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Title: Good Job!
Reviewed By: buggy6565 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your sucha a great writer and this was another great chapter and im not one to review much but i think u accidently repeated a paragraph. Just figured i could tell you to help *this one* It took a moment for the subtleties of his words to sink in, and even when they did, she still wasn't entirely certain that she dared to understand what he'd said. It wasn't that he was against the idea of having babies, was it? He was . . . arguing over the term she'd used . . .? But he wasn't done talking, either. "I'm the . . . the dominant mate, so if we . . . i-if we had . . . those . . . they'd be cubs, like me." Great otherwise though i love how shy he is about asking her.
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories and look forward to updates from you everyday!! Thank you for the fun with Gin and Cain hearing Griffin- he is so much fun to play with. I love when other family members are included in the stories.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 12:17 EDT
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Lolllll, its wat I would've done. I was hoping he would do it that way. But I never thought he'd shake her head and ask her while she slept. Idve just slipped the ring on her finger. I hope someone asks me to marry them that way. Lol that way neither one of us has to deal with the uncomfortable moment between the question and the answer. And the awkward display of emotion afterward. Lolll I'm still cracking up. By the way, wat kindve puppies did you raise??!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yey!! school's finally over and i can catch up on P7! i feel so accomplished!! and i'm so psyched for the rest of the story! how many chapters are left? and i loved griffin's fight scene! that was what i wanted most out of this story! rawrrrr. him and his brute force. totally awesome.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 18:26 EDT
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After a long day at work, this chapter was all I needed to put me in a good mood. I hope Griffin works up the courage again soon!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 18:17 EDT
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This chapter was soooo cute! With the whole ring thing and all... I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 18:14 EDT
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LMFAO!!!! I love Attean, and I love Griffin's comments! You just keep making me laugh, that's a good thing though, because laughter is the best medicine :D!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 16:33 EDT
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Poor Pooh Bear...he needs to get over his insecurities!!! Update soon please and keep up the wonderful work! ^_^
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Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Sue. So happy to read your talent again. Thank you so much for continuing to share with us. Can't wait to read the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 14:04 EDT
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Yay! Yet more chapters! I just love the Griffin-Attean interaction. It's a wierd mix of fatherly and brotherly.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 03:54 EDT
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Well, that wasn't exactly the smoothest of introductions on Maria's part, was it? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 03:06 EDT
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Yay, they're mates!... Now to introduce him to the rest of the family… Wow, that's a little backwards, isn't it? Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: Oh Maria...
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY FOR UPDATES!! Awwwwwe.. poor Maria.. not so nice of her mate not to share important information! Oh well! Great chapter, Sueric!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 17:51 EDT
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Oh that was sad, poor Maria, thinking Isabelle is fat. Shame on Griffin and Attean lol; although that was pretty funny :D!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 15:00 EDT
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Nice to see a little more of Attean and Maria. And please say Griffin isn't ever changing that ringtone!
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