| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 09:16 EDT
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This chapter was so cute! I love it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: seme-_-uke On: April 12, 2007 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO GRIFFIN...he is such a romantic...I want to know whats in the present...please update
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice seeing them become so close, too bad that they're going to have to go through some tough times soon, which sucks. But this was great, really, it was amazing!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 18:16 EDT
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Grumpy old bear fits him lol; but in a cute way! I think Isabelle loved the holiday because she was with him lol.
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Title: Christmas
Reviewed By: FrisyPixie777 On: April 11, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a cute chapter Sue! Griffin seemed so embarresed about the gift but I knew that Isabelle would love the braclet. I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 11, 2007 17:04 EDT
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This is a very nicely written chapter. I was wondering what happened to that necklace, I'm glad Bell got to receive it. You are doing a great job at setting the stage for their burgeoning romance. It's sweet to watch how Griffin is slowing acquiescing to his feeling for Bell. Being alone for so long and feeling that you don't need nor deserve the comfort of another person is heart breaking. Giving into his feeling for Bell must be extremely difficult for him. Great job. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: kds 1222 On: April 11, 2007 16:34 EDT
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Christmas is the best! Griffin smiling = most definite heart failure. Loved it!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 15:52 EDT
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Agh now I'm impatiently waiting LOL I want to know what G made...agh!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best birthday present. :) I can't wait to see what G carved for her!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 21:01 EDT
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Sometimes I worry about Griffin, but to know that he's finally realizing that there's something there, that's special. I just hope that he realizes what that special thing is before it's too late and she has to leave back to Japan or something. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:51 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moriko-Demon On: April 05, 2007 16:46 EDT
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Griffin really is a loveable bear. Haha. I enjoy your stories so much! Keep writing, and I hope the finger is healing good. ^^ I adore Bellaniece.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I just love Belle...she's sooo funny!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! I hope your finger feels better soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 12:05 EDT
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awwww... sweet... maybe he should just carve something for her.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 03, 2007 23:08 EDT
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Very nice. Griffin is slowing admitting his feelings for Bell. Thanks for updating so soon, I didn't expect this chapter since you only have one good hand at the monent. It was a nice suprise, I hope you feel better.
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