| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 19:25 EDT
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Dang, I was hoping he'd kiss her again lol; better luck next time. Hmm...I hope Willis fails!!!!
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Reviewed By: xfalsetruth06x [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had been eagerly anticipating the consequences of Griffin's actions on new year's and i'm just glad you got it out so quick! i guess maybe that means your finger is getting better. if not not feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 16:20 EDT
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ARRGGG!! One step forward and three steps back. Is Griffin a bear youkai or a mule youkai? He is mighty stubborn. Maybe he is just so old he is stuck in his ways.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 14:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
outstanding as always. I really love their relationship and the way you're taking your time to develope it it. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Zikore On: April 27, 2007 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love all your fics, but I have one quick question; Can Belle understand Froofie/Charlie talk -like Dammit did-, or was that a special ability of Inuyashas?
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Reviewed By: Ayame87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for those two to kiss and that chapter was definitely worth the wait! That was the sweetest moment. Keep writing such wonderful chapters.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 11:50 EDT
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They kissed they kissed it was a real kiss! Well I don't think any tongues were involved but still they kissed! AND he called her by her name. *does a happy dance for this chapter* But we all know that our loveable Pooh bear still has a long way to go. His scars are much deeper than just his skin I believe.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 21:36 EDT
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Yay, another great chapter! Griffin is coming along, AND HE KISSED HER!!!!!!^_^ I'm so happy for them. Charlie and the un-named cat are just adorabl!!!\(^~^)/
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 20:12 EDT
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Beautiful. Dancing to the music that only the soul can hear, and dancing to that same beat that two share when they truly care for each other. Personally, right now it's Toby Keith for me. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 12:27 EDT
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Amazing chapter! I loved that Griffin danced with her and finally kissed her. Please update soon!
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Title: Another "wow"
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think its physicaly possible for you to write something I won't like. This chapter was absolutely amazing, I've been waiting for this moment since the early chapters. You've kept me in a state of constantly thinking, "It's coming any page now," and yet you delivered at just the right time. By some cosmic coincidence, you posted this chapter on the day of my 2 year anniversary with my girlfriend... Great timing. Thanks so much, you're the best author ever.
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Reviewed By: Sephrenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww. *sigh* *sniff* That was lovely.
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 01:02 EDT
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AAAwwe that was so cute. you really captured the moment there I was holding on to my laptop for dear life reading this. It was really well done Bravo!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so beautiful. I love the way this story is progressing and how Griffin final is accepting what is meant to be! YAY SUERIC!!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 24, 2007 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
" . . . she leaned against him in an entirely boneless sort of way . . ." "New Year's Twister!" Naked? "I know, Griffin." These parts seem to make me feel a little extra something. I really enjoyed the ending! Your talent is shining through brightly in this chapter. Thank you for all the enjoyment you share with the rest of us, readers, and fans alike. Cynbad146
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