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| "Blizzard" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: vapor22 On: September 03, 2006 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is batshit insane! i love it!
| Reviewed By: Shadowed Moon On: August 27, 2006 03:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I actually wasn't planning to leave a review. But somehow, it felt wrong not to. Minutely because of the little note you left in the last chapter, and majorly because goddamn, that was a hell of a story. It was twisted in all the wrong and right places, well, it was twisted everywhere. Honestly, it was like a beautiful, horrific train wreck, with an ending as abrupt and horrifying as the rest of the damn thing. If you're wondering why I only gave a 7 as my Overall, it's because, well... I wanted a happy ending, it's just who I am, so don't take offense to it. Oh, and I noticed the differences between your lemon style now and how it was back in "Loss and Redemption". Now, I like Loss & Redemption, but I feel that Rx7, the king of smut writing, has had a good influence in your lemon style, and I sincerely hope he still influences you in the future. As a leaving not, I do hope that the next piece I read for you will be as exquisitely done, without the whole "horrific train" wreck factor to it.
| Title: Anime fan, HP fanfic writer
Reviewed By: Mrriddler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent piece of work. Like Random/Rx7, you are definitely one of the top Love Hina/anime fanwriters out there. Ingenous, creative and filled with wonderful character interactions that make readers laugh, cry and think. The characterization of your characters were, I have to say, pretty amazing. Given how normatively insane and seemingly unrealistic their actions were, it is rather amazing how you created a cohert and rational story. I doubt if there's even a handful of authors in fandom that can pull something like this off without dulving excessively into an emo/angst fest. Kudos to you for pulling it off. Admittingly, some people might take issue with the dark, semi-gothic/emo themes and endings you have going for some of your stories; I know Rx7 got slammed, most unfairly, for his Shinobi goes psycho "horror" fic. (and dare I wonder if that specific didn't at least partly influence this story?) Personally, I don't really know what to make of the ending for this story. Unfulfilling and ironic might be words that I would use. But then, I guess it's nice that your story doesn't have a rosy fairy tale ending with protagonist living happily ever after with all his girls in the vain of classic anime romance comedies. Anyway, I'll cease my rambling. Just want to add that I do hope that you'll make available more of the results of your great talent in the future. It's always a pleasure reading one of your works. Cheers.
| Title: One of the best fics I've read!
Reviewed By: angelicdhampir2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 05:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say this is probably the deepest love hina lemon ever. I could honestly see something like this happening to Keitaro. The characterization was spot on, and every thing else was executed with such skill, I became fully immersed. It was a pleasure, reading this story.
| Reviewed By: Reinjuuken On: July 26, 2006 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply one of the best you've written. I've been reading your work for quite a while now, particularly your Kei-kunxMo-chan fics. This one is in a diferrent direction, but still a great experience. Well, it can be classified as a psychological drama, with Keitaro destroying himself and all. Can't blame his gentle nature, but still, Yuki's madness is something unexpected as well. Once again, great concept. A+++++++ ~reinjuuken@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Mercaba On: July 23, 2006 17:21 PDT
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Man Kei can't get a break can he.
| Reviewed By: AGX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 03:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was interesting... kinda feel sorry dat keitaro snapped in the end... oh... um... yeah... kinda wanted to know when u would update your fanfiction.net stories... i review as AegisX there, so i just wanna know... yeah... sorry for bothering u and gread story...
| Reviewed By: Gus Bus On: July 22, 2006 02:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fics are awesome!
| Reviewed By: MitoFreak On: July 21, 2006 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are a very talented writer and I did enjoy the story. But I have to admit that I am a little dissapointed. Just like in Ships in the Night, the story was well developed, great dialogue and scene description the story flowed well. But the problem I have with both Ships and Blizzard is that you created all this drama and conflict between Keitaro and all the residents that you never resolved, you opted for a somewhat quicker ending that never delt with it. I'm sure thats the ending you always intended, I guess I'm just wishing there was more. Keitaro never resolved his problems with the other tenants in Ships and he didn't here either he just left. Since Keitaro did do that in the Anime and the Manga there are precidents, but I just wished you could have had more interaction especially with Naru, Motoko and Shinobu. Seriously, how would they deal with Keitaro and Shinobu's mom having a sexual relationship? Anyway, good story, I just wish you'd resolve more of the conflicts in your future stories.
| Title: So you're the Rod Serling of LH, I see...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 09:05 PDT
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Life is good, then something breaks, and it all goes to hell. This one I liked. She's insane and she works in an asylum. Explains the pained look on Shinobu's dad's face in ep #2, poor bastard. See you next time, here in the Twilight Zone, Love Hina style... W.
| Reviewed By: Webdog On: July 20, 2006 23:04 PDT
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wow man... i got chills at the end. truely awsome.
| Reviewed By: Krubbsy On: July 20, 2006 02:41 PDT
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Awesome awesome awesome!!! New pairing, Keitaro going mad, what else could you want???
| Title: Another excellent work completed
Reviewed By: Fatuous One On: July 20, 2006 01:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, after having missed reading the other chapters until this point... I have to say that it was very... enthralling. I could have seen it extended in so many different, and disturbing ways, but suddenly... it ended. Perfectly, I might add. While you could have gone off into many other directions, I think that the way it ended is fitting, if disheartening. While this ending isn't as satisfying (that is to say, it isn't quite as complete feeling), I don't really think it was supposed to be. Regardless, well done, this is another bit of involving fiction that you've created.
| Reviewed By: Drool On: July 19, 2006 18:25 PDT
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The end seems a bit... abrupt I suppose, it dosen't have the same pace as the rest of the chapters I think. Regardless, that was a brilliant ending, Shinobu's Mother being called a 'resisdent angel' when she in reality is just as messed up as the people that she takes care of in the asylum, I love it. And I'm sure other reviewers will agree that we will love you forever and ever if you do more fics ^^ preferably with her ;) I love that character that you conjured up, as I'm sure others do as well.
| Title: wow.
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as others have said, i to hope that you plan to continue this story in the future. the ending was great and very dark, but left much to be desired. as i've said before i don't think i've ever read something like this before, and i highly enjoyed it.
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