| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, Baby Belle's in some serious trouble!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 14:20 EST
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Lolllll. I lol hard @ this chapter. He told on her...to her father no less! Lmao that is just to funny. Really enjoyed this chapter. Update more frequently. P.s. I like anathema and the therone stories as well.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 10:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart goes out to your reader and her family. You did an outstanding job on this chapter. Keep up the great work. Bitty Belle no baka!! I can't believe Griffin told, but love makes you do some crazy things!!
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Title: Oh...My...GIZZARDS!!! Izzy did NOT fall asleep on Griffin NOW! Oh...**chortle**...that was PRICELESS, Sue!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sick when I got the message in my email that you updated your story, so I copied and pasted it for later reading...and I'm so glad I did! It was a little bit of everything I expected: funny, sweet, informative, tense...and I finally got to see Froofie...err...Charlie(?) again! Yay! Missed that doggie! Your story really made my day and helped me get my mind off my sickness for a while as I cried laughing @ Griffin and Izzy! Thanks for that! Made my WEEKEND! Hope your Turkey Day was fah-boo-lous and that your family is well! See you in the forum, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 18:07 EST
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Side effects: snoring, arousal, fatigue… Well, that's not too bad, considering what the serum should do. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 15:12 EST
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yay an update!!!!! that was a really good chappy! im ready for them 2 to get it on!!! he needs to show some affection towards her! i hope that griffin doesnt get mad she took the serum!!! update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:54 EST
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Well... That was very interesting... As usual, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:28 EST
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Poor Griffin! All ready to give in then denied! Kichiro is a total baka! A scent changing tablet and you don't think your mate, or family, will have a problem will it?? Has his doggie brain gone on vacation? I hope Bitty does not suffer any other ill effects of the serum. Think of all the, er, moments should could be missing with her bear if she keeps falling asleep! LOL!! Thanks for a great chapter!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 21:42 EST
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After a thoroughly crappy day (I got let go at work) I see your chapter update in my inbox... which just made my day much brighter. Thank you and I hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 18:07 EST
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Poor Griffin and his final thought, she already has gotten to him. Am I right to assume that the serum Isabelle took made or snore or was she doing that on purpose? Lol.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 16:59 EST
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'Et tu' is french for 'And you?' Not that I am saying your translation is wrong. It isnt. It's just that it also means 'and you' in french, which is what I initially translated it as when I read it. Being canadian will do that to you.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 16:06 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad that we got to see some more of Kichiro and Belle!! I wonder if Bitty testing that stuff on herself will have any side effects?! (did that make sense? lol) Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 14:05 EST
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Thank you so much for updating! LOL I was lost without your stories. Isabelle is sooo bad bothering griffin like that her hand ever so slightly rubbing an area LOL. I love Isabelle's nickname Baby belle is so cute. Great Chap as always. By the way is your family member that was in the accident okay or at least doing better?
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Title: FINALLY
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 12:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, after so long, anywho....i feel so bad for griffin.....i was gonna do it! then isabelle had to fall asleep...mebbie its the injection she put thats making her wierd.....hmm....anywho...i loved this chappie! cants wait for the next....its so cute! XD
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin. He just doesn't get a break, does he? And poor Kich. I can so see Bella-chan skitting around the room, wrinkling her nose at him. So cute! I can't wait to see where you take it from here. I'm gonna go read the new one now. Thanks for putting it up!
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