| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 12:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gunnar's so sweet when he's sick!! lol I can't wait for more, so update really soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 09:51 EST
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MAMORUZEN! Ilove him more than ever now, poor, sensitive little thing. The whole story about the thing with Gunnar's ears when he was littel totally reminds me of that whole story in Chronicles where InuYasha talks about his mother's father trying to cut his ears off. They're not a weakness, Gunnar! InuYasha's a hanyou, and he even kicked your grandfather's butt! Be strong!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 01:07 EST
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This chapter was moving. It gave insight onto izzy and gunnars relationaship. Update soon and happy birthday. Incase you don't post a chapter on the day I bleieve you said it was either your brother or your husbands birthday coming soon around the end of january I remember because mine is the 27th. So happy birthday to that person as well. I love your writing sue!
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 00:29 EST
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happy early birthday!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwe! It was cute at the end!!! I really can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 23:49 EST
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I really liked that chapter. I think my favorite part was when you said that Gunnar had always known that Inuyasha had been there that night. I hope you update as soon as possible. I can't wait to see how Griffin reacts to Izzy's mother.Also, I hope you have a very enjoyable birthday! -jessie6491
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Title: Awwwwwwwwe
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, you make the best balance between tugging on someone's heartstrings and making them! Another great chapter! Also, my younger brother's birthday is the 13th too! And he'll be 13!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 18:13 EST
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Aw, Happy Early Birthday, Sue! I hope you have a very very good one!!!!! :D Aw, that was really sweet what Gunnar said about his mom! Looking forward to the one-shot. I hope Gunnar gets better soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 19:04 EST
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Great chapter!! Keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 18:18 EST
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Aw poor Griffin, it's like that scene with Toga and Sierra, only this time its a bit worse! :(. Isabelle would understand though. Hmm...I wonder how Gunnar's testing will go.
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 14:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! I can't wait to see what revelations come up next!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 11:55 EST
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OK, I'm having major Deja Vu with that whole Griffin/Melissa thing (Remember Kari and Toga?) On the other hand, at least it's making Griffin recognize the truth, and at least Izzy's OK. Now, if Alastair Gregory tries blackmailing Griffin by going "work for me or i'll tell the Taiyoukai everything you did!" ...yeah, he already knows it all. Unless there's some OTHER bad stuff that Griffin's been caught up in...
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Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what I would give to find out what Inu-Yasha's reaction would be to Belle's actions LOL
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 21:24 EST
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It's good that she's getting better and not worse, at least according to the toxicology reports that Kichi is doing. I see an argument between family members quickly coming up between Belle and Gunner when she finally recovers from her self-test. I wonder if he'll have the same basic results as Belle did when she tested it on herself. At least she wasn't trying to drive home after administering the serum to herself, that could have spell disaster sooner rather than later if she would have fallen asleep on the road. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 23:26 EST
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I like the conversation Kich has with Griffin. I also liked seeing Kich so serious, we hardly see him that way; but when we do it's always because something serious has happened. Isabelle really does take after her papa. I'm interested to see how the sample will go on Gunnar!
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