| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 18:34 EST
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Aren't loopholes fun? He didn't really have the chance at having a 'youth' (as far as we know), so Isabelle's giving him a taste of it now. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: fan4ever On: February 27, 2007 15:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me just say that i look forward to each chapter of avouchment and have yet to be disappointed by any of them... keep up the great work :) i just wish griffin could once and for all accept the fact that isabelle doesn't see him as a monster; he would be so much better off IMO.. but i'll leave that up to you to work out ;) p.s. i love the titles of the chapters! they fit with the plot but are just so sweet by themselves, as well
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: February 27, 2007 12:24 EST
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I will take unbetaed chapters from you any time. There was anything screaming FIX ME!!! This seems like this is going to be a long story. With as shy and subborn as Griffin is it seems like it will be more chapters before the first kiss.
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Reviewed By: jable69 On: February 26, 2007 23:51 EST
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your updates remind me of x-mas, i check my e-mail everyday for a notification like people watch the calender. then its really awesome but then its over lol, anyways keep up the good work. (guess im back to waiting till next x-mas...i mean update)
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Title: ch 28
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: February 26, 2007 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raindrops On Roses . . . hmmmm . . . intersting chapter title. It confused me a little til I thought about the chapter. A number of soft touching moments and thoughts with a beautiful setting. The men's underwear on Jilli scene gave me good laugh. Seems like they would be so big that they might be pretty airy. Then I thought again; hey, loose is comfy. I was glad to see your update. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: bringer_of_the_sun On: February 26, 2007 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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OMG! I really love your portrayal of Griffin. He's so mature and dark but at the same time adorably naive. I love the christmas pecans scene. You really take the time to develope your character and each one is so unique! Your purity series could generate its own realm of fanfiction, if you don't mind me saying. I know you have your own plans for your character and I wouldn't dream of interfering in any way, but it's so darn tempting to write a fanfiction based on your series. I
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Title: Best Fanfic Ever!!!
Reviewed By: CoyoteKeyser On: February 26, 2007 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I must say that u are by far my favorite fanfic author! Ive read every addition to the Purity series and im never dissapointed. Well back to the point of my comment. Is the prologue of this story related to Griffin's past? Is Kioshi Griffin's real name? Is he ever gonna hav a flashback or somethin like that anytime soon? Sry maybe im askin too many questions. Thx for continuing this most awesome series.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: February 26, 2007 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cute chapter. Griffin is just a big softy.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I loved Griffin's curiosity!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter as always. I love the way you described Griffin's curiosity. I had no trouble imagining it in my mind!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:25 EST
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Ahaha, I knew Griffin would open one of his presents! So, Christmas is just around the corner for them; can't wait to see what else Isabelle got Griffin for Christmas!
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Reviewed By: Rogue Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:23 EST
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Very nice Sue, as always!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 13:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sick right now, so I'll keep this short... This was great as always, Sue. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 13:00 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 17:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is wonderful!!! update soon! i can't wait to see what else happens
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