| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say mylady, except you definitly have a way with words. This was an absolutely brilliant chapter that had me thoroughly engrossed from the first word to the very last. I'm so glad that they're both coming into their own, finally.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 24, 2007 21:37 EDT
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That was just the sweetest thing you've written yet! I could just feel my heart racing and wondering will he kiss her? Fantastic. (I'm still hopiing to get the hiccups to try out that cure.)
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the sweetest, most heartfelt moment ever! aaahhhhhhhhh! I know I am getting waaay ahead of things, but can't you just picture the sweetest little cubs?!
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Reviewed By: angelyami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg. this was so beautiful~! i can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 20:08 EDT
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He finally kissed her...YAY!!!!!! I loved how Charlie approved of it too lol.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Griffin...that was some intense stuff...so update more of it
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Title: Purity 7
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Sueric, you truly have the most wonderous, delicate touch. The way you weave your spell of words gently brings your readers into your world, and allows us to see your vision of this story. This chapter made me relive my first kiss, and the butterflys I felt when I experienced it. I love warm fuzzys, they make me feel wonderful, and that's the feeling I get when I read your stories. thanks.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! that was sooo sweet!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sa On: April 24, 2007 18:19 EDT
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Waaa I love this chapter it was so sweet.....ohhhh
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Reviewed By: kds 1222 On: April 24, 2007 17:04 EDT
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YAAAAAY. The first official kiss!!! The scene couldn't have been more perfect. *bawls for joy*
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dancing AND a New Year's kiss!!! Loved it! Can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 20, 2007 02:29 EDT
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That was great and I loved how you wove gunner into the story.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay,this chapter was the bomb! I toatally love all your work, i'm so proud of Dr. G! I agree with Bitty, that it is just a matter of time for them. I'm worried that Gunner is going to find the truth and mess up everything that Bitty has accomplished, I really hope he doesen't. But I know that no matter what Gunner does, that Bitty is going to stay with Dr. G no matter what! Well that's enough of me babbling and i hope you update soon...Oh Yea Geusss what today is my Mommys Bithday!!!! hope ya have a great day!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter. This one brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for such a wonderful chapter on such a gloomy day!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, so the gift was a puppy!! That's so adorable!!! I absolutely love Evan sooo much. I can't believe he got Cain a present like that! (well actually I can) ~LOL~ Gin is even funnier. She has no idea about the real world! How are those two even related? Keep up the awesome work. Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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