploring other facets of their feelings. Is Keitaro going to get counseling?
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 10:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read your other fics, but i must say that none surprised me as much as this one. i've never seen a kei/yuki pairing before, and the only other fic i saw yuki in didn't put her in a good light either. so i was surprised when that pairing jumped out at me. but, that's not what shocked me. when i read chapter 3 i was stunned. i'm obviously no stranger to the kei/mot circle, but i have never seen it portrayed in this way. i was on the edge of my seat the whole time thinking someone would stop it, as that almost always happens, but this time no one did. the outcome stunned me, surprised me, and baffled me. i don't think i've ever read something like this before and i must ask if you're a professenial romance writer. because, all jokes aside i think you've got what it takes. i'm definetly looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 09:20 PDT
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wow, didn't see that coming keep it up
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Reviewed By: JErosion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 09:13 PDT
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I think I just fractured my jaw, when it fell on the floor! Holy Shit! I did not anticipate that. And I eagerly await to read what happens next. I'm sure the fallout will be nuclear.
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Reviewed By: SimmyC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 22:52 PDT
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Hehehe. I'm sensing a few flames coming your way. ^_^ However, I liked this chapter. It does seem to send this story towards darkness, which, being a fan of darkfics... nothing wrong with that!
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Reviewed By: Judas On: July 05, 2006 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good lord! Only if Keitaro would just keep it in his pants he wouldn't lose the will to live afterward. But wow Shinobu's mom, damn didn't see that one coming. lol. Shinobu's mom got it go'in on. Can't wait for more keep it up.
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