| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I can't wait till Cain shows the Australian tai-youkai whose boss!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Gavvie can't go to jail. His mate is going to loose her mind when they tell her. Nice work as always.
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Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazingly captivating, but really, what else could anyone expect from you? The strange Cain-Griffin situation is interesting, and just makes Griffin more heroic, to Isabelle especially I'm sure. I feel kinda sorry for him-not only because of his horrific memories, but because of Isabelle. She seems just like her mother, as far as her mischievousness goes. On another note, I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he gets well soon. Words can mean little coming from a bunch of people unskilled in writing (well, to speak for myself, at the very least), with you being so great with words. Just remember that you have all of our prayers. Read your first Purity, it always helps me get through hard times. ^^ I don't know how effective it might be, seeing as you kinda wrote it, but it's always worth a try. Your stories are great emotional therapy, in addition to being very entertaining and inspiring. So keep pouring out your emotions on paper (or...keyboard?), and people will continue to open up their hearts to you and your characters. I'll tell everyone I know to throw a little prayer your way. Until next time... ~Thomas Stoneking~
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it took me a half a month but I'm finished. I love them all and I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, after this one, I think you should do a Mikio or Gunner fic. Or maybe both like Kich and Gin. Anywho, keep up the great work. You're one of the author's that inspired me to write the fic I'm working on now. If it weren't for author's like you, I would have never had the courage to post a single chapter. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love how you always add alot of background info into your fics.
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Title: the best ever writer
Reviewed By: fasttimeport [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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She has lead me throught all of the stories to the point I don't want them to end. Then she blinds all them into all the stories so you don't forget the whole family. I love these stories and weoulf love to see Gunnar fall for Maddy. And Evan find his match.
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Reviewed By: tinners [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 14:46 EDT
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great chapter, as always. gavin in the best. [sorry to hear about your brother.best wishes]
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolness! i just came back from camp and im so happy u updated!....im happy isabelle is trying to help griffin....but i think kich. is right.....she is helping him alot as it is now. and thats sad...avis is dead....wow...anywho, hope u update agian soon!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!they finally found out avis is dead...wonder wut happens next???? i hope griffin doesnt get upset with isabelle when she mentions the surgery. im glad ur brother is out of the scare zone and can finally work on gettin better! update when u can! : )
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Title: yah, my first review!!!
Reviewed By: blue lolipop [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 20:19 EDT
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i just found your stories about a month ago. i found them and spent about a week and a half camped out in my room with my lap top just reading one right after another. they are amazing!!! i have to say that purity 3 was my favorite so far, but it is just so hard to choose! i can't wait to see how this ends. i wish some one would make some fan art of griffin. i just want to see how everyone else sees him. i am glad your brother is doing better. i hope things start to look up.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:56 EDT
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I bet Gavin's never really seen a dead youkai like 'that' before. It's startling to run across a dead body, even when it's not human, and realize its dead. I'm glad to hear that your brother's doing better and I wish him a full and successful recovery. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:18 EDT
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I'm glad your brother is doing better, Sue! But still take all the time you need :D. Hmm...so Gavin now knows Dr. Avis is dead. I wonder if Griffin will really go for the surgery for his scars, I don't see it happening, but you always surprise us. :D.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! So, they know Avis is dead...I wonder what they're going to do?!? The talk between Bitty and Kich was really sweet! He's a good father!! Update soon please and keep up the amazing work!! ^_^ P.S. I'm so glad that your brother is recovering!! Six months is a long time, but you rather have that, than him not being there at all!! I'll be thinking about you!!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 13:37 EDT
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I'm glad to hear that u have at least some good news. Last year around this time of year my 15 year old brother was hit by a car. He flew almost 15ft in the air. Its the scariest thing to wonder about a family member. I hope he gets better. Great chap as always
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 11:56 EDT
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Glad to hear that your brother should (eventually) be OK. Also, I loved that last thought with Gavin's youkai. is it just me, or do people's youkai go out of their way to be a pain in the ass?
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