| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: buggy6565 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter as usual!! but griffin is sooo foolish! poor isabelle!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok he killed someone or couldnt protect them and now he is trying to protect her by forcing her away? Why does this sound like a Kagome Inuyasha move? I mean dag when will they learn. You cant protect by pushing awaythe one you love. I hope Isabelle doesn't get sick like Gin did.
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Reviewed By: tinners [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
askdjl;fhdlfjasdkl;fjasd HE'S A DUMB-HEAD!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 20:50 EDT
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Damn that wasn't three steps back that was 10 miles back! What about the panic that he felt when he saw the suitcase on the bed?
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Title: Whooooa
Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I can't believe Griffin! I knew something like this was going to happen. Leave it to Griffin to feel like he doesn't deserve to be happy and hurt Isabelle in the end:( If he only would listen to Isabelle. He IS a good person, he just has to realize it himself. I hope he does soon. P.S. I hope Isabelle doesn't get sick since her mate rejected her! :looks scared:
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Reviewed By: angelyami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jaw drops* omg...but I kind of figured it was going to happen. GRIFFIN YOU FOOLISH OLD BEAR! T__T
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 13:39 EDT
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Yay! Glad to see you're alive! I hadn't seen any new chapters for ages, but i just logged on and found five. I was getting worried! And i was so right! Griffin IS Kyoshi!(is that what it was?)So what happened to Kumiko and Sango and Miroku? Miroku was the dead headman Griffin dreamed about, right? And wasn't Shippo there? Wouldn't he know Griffin/Kyoshi? And knowing you... Something important is in those boxes of Myrna's, isn't there? Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH, I can't believe he did that!! I bet he'll regret it even more soon, though! I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 10:57 EDT
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Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 10:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My...Heart...Is...Breaking!! How could he do that, and the morning after they made love. Damn it, Griffin, that was a bastardly thing to do!! Nice chappie as usual
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 09:44 EDT
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Aw man, that's just so sad, and I'm at work so I can't yell at him through the screen or else I'll be heard by the people working outside lol. The walls are a little thin! He better stop her; he better make sure she doesn't leave lol; if she does leave he should march right up to her door and beg her to come back lol.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 08:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That silly bear! He's so stubborn. Another amazing chapter that really pulled at my heart can't wait for the next. :)
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 03:58 EDT
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SO sad. I could totally feel Griffin's pain as he said those words. And Isabelle's heart break as well. I really like Myrna (sp?) Another amazing chapter! Your always the best at updates! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is just entirely too sad for me to read right now. I couldn't finish that last part. Oh, Griffin, how can you be so cruel...
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 00:16 EDT
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Oh. My. God. Can I just slap him one? Please? One good slap. *sigh* I know it'll work out in the end, because you love happy endings, but damn it stinks now. :) Can't wait until the next chapter!!
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