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| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] | | Pages (60): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: marmaset [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the update! I have read almost all your stories, and enjoyed every one that I've read. I have a question about Toga being the tai-youkai. Did Sesshoumauru retire? Was this in another chapter or story and I missed it? Can't wait for the next chapter. You're the best!
| Title: Okay, am i a NERD because i'm happy i was listed firsty in mm.org reviewers? No more Pepsi for me, then...LOL!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This chapter was just what i needed! And, the club scene! HIL-friggin'-LARIOUS! A drunk Sydnie and Izzy doing karaoke! OMG! I could just SEE that! I laughed out loud in this library and half the PC lab turned to me **blush**! OOPSIE! And, poor Izzy...i just KNEW she would be still troubled over the McKinley baby. But, I knew she'd get cleared of the charges. Gunnar is getting back into my good graces, slowly but surely...I guess I didn't take into account how protective and possessive the male members of the family are. That said, plus their underlying affection for the females of the clan, it's no wonder Gunnar was so adamant about Izzy's fixation with Griffin. Wow, he really DOES care so much about her...it's so sweet (in a, sometimes overbearing, condescending, irritating way). That's the way my big brother is with me...always the protector, the 'older, stronger, wiser' sibling, that irks me to no end, when i try to remind him that i'm a grown woman and I could care less what people say to me or how men may assume wrong things of my person--EGADS, Sue! The man got his ankle twisted in a fight with some guy that talked bad about me...when i TOLD him to leave it alone. So, maybe that's why I have such strong feelings about Gunnar's 'strict guard' over Izzy. I see, now, that she has generally acquiesced to his dominate protection, as a child, and, as the story said, 'Old habits die hard'. Okay, my haert is in my shoes, right now...Alastair (HMJ!)! He's gonna sic Jeremiah on Izzy! Oh, the DRAMA!!!!!! I KNEW it was coming, but it STILL make my stomach lurch a bit. I'm all in 'Dunn, Dunn, Dunnnnnnnnnnn!' mode, right now. **repeated gulps** Damn, but Alastair reminds me of Naraku (like some friggin' reincarnation or something! shoot!)--he just SCREAMS totalitarianism (like a youkai Hitler, or something!). Well, I'm sure Griffin's gonna rise to the occassion! And, will Attean figure things out, on his own, or will Griffin tell him the WHOLE situation and get the help he needs? Oh, and another question, Sue; will Griffin ever get the surgery to fix his scars so he can have better mobility and less pain? If so, will Kich do it? I just REALLY wanna know? So, tell me? Pleaaaaaaase? **rubs hands gleefully** This is getting GOOOOOOOD, Sue! I can't WAIT for the next chappie!
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:17 EDT
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Awww, sweet. Izzy and Gunsie. Reminds me a little of the Kichiro/Gin flashbacks from Justification. I like Gunnar. I can't wait for Purity 12... i read in your teaser notes that it's Gunnar's, and i can't wait to see what kinda woman it'll be that brings the almighty Gunnar to his knees...
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! We got to see a little more into Gunnar's mind....nice!! Poor Bitty, now that the bad guys are after her, she going to have an even tougher time!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job!! Are they going to eventually work this out? And how's Griffin doing? I distinctly remeber in one of the last chapters, he youkai telling him that he's killing them. What did he mean by that, or did I read it wrong?
| Title: Bravo!!!
Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing!! You have wonderful talent! Quick question: Is Inuyasha and Kagome appearing anytime soon in this fic? Just wondering! I am a die hard fan of all of your fics.
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 17:30 EDT
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thanks for updating...i liked the format of this chapter but I cant wait for the bad gys to show up...update soon
| Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 15:33 EDT
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My God, I HAVE gotten behind, haven't I? I think I've missed the last 5 or so chapters. Whoo. Well...I don't have the time to talk/review each cahpter I missed, but I will say that I am getting more and more increasingly addicted to this piece of writing. The last chapter was...saddening! Tissues galore, I tell ya. But anywho, keep up the most wonderful writing, Sue! :)
| Title: SCORE1 for Bitty Belle and -0 for Gunnar!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd, i LOURVED me some Gunnar in Purity 5...but, he is such a "donkey", this time around! i'm so glad BB (Bitty Belle) kicked his tail left to right for me (cuz, i SO wanted to do it)! I'm listening to 'Strawberry Chips Tanaka Chigai Mix' and it SO goes with the fight scene **clenches fist like Shigure Sohma**!!!! Again, another GREAT Chappie! And I just want to say thanks for always updating so regularly--even when you're not feeling so great or have other things on your plate, you're still looking out for your fans! I only hope i have maybe HALF of your consistency when i start my fics (i'm so nervous)! chiao 4 now! P.S. with all the crap and guilt that Griffy-poo had to endure, for centuries, I REALLY hope there's no near-death experience for the shakey duo to come. **gulp**
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 09:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Gooo Bitty, kick Gunnar's ass!! (LOL) I can't wait till they meet up again, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 07:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting a little depressing. I'm almost feeling like there is no hope for these two. They don't really act like mates and well, I don't know,it's just said that Griffin Marin has to be so stubborn. And what the hell is this more? Does he understand that we all have a past, damn it, get over it.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 01:01 EDT
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Wonderful kick there Isabelle! Griffin just needs to march up to Isabelle or he's going to die of not having her and then vice versa.
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 22:28 EDT
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Was he thinking of his sister or Izzie? Either way, to a point he has sarted to think of what the similarities between the two are in his mind. He loves her, but he doesn't want anything to happen like last time, thus he doesn't. To quote the youkai spirit 'this limbo-thingy sucks.' Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: ummmm...just an overall comment on Purity 7...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 14:26 EDT
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To me, rereading some chaps, i c that Izzy is a LOT like Gin AND Kagome; inasmuch as she REALLY wants to help, is REALLY drawn to Griffin, FEELS his emotions (so he doesn't have to say a word and she "gets it"), is very self-sacrificing, and is willing to do whatever it takes to make Griffin happy. Now that i think on it, lots of the men in your fics are more physical than verbal in expressing emotions, with confliction statements and mannerisms that hide/cover (or, so the guys THINK they do), their REAL thoughts--saying that, Griffin reminds me of InuYasha (longing, stubborness, WANT to connect/REconnect, loneliness, frustration); Gavin (inadequacy issues, shyness, denial); Bas (inexperience/fear of interaction with women, insecurities, self-image issues, split loyalties--up till a certain point in the fic, neway); Cain (guilt, recrimination, the need to protect and shelter vs. fear of any tyoe of dishonor, feeling stuck); Gunnar (generally untrusting, but rather loyal to those he holds dear, hides behind a stony facade to protect himself)...it all makes for an interesting ride, every fic. i see a recurring trend in most of your fics that NEVER get old and stodgy. You're ability to breathe life and versatility and emotion and humor and depth od character keeps me coming back! GAWD, i can't wait till i get my PC! GEEZ, i HATE using the Library PCs! i look forward to your next installment! OH, quick question...were u ever planning on touching on what happened with Hank and Chelsea and a little insight into the lovelife of our beloved Ben? OHMIGAWD, Sue...puh-LEASE! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! i'll airmail you some Pocky and even try to draw you some fanart and i'll even wash your entire household's clothes for a MONTH and a HALF! so, whaddaya say?
| Title: chapter 20
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww, leave the kitty alone, Griff! lol@butt-ugly cat!
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